Rectified- Part 2, The Restitution Series - Page 7

Originally posted by: anu91

Loved it...

Well written...

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Shru...😊

Sorry for the late comment dear, I seriously wanted to write something lengthy and worthwhile so I had to write it in peace...which I found just now, with fifteen minutes to midnight

Okay, I wonder whether you have a vocabulary or an armoury...such powerful words you have. They leave mark upon the soul of the reader. And the intensity...pain...so deeply heart felt.⭐️

Last time, when I was commenting on Resolved I told you how I see Sanskar behaving exactly like this and how powerfully you conveyed his love and pain to me...now I have to say, I felt the same thing for Swara here.😊

Sanskar's love was very manly and strong and intensified...like roaring flames... Swara's love is much milder and warmer and deeper...ocean like deep...so womanly and so heartfelt. When she loves she loves with all she has...that's why she doesn't love or confess easily. Her love is too valuable...too sacred. Just so...overwhelming. Her love is her life...it was so, beautifully portrayed.⭐️⭐️

Sanskar's concern..another gem here. He had do come, no matter what his plans what his strategy was...he had to bow down. She would come first always... Their interaction...pure gold again! Too good that I don't have the perfect word for it...but I just felt the same level of relief Swara might have when he stood in her room. The golden moment!😳

Lakshya...well I can hardly trust him in the show, but he seems very human here. I feel like trusting him despite my better judgement. I just hope I won't be eating my words on this...because when it comes to Lakshya I love to hate him.

Can't wait for the third part. I know you must be busy so won't irk you by saying continue soon. I would say...I'd be waiting instead!😳😳

Loads of love🤗

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Viji yaar I was thinking about you when I wrote this... 🤗

How you me and Lakshya's hate triangle has shaped up and how both of us can't give up on hating him😆 True my dislike has already returned even before Shru replied to my changed emotions 😆

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Well how can i help commenting when u hv written so wonderfully. ..

Yes obsessed we all r...u find ur relief in writing n the rest of us in reading ur brilliant creations!

Originally posted by: muktai

Hi dear..
Glad to meet you through your work...
There r very few writers who do magic with words while sticking to the reality...
You are one of them...
The way you penned down this, the intensity of every scene left me with goosebumps especially the one when swara said jiyu ya marun? and the rest what followed..
I'm still unable to frame what should be probably good enough to tell you how much excellent this piece is...
Brothers convo where u beautifully expressed one's realisation of mistakes which led him to his present state and his efforts of making other realise that he shouldn't repeat them and later cry over his fate for his loss...

Then swasan meet.. it was just mesmerizing...
I'm so glad to be the part of reading this work of yours...u r one brilliant and realistic writer...
Will be waiting for your next work...
Thanks for pm..
Merry Christmas!

Dearest friends and readers,

Shru firstly a big 🤗 for you for writting this..
I seriously found some solace reading it after that horrible "comeback of Kavita" news..
This is our Sanskar Maheswari, whom we love so much.. Who is a smarty.. Who can't hurt Swara without any valid reason. You gave us the reason and I am really happy.. He was doing this things to keep his beloved safe..
The memory of Swara's dejected face haunting him.. His rage against Ragini and resolve that she will pay. Uff! I love this Sanskar..

That SanLak convo was breathtaking.. Laksh made Sanskar face the truth.. That "hamare gharke sab mardo me kuch ajeeb khoobiya hai"cracked me up 🤣
Swara's yearning and longing for Sanskar was beautifully portrayed.. After all she is a human not stone! Loved that Shomi Sanskar convo. This is actually needed in the show.. Finally Sanskar came and the expressions of Swara was worth watching or reading 😆
Then the mixture of disappointment and anger in her voice, u nailed it. The whole confrontation was narrated superbly. And at last Sanskar couldn't take it and kissed her. It was intense. U have attained speciality in writing those intense confrontations.. The last lines by Swara trusting him and wanted to be his strength amazed me.. Okay I don't knw what I ranted bt it became long.. 😆
Waiting for the next part eagerly.. I am enjoying the titles. What's gonna be next??

Originally posted by: Purbishona

Shru firstly a big 🤗 for you for writting this..
I seriously found some solace reading it after that horrible "comeback of Kavita" news..
This is our Sanskar Maheswari, whom we love so much.. Who is a smarty.. Who can't hurt Swara without any valid reason. You gave us the reason and I am really happy.. He was doing this things to keep his beloved safe..
The memory of Swara's dejected face haunting him.. His rage against Ragini and resolve that she will pay. Uff! I love this Sanskar..

That SanLak convo was breathtaking.. Laksh made Sanskar face the truth.. That "hamare gharke sab mardo me kuch ajeeb khoobiya hai"cracked me up 🤣
Swara's yearning and longing for Sanskar was beautifully portrayed.. After all she is a human not stone! Loved that Shomi Sanskar convo. This is actually needed in the show.. Finally Sanskar came and the expressions of Swara was worth watching or reading 😆
Then the mixture of disappointment and anger in her voice, u nailed it. The whole confrontation was narrated superbly. And at last Sanskar couldn't take it and kissed her. It was intense. U have attained speciality in writing those intense confrontations.. The last lines by Swara trusting him and wanted to be his strength amazed me.. Okay I don't knw what I ranted bt it became long.. 😆
Waiting for the next part eagerly.. I am enjoying the titles. What's gonna be next??

Res. Will unres tomorrow

Originally posted by: sarra0

Res

Will read part 1 first since i missed it and then part 2 and comment

Unres

Wohooo finally managed to read it...and wat a update, loved it...sanskaar didnt believe swara wud ever feel the same, she had said many times and after his experience with kavita and now swara he wud have thought he was not destined for happiness or love...

laksh sanskaar convo was good, its nice to c some issues being resolved between sanlak, i prefer them to wat they have tured the two sisters jodi int...and laksh has realised he went overboard and knows he doesnt want to become another ragani...funnily enough i never hated him...even when he was trying to win swara back i cud understand his POV, but good to c here he realises he did wrong as well and not just blame everyone else...and actually tries to get sanskaar to c the error of wat laksh sees as sanskaars action...acting like a true brother...

I liked shomi here, she realises that swaa has been propping her up and that she needs to do something to help her daughter...

Swara pain and desolation came across so well, her despair, her running out of hope gradually and how torn up she was at the prospect of losing sanskaar...there confrontation was great, her y shud it make any difference to u if i live or die and that was it, thats more than sanskaar can hear...talking it out wud clear many of the MU, but may not clear the insecurities, only time can do that along with actions...

Wat i loved here was that swara will leave it to sanskaar...in the show yes i wud have prefered a joint effort by the two of them, working as a team but not just swara doing everything, so here i liked that she put sanskaar first, her trust in him, her belief that he will , and he reciprocated by telling her wat was wat...