Frost Knight SwaSan SS, Complete pg 1 - Page 18

Originally posted by: jisa

read it in one go.. !!
w8ng for next..!

Res 😊

Saku dear...for me, the standout sentence in this chapter was Sanskaar's statement to "Kavita" 😛: "I fear losing her, for I know it would hurt me far, far more than it did when I thought I lost you. You possess a few very beautiful memories--but she possesses my life". 👏 👏 👏 Standing ovation, darling.

That was it, right there. The concerned Sanskaar, showing empathy and concern for his past love--which, really, as he admits to her, asking her for her understanding and forgiveness, wasn't really love at all. One can't help but respect the man for laying down his ugly truth bare for all to see, who admits to Kavita that while he found her a warm and lovely personality, he was willing to elope with her, start a life with her mostly as an escape from the winterland, the crown he so hated. And that guilt, the thought that it was this attempt that had killed her, had haunted him for five long years, driven him to a beastly war to get her "justice" to rid himself of guilt. But finally, all that guilt itself was misplaced...and in the course of that war, he found his very life again...that portrayal was so very powerful.

Sanskaar is willing to help Kavi move on and move away, but the way he calmly told her that he is no longer her destination, nor is she his; since he belongs to another now, has submitted completely and utterly to Swara's love for him, and his love for her---again, mindblowing. 👏 👏

I also loved the steely warning Sanskaar conveyed to "Kavita" 😛: that if she dared try to harm Swara, he would forget all about their past, and treat her just as a foe, an enemy to be vanquished, to protect his love against. That's the steely Sanskaar we know. 😉

I loved the SwaSan conversation, their lovely understanding and passionate interaction which rounded off the chapter. That whole bit about Swara telling Sanskaar his punishment for isolating her in a mistaken effort to keep her safe, was lovely. 😊 So she passes sentence, that there are to be no more individual wars for him, no more secrets he holds back from her. 😉

And the way she reassured him that the mistakes he made weren't due to any tainted genes he fears he got from Chandraraj, but rather because he loves with his entire heart, mind and soul, just as Ram does---that was so lovely. And even lovelier was her promise--that she'd be right by him, holding his hand, to ensure he doesn't lose himself in either guilt or love. She would keep him sane, keep him afloat. And yeah, that bit about not being able to choose someone who is so much a part of the very fabric of your being, was wonderful too.

That's so profound in a way, because we always look at choosing things or people who are external to us. The thought of choosing something or someone so intrinsic to oneself may not even occur...because there is really no choice there, after all...

The last bit, where Swara and Sanskaar finally surrender to each other, the meeting of the wind and the flames, was poetically lovely. Very beautifully conceived and executed Saku. A pleasure to read it, truly.

I think I have rambled on and on...I started identifying parts of the chapter that stood out for me, what I particularly loved, and I think I have written a precis of about a half of the entire update! 😆

Waiting for the next chapter, dear! 🤗 🤗

Although Viji beat me to it, let me make the announcement. The 6th chapter is updated now :)

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Although Viji beat me to it, let me make the announcement. The 6th chapter is updated now :)

😆 😆 I got the PM for chap 6 and immediately grabbed pole position, I didn't realize I'd even grabbed a slot ahead of a post you wanted to make! 😉

Boy, now I feel I have got one of those Grand Slam cup kind of trophies! 😆

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

😆 😆 I got the PM for chap 6 and immediately grabbed pole position, I didn't realize I'd even grabbed a slot ahead of a post you wanted to make! 😉

Boy, now I feel I have got one of those Grand Slam cup kind of trophies! 😆

Sakura... 😊
chapter-6
awesome update and till now my favorite..
Queening the pawn(yah at the end its a pawn not a queen )
The characters are well described with chess terms 😊
king is confident and already stated his priority
love the way sanskar behaved with kavita... 😊
kavita was like this before also...(only sanskar was not matured)
His love was his swara
love the game of wind and fire...it was intense and romantic
so after the middle game waiting for the endgame(off cpz after the blissful spring) 😳
update soon dearie..
Love
simi 😊

Awesome awesome...finally swasan together till eternity...kavita turning into queen from merely being a pawn but i thought her as a queen only from the v.beginning...well v.true power doesn't suit sanskar he is more of a knight for Swara than to be called as a king being protected by his equen i suppose...👏 😆 well as usual u were awesome 😃

Originally posted by: simsen23

Sakura... 😊
chapter-6
awesome update and till now my favorite..
Queening the pawn(yah at the end its a pawn not a queen )
The characters are well described with chess terms 😊
king is confident and already stated his priority
love the way sanskar behaved with kavita... 😊
kavita was like this before also...(only sanskar was not matured)
His love was his swara
love the game of wind and fire...it was intense and romantic
so after the middle game waiting for the endgame(off cpz after the blissful spring) 😳
update soon dearie..
Love
simi 😊

Originally posted by: hrni

Awesome awesome...finally swasan together till eternity...kavita turning into queen from merely being a pawn but i thought her as a queen only from the v.beginning...well v.true power doesn't suit sanskar he is more of a knight for Swara than to be called as a king being protected by his equen i suppose...👏 😆 well as usual u were awesome 😃

PART6You know you never fail to amaze name this was brilliance... Well I am not a chess player but I used to play when I was younger so I just love blend of Mahabharata and chess in your writing because Mahabharata is one of my favourite epic...
Ohh by tye way thank God Sanskaar asks Kavita to back off but alas she pays no heed to it... So now both Vasundhara and Kavita have to face his wrath...
I thik this is the first time you mentioned Vasundhara being Chandraraj's sister... But then what exactly does she have against Sanskaar???
Will be waiting eagerly for the next update