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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Life becomes so simple when you open your mouth & speak what is on your mind! If only the show people followed such simple things! Loved it & I would love Sanskaar to actually do this on the show.

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Sooo amazingly beautiful Sapna...i always thought u an awesome writer and u hv proved it again with this OS...i knw it would be a dream to see this happen in real but reading it here is such a balm to my heart...loved the pain of both swara and sanskaar and also the way he confronts her...something not very likely in the show!!

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

You just made my entire year by writing this one. Wonderful! Thank you so much for writing this. I would love to comment longer but need to sleep now...will write more tomorrow. Res.till then.

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wow so freaking awesome👏, Lovely OS , how i wish it happens in the show.

Your OS really made my day. . The current track has lot of potential for intense scene if only Cvs had the brains .

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ZAINAB

@Miss-swasan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

You made me so happy

Mera dil ko to thora sa sakon mia

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Beautiful oneshot and beautifully written! If only something like this happens in the show. *sigh* Thanks for such a positive note over the numerous spoilers. :)
Keep writing!

-V

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Sapna xoxo

Why can I not be watching a show that gives me this instead of the crap I know will be served up?! This was perfectly what needs to happen. Of course I don't want Swara to promise Kavita anything like this but we all know our heroine and have to be realistic. But I love how you have shown exactly the Sanskaar we know and love! He would take matters into his own hands like he did here and they could talk it out and it could be so beautiful, just like it is here. Even if I know we will never get this on the show I will read this and find both comfort and joy. Thank you! Amazing work.

Lots of love X

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

jst wow!

my eyes bcm moist reading it...

the intensity-pain...awsm!

i want swasan convo jst lk ths after kavita's ntry..

kavi vi ho jst wnt it,whr swasan confront abt thr feelings...

pl pl pl cvs,see our membrs also write very very very well than u.

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Avneet kaur

@avihothi

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Awesome.

In the end I had tears in my eyes.

It will be so good if things go like this in show tooo.

Wowww.

Do pm me about your future posts.

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Ananya0711

@Ananya0711

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Wonderfully written !! Giving so much peace after watching the sbb seg . Why can't the CVs give us such nice intense scenes . Hoping to get something like this but knowing RS shows we wil have to get dissapointed .

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