SwaSan Mini OS: A Beautiful Morning....

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Purbi

@Purbishona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Viji. It is such an adorable one. Totally SwaSanlicious! Very refreshing OS. I can imagine the whole scenario. Sujata demanding for grandchildren. Sweet sasuma.. That god bharai scenes were so beautiful. Very well written..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Purbishona
Viji. It is such an adorable one. Totally SwaSanlicious! Very refreshing OS. I can imagine the whole scenario. Sujata demanding for grandchildren. Sweet sasuma.. That god bharai scenes were so beautiful. Very well written..

Thanks so much Purbi. 🤗 🤗 Very glad you liked it dear. Yes, Sujju is a complete nautanki, she has started liking Swara a lot; but she won't openly declare that. 😆 And she wants to be a Dadi quickly, she will definitely not want Jiji and Bhaisa to have the pleasure of being Grandparents for too long, before she and Ram also join the Dadi/Dada club. 😆

I wanted to make this Mini shot as SwaSanlicious as possible. We need all the tender and passionate romance between SwaSan that we can get, no? 😳 ☺️

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Hi Friends

Thanks again for your lovely feedback. I have caught up individually with replies to all comments so far. I felt really touched and humbled by your amazing comments.

Lots of Love 🤗

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Nice one. ..

Thanks Arathy 😊

Very glad you liked it.

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Viji...🤗

I had come here to make a taking the mickey out post---and saw this one.😃

I must have caught on some of your magpie tendencies because i distinctly remember this line, he held his entire world within the circle of his arms...in one of your earlier OS..their lives together or some such name(nostalgia it was beautiful😭😃)is this a prequel to that?

Wonderfully well written..but ye kaunsi nayi baat hai😆.

I adored the blushing Swara..and the teasing Sanskaar.

love ya always...

medha.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: medhasankar
Viji...🤗
I had come here to make a taking the mickey out post---and saw this one.😃

I must have caught on some of your magpie tendencies because i distinctly remember this line, he held his entire world within the circle of his arms...in one of your earlier OS..their lives together or some such name(nostalgia it was beautiful😭😃)is this a prequel to that?

Wonderfully well written..but ye kaunsi nayi baat hai😆.
I adored the blushing Swara..and the teasing Sanskaar.

love ya always...
medha.

Medhu...missing you loads and loads yaar...🤗

How is your CFA study going on? Do yourself and us proud and get that rank dear. 🤗

Have you started with the new job as well? Or is that next week?

As for this piece, yeah well, you could take it as a sort of prequel to "Their Future Together ". Or as a sequel to the Elements Series or the Music of the Soul series. 😃 Your choice.

And hats off for the magpie tendency. 😆 I did use a variant of that line in "Their Future Together ", and now I'm getting all sentimental, that you loved it so much as to remember it. 🤗 It wasn't the exact same line though, I did vary it a bit. 😉

Love you loads, miss you and wish you all the very best 🤗

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Viji...🤗

Beautifully written...the relationship of partners, husband and wife...

For me the Sujatha scene and Sanskar doubling over Sujatha's broad hints...just made me smile like a senseless idiot! So, every real...Oh! I have been in that situation, embarrassing but felt loved too...yeah!

Personally, I don't like matching colors between husband/wife or partners. A combination to complement each other, that's what I look for but in Desi serials they tend to have both the male and female leads wearing matching color, I normally feel burlesqued. However, the way you had described the red color, zari and stuff...I somehow felt that it made sense and Sanskar looks great in Red kurta... loved the scene of 'touching' ...correcting the imaginary creases...very realistic...all of us do that and we too have been at receiving end of such 'touching'..

Thank you...off to bed...gosh jet lag... a good read yar!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Viji...🤗
Beautifully written...the relationship of partners, husband and wife...

For me the Sujatha scene and Sanskar doubling over Sujatha's broad hints...just made me smile like a senseless idiot! So, every real...Oh! I have been in that situation, embarrassing but felt loved too...yeah!

Personally, I don't like matching colors between husband/wife or partners. A combination to complement each other, that's what I look for but in Desi serials they tend to have both the male and female leads wearing matching color, I normally feel burlesqued. However, the way you had described the red color, zari and stuff...I somehow felt that it made sense and Sanskar looks great in Red kurta... loved the scene of 'touching' ...correcting the imaginary creases...very realistic...all of us do that and we too have been at receiving end of such 'touching'..

Thank you...off to bed...gosh jet lag... a good read yar!

Hey Jazzy. ..🤗

Thanks a ton. Yeah, I wanted to write an OS with some tender and romantic moments between SwaSan as life partners in every sense, husband and wife. ...

The Sujju scene dropping broad hints asking for a grandchild is also referenced from my life 😊 I think many of us have been in that cutely embarrassing situation with one's elders. 😆

I kind of find matching colors between a couple cute...provided, as you said, they don't take it to excess. Sanskaar did look amazing in that Diwali red kurta...and I have a sari like the one I described Swara wearing. 😉

And I loved, loved, loved that scene of Swara brushing/straightening the creases from Sanskaar's blazer. It was purely out of a desire to have some physical contact 😳, and like you said, it's something we do to our loved one, and receive too. Very romantic indeed. ☺️