Rectified- Part 2, The Restitution Series - Page 8

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Res. Will unres tomorrow

Unres

👏 for that lovely update!

I wrote this in the comment for part 1 but I am going to rewrite it here: I love the way you are giving a reason behind Sanskaar's every action! I also loved the intensity of the emotions between SwaSan and this is what I expected from the show but, as usual, CVs seem to have taken a vow to disappoint us!

Loved Sanskaar and Lakshya's bhaichaara, it's much much better than Swara's behenchaara. I am liking Lakshya in the show for the past week and I hope that he continues like this in the future too. His drinking seems to be helpful for something if it allows him to spy on the malkin of the house! So in parts 3 and 4, Lakshya and Sanskaar are going to work together?

Swara reminded me of Bella from New Moon what with the way she is depressed. But I guess after all she has been through she is allowed some slack! She needs hope to augment her strength to fight for her love and for her marriage and thank god for Shomi for being the knight-ess in a bengali saree! She called Sanskaar and paved the way for SwaSan's reunion.

I absolutely loved the reunion and you have now set the bar so high that any other reunion scenes that I read are going to fall below this! This brief reunion is like a pit stop for both of them - it recharged them for the battle ahead and now they can fight and they will win!

PS: Just out of curiosity, are you going to write any stories involving Kavita in the future?

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Thank you so much sweetheart!! Just replied to your comment on the other part too! So grateful!

Ah another one who prefers SanLak to swaragini drama! Lakshya is very inconsistent so you can never know how he will react in the future and as to SanLak working together in this, hmmm, you'll have to read on 😉 but whatever it is, I hope it will fit with the way things are shown emerging.

Ahh the new moon reference- yes I suppose that is right! Total dejection and hopefully here Swara was sensible and not as annoying as Bella although the show Swara I find often comparable to Bella, one of the most frustrating heroines for a number of reasons 😆. Like the "knightess in Bengali saree" description 😆.

Awww your comment about the reunion scene has made me truly chuffed! That's so nice! 😳😳.

Re your PS: I'm still fuming over the utter stupidity of the Kavita track. It makes zero sense to me:(. But I suppose knowing me, I'll torture myself and see what rubbish we are served and then try to re-tell my version as the track unfolds! Would you read?

Much love

Shru X

Originally posted by: foresight

You have portrayed Swara pain and her state beautifully. She was the care giver, the one who supported everyone including the elders - but Sanskar is the support for her. Without him by her side, feeling that he doesnt trust her, and realising her depth of feelings for him put her in a state where like sanskar, she couldnt think of going on without him. the difference was that sanskar knew what lay ahead, but she didnt.

thank god shomi finally did what she needed to, called the one person who could give her the much needed hope. and how! That entire scene of them together was beautiful. she has her hopes up, her heart is telling her something but Sanskar isn't willing to accept it at first, despite it being true. He is still not willing to show his emotions.

and then swara surprises him...with her changed outlook. it goes beyond trusting i feel...it went to a different level of understanding the other person and then they came together in an explosive kiss, because no words could have described what they felt for each other at least not the depth of it. and then the spoke and opened up with words as well.

beautiful beautiful. really enjoyed the ride. 👏 👏

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Shruti dear 🤗 Sorry Sorry Sorry for the late reply my dear..😳

I am so glad that you have written 3 more parts for us all to read after the wonderful Resolved OS..Thank youuu sooo much for that..🤗

I really loved this update my dear..

The way you described Sanskaar's pain was really beautiful..You always write with such magical words..😃😃

Lakshya was talking sense today😆 even though bechara was drunk..😛 But I love drunk Lakshya..

So may be we are going to see Bhai-Bhai bonding in the upcoming two parts..I am going to read them too after this..😊

And finally Swara...😭 My poor Shona..You described her feelings of emptiness very brilliantly Shruthi..And all thanks to Shomi that she called up to inform Sanskaar about her Shona's condition..👏

Loved all dialogues between Swasan here..They were written wonderfully.🤗
And finally he kissed Swara☺️ Loved every bit of their renconciliation..It was worth the wait ..😃

Now I am off to read the third part..See you in that thread😛

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Beautifully written 👏
Loved it

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow di...

It's wonderful os...

Just loved it...

Do continue soon...

Thanks for the pm