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kaku17

@kaku17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Medha my dear...Merry Christmas...hope you had a nice time..(Calcutta glitters during Christmas esp park st...😃)

it's so great to have a story from you after a long time...all I can say is that it was brilliant and I wholeheartedly agree with what you have written about "love", it always demands reciprocation even the unconditional ones...it's so true..alas it took a lot of time for swara to realise it...

you have a way with words dearie...very concise yet the message conveyed is spot on...very few have that ability...( I iwsh even I had that..😭 )...as usual your ending is always open ended, but still it did gave out a tendril of hope...loved it...

Do write more if time permits

cheers

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Nyna😃---

confused souls remain confused only...like a curvy dog's tail. yesterday I caught up with my binge of swasan scenes...and guess what..after that brilliant departure scene where she totally vows to make sanky realise her love---she again asked her husband who hates her mission completion avatar---to do what? help herwith newest jasoosi. no wonder the guy got furious. wife attention nahi deti.

She neglects the only link she has with that pagalkhana--her hubby👎🏼.I certainly do not blame sanky. anybody would be pissed if their wife doubted them on the slightest basis--and never actually make up for it...instead running behind MM bachao andolan😡
whew feel better after the rant😃. merry christmas.

Medha,

So true - Swara is simply unable to realise what it takes to convince Sanskaar - definitely not running on missions (other than Mission Swasan😃)

Bhagwan issko jaldi sadbudhi de! - it is so tough for us to watch her pathetic attempts and Sanskar rebuttals😭

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Purbi

@Purbishona

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Medhu 🤗 Extremely sorry for this late.. It is a very beautiful OS. Swara longing for Sanskar.. Sanskar fullfilled his promise.. That SwaSan FB convo was too sweet. Sanskar the cameraman!
I am feeling light now after reading it.. Before I was pissed thinking about Kavita drama.. Jani na ki kore ato kichu sojjho korbo.. Ekhan kar OS, SS gulo porei matha thik rakhte hobe..

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misaki

@misaki

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Res 🤗

I really a on a res-ing spree Work has been mental. I've told you how I don't like giving half-ass comments . Very happy that you are still writing despite the busy schedule and the madness on the show Medhu🤗

Love Ya🤗

Unres

Medhu!🤗

How wonderfully gifted you truly are ! That was such an awe - worthy OS! Seriously! I keep telling you how much I love reading them. I can't help but gush with happiness every time I read them. So wonderfully happy and they bring me so much joy! Again looovedd this one Medhu! You manage to take one really random thing in all of our lives, stuff that we probably don't even pay much attention to - connect it to our OTP and bam! Give us a story worth remembering every time we come across the "random thing"( no longer random).

The way you compared nature's way of always keeping promises to humans and then we get our Sansku (can this guy be anymore perfect?) fulfilling his promise to her. I did however expect him to of course!😃 He just had to, cz this is our Sanskaar - as we have come to understand him. He cannot just not fulfill his promise to his love! Not our Sanskaar!

Miss you re! Hope we get to read more such wonderful things from you and really sorry for being so late at replying!😭

Love you 🤗

Edited by misaki - 9 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Hi Medha,

How have you been? Hope to see you back in full action soon!

The comparison of SwaSan relationship with nature was beautifully portrayed.

Years until a pair can dance blindfolded.

Loved this line.

The graduation must have been a painful affair for Swara not knowing that one person she was scouring the crowd for was not present. I had mine just last year and the feeling is something still very fresh in my mind. So got a bit emotional in that part.

But Medha dear, thanks for that pleasant surprising ending. Lots of hugs to you for this awesome work!!

Cheers

Sharon

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dimaag

@dimaag

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

It's been a long time medha. How are you my friend 😉.
Your posts were duly missed 😃. Thanks for this one. You have selected nature to say about swasan which is perfect and unexpected. That part was the most 😭 where you said swara was missing sanskar badly. I liked your OS very much. Do write more of them and pm me too. Thanks for the pm but sorry I am a bit late actually a lot for replying. Wonderful os 👏
Lots of love
😉 N

Edited by dimaag - 9 years ago

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Something that comes from u is always beautiful sweet and incredible
I read it the Same day u had sent out pm but due to hectic week I was so busy.Uni and assignments have kept me occupied.Sorry for replying so late dear.
Sanskaar keeping his promise and swara missing him was so sweet.I have taken a break from serial and stories r giving me the much needed dose of swason
Your stories r so fresh and different and a simple scene u describe so poignantly.
thanks for pm darling

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: kaku17
Medha my dear...Merry Christmas...hope you had a nice time..(Calcutta glitters during Christmas esp park st...😃)

it's so great to have a story from you after a long time...all I can say is that it was brilliant and I wholeheartedly agree with what you have written about "love", it always demands reciprocation even the unconditional ones...it's so true..alas it took a lot of time for swara to realise it...

you have a way with words dearie...very concise yet the message conveyed is spot on...very few have that ability...( I iwsh even I had that..😭 )...as usual your ending is always open ended, but still it did gave out a tendril of hope...loved it...

Do write more if time permits

cheers

Kaku---

Yes indeed, kolkata was a delight to watch and marvel...it shone and blushed like new new brides😃

Been really busy and totally have not been keeping up with swaragini or anything really--but this was a relief after a hellish busy time.

after all i love writing--and it needs some place to peek out from😆

glad u liked it--means a lot.

love ya.

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Medha,

So true - Swara is simply unable to realise what it takes to convince Sanskaar - definitely not running on missions (other than Mission Swasan😃)
Bhagwan issko jaldi sadbudhi de! - it is so tough for us to watch her pathetic attempts and Sanskar rebuttals😭

I am very late in replying Nyna--but kya karu. today is new year and have some free time again.

Been catching up with swasan scenes again --and saw how the stupid gal in her mahantaa chakkar brought her sautan back😕 yaar ye ladki kaun hai ye toh jaan leti😡ab bhugto.

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Purbishona
Medhu 🤗 Extremely sorry for this late.. It is a very beautiful OS. Swara longing for Sanskar.. Sanskar fullfilled his promise.. That SwaSan FB convo was too sweet. Sanskar the cameraman!
I am feeling light now after reading it.. Before I was pissed thinking about Kavita drama.. Jani na ki kore ato kichu sojjho korbo.. Ekhan kar OS, SS gulo porei matha thik rakhte hobe..

Purbi🤗---

ami tor reply er reply dite aro beshi late😭

thanks re---aajkal ar dekhchi na. bhalo swasan scene nei--upor theke kavita o ferot eshe geche.

mane ei couple tar je ki hobe😡