OS: Story on a song. - Page 4

Originally posted by: sneharay

Its beautiful.. ❤️

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice..

Loved it..

Originally posted by: JazzyM

" I loved you a moment more, and that moment lasted an eternity" ...gosh! what a sentence...that sealed the story for me...

Intervening your story with the song...beautiful!

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Awesome work

N lovely os

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot

Nice os and choice of song was too good loved both song and os
do write more

Originally posted by: The-Heart

Hi Nimmi,

Heartwarming OS, Beautifully written👏

Originally posted by: -Jamina

Wow Beautiful nimmu You're the best 😳

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman

Beautiful OS..

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

I'm a sucker for happy endings and romance but I also be sadistic taking pleasure in the distance between two lovers as long as it brings realization of love in them..

So this OS had all these elements which made it a great read for me I really really loved reading it..

I felt Swara's angst pouring out from the words you wrote to describe her loneliness and her fear of losing Sanskaar to a hallucination and her pure joy on discovering he was no fragment of her imagination but her reality..

The sweet reconciliation and the slight tinge of romance ended this one shot on a happy note..

Keep writing..

Love,

Kashmi

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

So heartwarming and beautiful in the dark times especially Nimmi! I could feel Swara's loneliness and pain and equally the joy and peace they found in an instant when Sanskaar arrived to reclaim his love and take her back to where she doesn't have to deal with the evil that is Ragini. How I wish for such a day in the show and know I won't get it so thanks for letting me enjoy it here! Love xoxo