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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

My dearest nomadic babe! I have a small little confession and blame game for ya! I have my exams tomorrow and day after that. Literature and phonetics to be precise and my blood pressure is shooting through the roof for I have this nasty feeling propping in my belly that I haven't studied enough! And whenever I try to do that your OS's and that mind-blowing Angel crosses my mind and there I come undone! As much as I love you and your works: stop distracting me lady...I have my exams to pass!!

P.S. I might "steal" a few line for my literature exam tomorrow! Wish me luck!!😉

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Meself
My dearest nomadic babe! I have a small little confession and blame game for ya! I have my exams tomorrow and day after that. Literature and phonetics to be precise and my blood pressure is shooting through the roof for I have this nasty feeling propping in my belly that I haven't studied enough! And whenever I try to do that your OS's and that mind-blowing Angel crosses my mind and there I come undone! As much as I love you and your works: stop distracting me lady...I have my exams to pass!!

P.S. I might "steal" a few line for my literature exam tomorrow! Wish me luck!!😉

Erratic Network but I had to reply to this.
🤗.

This is such a beautiful message my dearest girl.❤️.
Lots and lots of love for this.

chalo won't distract you much.
For now!😆.

wishing you All the Very Berry Best for your exams. Conquer!
and yo! you can steal the entire thing babes. i take this as a wonderful compliment.

love ya.
*hugs* and best wishes.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: foresight
serenely beautiful and heartwarming 👏 👏 👏

Sapna..
🤗

Thank you so much girl.😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: simsen23
such a sweet emotional os..dear...superb... 😊

Thank you so much Simi.🤗.

love ya dear.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Tapathi
Scenic...😊fantastic work...⭐️👏

Thank you so much Tapathi😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Grrr!!
network!

Thank you so very much girls for liking like this story and your beautiful comments.
🤗.

Truly means a lot.
will reply in detail soon.

thanx again beautiful people.❤️

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1025621

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Nice os and choice of song was too good loved both song and os
do write more

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Ramya

@The-Heart

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hi Nimmi,

Heartwarming OS, Beautifully written👏

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Jamina Mohammed

@Snowflakes.

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Wow Beautiful nimmu You're the best 😳

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

I'm a sucker for happy endings and romance but I also be sadistic taking pleasure in the distance between two lovers as long as it brings realization of love in them..

So this OS had all these elements which made it a great read for me I really really loved reading it..

I felt Swara's angst pouring out from the words you wrote to describe her loneliness and her fear of losing Sanskaar to a hallucination and her pure joy on discovering he was no fragment of her imagination but her reality..

The sweet reconciliation and the slight tinge of romance ended this one shot on a happy note..

Keep writing..

Love,

Kashmi

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