SwaSan OS: Heart Speak - DELETED - Page 9

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome os

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

I really loved the swasan os:Heart speak, you beautifully portrayed the feelings of swara and sanskar. While watching the episode I really wanted to watch a scene like this. There mutual confession.The love between swara and sanskar was visible in each lines. In the sequence we can find a sanskar who was upset with swara's decision.and find a swara who was ready to sacrifice her love for his happiness. Iam really thankful to giving such an amazing os

Just read it. A very nice OS

Wow so intense , I loved it

Hi dear.
It was so amazing to read this os.
It was complely mindblowing.
I never really liked kavita's track in serial,
But I loved it in your OS.
I so wanted something like this to happen in show.
When Sanskar hold swara's hand , swara didnt need to see who it was .
She could recognize his touch .despite of not touching his hands often.
Thats their love.
Loved the way , How sanskar confronted swara that she didnt even bother to ask him before giving him back to swara.
What I loved most in ur os is Sankar's line ,
"Have I done anything to make u feel that I dont feel intensely for u? That u dont come first for me even before my happiness ?That I wouldnt stand against entire world for u?"
And lastly their confession.
Superb update .
Keep writing

Hi Sapna...
TODAY I CAME ACROSS THIS OS OF YOURS...
THANK GOD I DID...YIPEE...

THAT'S WHAT I LONGED TO SEE IN THE SHOW...
THEIR MUCH NEEDED CONFRONTATION...

IN TS I WROTE EARLIER AFTER KAVITA'S RETURN I HAD ALSO GONE FOR THE SAME THING BUT IT'S ALL TOGETHER DIFFERENT PLOT...

YOU WONDERFULLY CRAFTED IT..
I LOVED THE WAY SANSKAR REACTED HERE SENSIBLY TAKNG OUT HIS ANGUISH MAKING SWARA SEE HIS LOVE AND PAIN...

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN SAPNA[:-)]

WILL LOVE TO READ MORE FROM YOU...[:-)]