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.FairyDust.

@.FairyDust.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

This is SO beautiful, I could imagine it in front of my eyes and I was grinning and blushing like an idiot the whole time. 😳

Aww this scene could fit right into the show, I want this happening! All the characters run true to their form in this OS and lol Sujata 😆

I LOVED the scene in that beginning, Sanskaar gazing at his Swara aww! ❤️

And that scene where their dresses match omg that was so relatable as swasan's outfits match very often in the show too!

Looking forward to more from you!

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Ally

@Allyson

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

A very sweet little OS Viji.

I like that there's a total break from those whom shall not be named. I too am hoping that the whole divorce thing is a contrived drama but knowing the show makers, I doubt it. I used to religiously follow saathiya at one point and fruitlessly hoped that certain things were just drama, but they unfortunately we're not. It was the bad guys winning each time. It is why I now keep my distance from shows and don't really hope for much.

I love the closeness you have shown between Swara and Sanskaar here. Been blessed with such closeness on screen seems to be a long and ardourous journey ahead

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Viji

you are a really good writer, you have tackled this so beautifully sprinting loads of love in it making it more emotional, full of love and about their next step in life. they comes across so natural and you have put in so much sync in them about what they want, because it clearly seemed like both want the new addition...even though sanskar said that he felt they were ready for both. so he wants to attend the godh barai too...fair demand i guess 😆 😆 😆

beautiful words and beautiful writing

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.
This is SO beautiful, I could imagine it in front of my eyes and I was grinning and blushing like an idiot the whole time. 😳
Aww this scene could fit right into the show, I want this happening! All the characters run true to their form in this OS and lol Sujata 😆
I LOVED the scene in that beginning, Sanskaar gazing at his Swara aww! ❤️
And that scene where their dresses match omg that was so relatable as swasan's outfits match very often in the show too!
Looking forward to more from you!

Hi...Yukthi, right? Nice to meet you 😊, I guess this is the first time we're interacting on a thread, though I had seen several of your posts in the AT.

Thanks so much for your comment, am very glad you liked this OS.

Yeah, Sujju remains as nautanki as ever. 😆 We couldn't do without her essential Sujju-Ness!

Glad you liked the romance between SwaSan, we're not getting much of it on the show now, so wanted to write something on those lines to cheer myself and my forum pals up. 😉

And yeah you're totally right about their outfits. SwaSan do wear coordinated outfits a lot of the time. Another sign that they're meant to be, perhaps. 😉

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Allyson
A very sweet little OS Viji.
I like that there's a total break from those whom shall not be named. I too am hoping that the whole divorce thing is a contrived drama but knowing the show makers, I doubt it. I used to religiously follow saathiya at one point and fruitlessly hoped that certain things were just drama, but they unfortunately we're not. It was the bad guys winning each time. It is why I now keep my distance from shows and don't really hope for much.

I love the closeness you have shown between Swara and Sanskaar here. Been blessed with such closeness on screen seems to be a long and ardourous journey ahead

Hey Ally...🤗

Thanks for your comment yaar, very glad you liked this. Oh dear, you are fearing this divorce drama may be a real plot line to drag the melodrama and suffering element is it? Yikes, you might be right, but I dearly hope not. 😕

My main idea of writing this OS was to cheer my forum pals and myself up, really. 😊 We're getting so much tension and angst on tv now, just wanted to write some tender and romantic bits for some relief. 😉

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Beautiful!
Overload of sweetness and adoration! I feel like going all 'awww' ;) My hearts all fuzzy and warm. This was sooo cute yaar. After watching today's episode (which I found totally crap) this was a blast of happiness for me.
Brilliantly written as always. 🤗

-V ❤️

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: foresight
Viji
you are a really good writer, you have tackled this so beautifully sprinting loads of love in it making it more emotional, full of love and about their next step in life. they comes across so natural and you have put in so much sync in them about what they want, because it clearly seemed like both want the new addition...even though sanskar said that he felt they were ready for both. so he wants to attend the godh barai too...fair demand i guess 😆 😆 😆

beautiful words and beautiful writing

Hey Sapna...thanks so much yaar. 🤗

Am very happy you hear you liked this. I wanted to portray a light hearted, romantic take on SwaSan's future life after all this crazy mess gets sorted out.

I wanted to cheer myself and forum pals up, by peppering this OS with a lot of tender romance, as currently the SwaSan interaction on tv is fraught with tension.

I was so happy that you identified the sync between the two I was trying to show. Yeah, they kind of complement each other perfectly, know what is on each others mind. 😳

Looking forward to your next fic Sapna. Very eagerly. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Nice one dear

Hey Arathy. 🤗 Thanks a lot. Very glad you liked this.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: bwvianna
Beautiful!
Overload of sweetness and adoration! I feel like going all 'awww' ;) My hearts all fuzzy and warm. This was sooo cute yaar. After watching today's episode (which I found totally crap) this was a blast of happiness for me.
Brilliantly written as always. 🤗

-V ❤️

Hi Vrinda 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton. 😊 Glad you found this cute, and I could make you feel happy. I wrote this with that hope, to cheer myself and my forum pals up, since we are having so much angst and tension in the episodes right now.

Hope that this MU will soon be resolved. 😊

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#90

A very very beautiful morning for both of them indeed😳 What a beautiful description of their early morning together Viji ☺️ There is something very charming about the routine life of a couple who is well settled in their married life & are very very happy with each other like these two so obviously are.

Sujata seems to have finally accepted Swara as her DIL wholeheartedly. No better proof than wanting her to give her grandchildren😆 And then that scene after the god bharai Feels so good to see so much happiness when the forum is drowning in misery Viji. A big thank you for this fantastic OS :-*

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