SwaSan Mini OS: A Beautiful Morning.... - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: samiya.059


OMG OMG OMG
I am grinning like a fool
What a refreshing story my dear
I just cannot stop reading it again again
You just provided a relief from the crap shown on tv .It was much needed.
After a long Time I read something as Romantic as it is.I hope we get some scenes like this on swason
You nail every story my friend.Wonderful absolutely wonderful.
Well swason children...hamari aankhei taras gayi hain to see some light romantic scene Kahan ki hum swason k cute cute bache dekhein..they wud b wonderful parents am sure
Viji keep writing
love
Samiya


Hey Samiya my dear friend 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton for this lovely comment. You always make my day brighter with your feedback yaar. You know it's such a privilege and pleasure for me to receive your comments.

Coming to this OS, am so glad I could make you feel happy and cheerful with this. That was my intention, to make my forum pals and myself feel better, with some tender and romantic moments between SwaSan. Right now the track between them is so full of angst and pain, just wanted to give a cheerful OS with some passionate and teasing encounters between them 😳 ☺️

I am so very glad you liked it. Yes, when they finally become parents, they will be one cute family. Their kiddos will be amazingly sweet . 😆 Unko nazar na lage. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Viji...🤗

Beautifully written...the relationship of partners, husband and wife...

For me the Sujatha scene and Sanskar doubling over Sujatha's broad hints...just made me smile like a senseless idiot! So, every real...Oh! I have been in that situation, embarrassing but felt loved too...yeah!

Personally, I don't like matching colors between husband/wife or partners. A combination to complement each other, that's what I look for but in Desi serials they tend to have both the male and female leads wearing matching color, I normally feel burlesqued. However, the way you had described the red color, zari and stuff...I somehow felt that it made sense and Sanskar looks great in Red kurta... loved the scene of 'touching' ...correcting the imaginary creases...very realistic...all of us do that and we too have been at receiving end of such 'touching'..

Thank you...off to bed...gosh jet lag... a good read yar!


Hey Jazzy...

Already replied to your lovely comment but forgot to add: hope your travel is going fine. And hope you will be put of your jet lag soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Viji dear,
It was really nice .
u made me blush so much .
I really like all ur concepts. I havent completed all ur stories but in them i liked saudade.
write more and give us the pleasure of reading

. some of my posts r not posted i could not see them so it might be that it get double posted.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aamias

Viji dear,

It was really nice .
u made me blush so much .
I really like all ur concepts. I havent completed all ur stories but in them i liked saudade.
write more and give us the pleasure of reading

. some of my posts r not posted i could not see them so it might be that it get double posted.


Hey Asmita. ...🤗 🤗

Thanks so much yaar. Very glad you liked this OS.

Thanks also for your nice words about my previous OS "Saudade".

Definitely hope to write more. I shall pm you when I do.

Cheers

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum


Medhu...missing you loads and loads yaar...🤗

How is your CFA study going on? Do yourself and us proud and get that rank dear. 🤗

Have you started with the new job as well? Or is that next week?

As for this piece, yeah well, you could take it as a sort of prequel to "Their Future Together ". Or as a sequel to the Elements Series or the Music of the Soul series. 😃 Your choice.

And hats off for the magpie tendency. 😆 I did use a variant of that line in "Their Future Together ", and now I'm getting all sentimental, that you loved it so much as to remember it. 🤗 It wasn't the exact same line though, I did vary it a bit. 😉

Love you loads, miss you and wish you all the very best 🤗


Medhu...btw any chance of you posting one of your slice of life OS's in the near or not so near future? Missing them yaar...😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awe so cute
Swara and Sanskar and their cute romance
It was so adorable
They were planning for a baby
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awe so cute

Swara and Sanskar and their cute romance
It was so adorable
They were planning for a baby
Thanks for the pm


Thanks Mansi dear...🤗

Very glad you liked it. I wanted to show some cute romance between SwaSan...and a "mission" of planning for a baby. 😊 So much of angst and pain between them on tv na...so wanted to cheer my forum pals and myself up. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aamias

Viji dear,

It was really nice .
u made me blush so much .
I really like all ur concepts. I havent completed all ur stories but in them i liked saudade.
write more and give us the pleasure of reading

. some of my posts r not posted i could not see them so it might be that it get double posted.


Hi Asmita dear...🤗

In addition to my last reply to your comment, just wanted to say again, thanks for your lovely words about my previous works also. Am glad you liked the several of them that you have read.

When time permits, do read the others and let me know what you felt. It is always a pleasure and privilege to hear from you.

You haven't double posted on any of my threads, don't worry. And even if you have, there's no issue whatsoever. 😊

Thanks for your pm too. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awe! This is just so sweet. I so loved this story. This is such a romantic and sweet piece. You have described every scene so beautifully that I can actually visualize them. 👍🏼So finally Sujata had mellowed down. Thank God!
Adarsh and Parineeta's baby shower! Wow! happy moment! Haye Sanskar is so mesmerized by his wifey's beauty and Swara too can't get enough of her hubby!!! Sanskar is so naughty but he does have a point! 😉
Dunno when, if at all, they are gonna show something happy and lighthearted in the show. More than watching the show nowadays I'm loving the stories here in the forum.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandini25

Awe! This is just so sweet. I so loved this story. This is such a romantic and sweet piece. You have described every scene so beautifully that I can actually visualize them. 👍🏼So finally Sujata had mellowed down. Thank God!

Adarsh and Parineeta's baby shower! Wow! happy moment! Haye Sanskar is so mesmerized by his wifey's beauty and Swara too can't get enough of her hubby!!! Sanskar is so naughty but he does have a point! 😉
Dunno when, if at all, they are gonna show something happy and lighthearted in the show. More than watching the show nowadays I'm loving the stories here in the forum.


Thanks Nandini 🤗🤗

Very glad to hear you liked this OS. I guess this is the first time we are interacting on a thread? If you are interested, and time permits, do go through some of my earlier completed SwaSan OS/TS in my index. The link is on my siggy, at the bottom of my posts.

Thanks

Viji

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