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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update naina...
holi scene, cafe scene n last swara's confession evrything is perfect
waiting for next.. pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update Nainu ,loved reading it👏👏
I am waiting for u r next update😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update chechi. So she felt sorry for his behaviour towards her. Hope tat s true na. Tat he s having feelings for her. Really he started to fall for her. She too liked him bt she didn't xpressed it to him. And they had a great holi. Tat time they both had a chance to talk. And when she came to knw whatever he did was for bet she felt sad bt sametime he told her tat he liked her from first so she had some hope for her love . So at the sixth day hw cutely she proposed him by singing a song for him. Then Wat happen chechi y he left her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Naina 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 2
Nainu it was so good... Who is mean and selfish very confusing😕
But still quite interesting
I loved it alot
U really always give updates worth the wait..👏

So college days 7 years back.
Sanskar took challenge so bad of him yrrr..
I think it's his plan also to apologise to swara in assembly n mainly usne ye ab bdla lene ko kia ho..

Oh I m so happy ki I hv 3 part ready to read .. Bht bht sweet tha nainu

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3
Nainu yrrr very well written update👏.
Sanskar feel in love with swara n swara too , holi vala scene was very sweet☺️
Hme show me b aisa mil jae.
But actually hua kya hoga , eagerly waiting for next part , want to know how ull show the story of the film with changes

Till now it was wow

Lovely
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dr...
Then wt went wrong...do update soon...Waiting. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I have read all your comments dears..😳And I am so happy to see them..😃 But since I don't have much time to reply to them all, I am directly updating the next part..😊 Please don't feel bad ok..😳

Friends, I will not be logging in to India-forums for a week.. I am going for a trip with my family..😊So I will update my stories after returning..And I will surely reply to your comments then..Please don't forget to comment ok..😳
So I made this part a bit longer than usual..😃


PART 4

It was their first weekend after (after two days since that party, in which Swara proposed Sanskaar) they started their love relationship and Sanskaar and Swara were going for an outing on that day. Both of them were super excited for the evening.
Swara dressed herself in a red colour dress since she knew it was his favourite colour. Sanskaar came to pick her up in a car. He was wearing a white shirt,pink blazers and blue jeans.
Both of them enjoyed their dinner together in a nice restaurant. They talked a lot about their interests, families, their past etc. All the while Sanskaar was dying to kiss her. Later, they walked towards the car parking area and Sanskaar noticed that there was no one around. Both of them got into the car and closed the doors.
Swara felt his hand on her hand and she looked at him. The way he was looking at her made her heart skip a beat. Before she could foresee what was coming, he bent forward and claimed her lips. The kiss was soft and gentle and she felt herself on top of the world. Her free hand pressed on his shoulder and the other hand was trapped in between his palm. His free hand was caressing her cheek and hair. Sanskaar knew that she was enjoying it and he deepened the kiss. Finally they broke the kiss so that they could breathe properly.
Swara couldn't believe that they actually kissed. She thought that things were moving pretty fast between them. She panicked and the embarrassment was evident in her voice when she spoke to him.
Sw: Sanskaar..I want to go home..
Sanskaar looked at her face and understood that she was hurt.
Sa: Swara..are you ok..?
Sw: Yes..Sanskaar
She squeezed his hand in an assuring way. But he knew that she was lying. He felt bad and an uncomfortable silence prevailed inside the car as they drove back. He stopped the car in front of her house and she got down. She bent towards the window and looked at him.
Sw: Bye Sanskaar..Goodnight.. (smiles feebly)
Sa: Goodnight Swara..(without smiling)
And he drove off with a grumpy face, leaving a bewildered Swara behind.
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That night, Swara couldn't sleep properly. She felt guilty that she had offended Sanskaar. Their first kiss was so special and she had spoilt the entire evening just because of her stupid behavior. "Poor Sanskaar" , she thought. When she thought about their kiss again, she felt goose bumps all over. "It was so beautiful" she thought and blushed.
Meanwhile Sanskaar was lying on his bed, feeling really bad. "I shouldn't have kissed her on the very first date. She is different from the other girls I have dated before. She looked so hurt after the kiss. Still she tried to assure me that she was ok. Poor Swara.. "
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Next day, Swara approached Sanskaar in the evening after class at the college campus.
Sw: Sanskaar..I want to talk to you..
Sa: Shall we go out and talk..and have some ice cream too..?
Sw: Sure..(smiles)
They went together in Swara's car to the ice cream shop which was at a distance. They went inside and bought their ice creams from the counter. Then they sat down together in a private cabin which was specially made for lovers. He put his arm around her shoulders and she was feeling cozy inside his arm
Sa: (having a spoon of ice cream)You said you wanted to talk to me..
Sw: (slowly) Sanskaar..I am sorry for yesterday..I know you were hurt..
Sa: No Swara..I am sorry..I shouldn't have kissed you..I rushed things..and I know you were hurt..
Sw: Shhh...(touches his lips) Sanskaar..It's ok..
But Sanskaar suddenly stopped talking and gazed at her face which was so close and the fact that her fingers were on his lips were also not helping. One look into her eyes, Sanskaar forgot all his restraint. He kissed her fingers and she felt electrocuted. He took her hand away from his mouth and bent forward to kiss her. This time Swara too wanted it to happen and so it happened again, this time with more passion, more love. He kissed her lips with much need and she closed her eyes in pure ecstasy. His hand moved down from her shoulder and snaked it around her waist to pull her body closer. Her palm grazed his stubble and her other hand clutched tufts of hair above his back neck. Sanskaar deepened the kiss and she arched her throat backwards. Sanskaar suddenly realized that they were getting carried away and so he slowly stopped the kiss. He cupped her cheeks and looked into her eyes intently.
Sa: I love you Swara..I won't hurt you ever..
Sw: I know Sanskaar..I love you
After finishing off their ice creams, Swara left for her home and Sanskaar left for his hostel.
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Next day, Swara didn't come to college. In the evening, Sanskaar tried to contact her phone and it was switched off. He was panicky and asked some of her close friends like Gauri. But they answered that they knew nothing about her. He decided to go to her home and check.
He took his bike and went off to her house. But when he reached the threshold, he saw that it was locked. He found a note on the door with his name on it. Frantically, he grabbed the note and read it.
"Sanskaar, Don't search for me..I am going..Sorry..But we were never meant to be.."
Sanskaar tried calling her again and again but to no avail.
Days passed, months passed, still he was not able to contact her, nor did she come back. Her house remained locked all the while. Sometimes he felt like he would go mad without her.
Still, he finished his course (M.B.A) from the same College (in Delhi) and came back to Kolkata. He joined his Dad's business and together they took Maheshwari Industries to new heights.

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Present Day, Sanskaar's cabin in the office of Maheshwari Group of Industries:

"And now she is back again, with some new story. Damn..!" Sanskaar thought and gritted his teeth in frustration.
Sa: What does she think about herself..? Why is she back again..? And that too with a girl child, whom she claims to be my daughter. How dare she..!
He clutched his fists in anger and hit on the table with much force.
Sa: Damn you Swara..!
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In the evening, Sanskaar came back home late from the office. He didn't accompany Durgaprasad as usual when he left office at 7 pm.
Now the time was 11.30 and he walked into his home. He knew that everyone would be asleep and went straight into the guest room where Swara stayed. He knocked at the door and she opened the door. She was shocked to see Sanskaar standing at the door at this time of night.
Sw: Sanskaar..
Sa: Hello Swara..
His speech was slurred and his eyes were red and watery. Swara was shocked again when she realized that he was actually drunk.
Sw: Are you drunk..?!!
Sanskaar smiled lazily, and pulled her closer to him, grabbing her hands. His eyes fell upon the doll like child sleeping on her mattress. His eyes turned fierce and he glared at Swara. Pointing a finger at the innocent little girl, he asked.
Sa: Where did she come from..?
His voice was menacing and Swara tried to wiggle out of his tight grip. But he dug his nails into her wrists and she felt sharp pain.
Sw: (painfully) Sanskaar..Leave me..
Sanskaar moved his face closer to her face and hissed angrily.
Sa: I want the truth, Swara..
Sw: (raises her voice) Sanskaar..I said leave me..! You are hurting me..
Sanskaar pushed her hard and she fell down on to the floor with a thud.
Sw: Aaahhh...!
Sanskaar knelt on the floor beside her and bent down. He grabbed her chin and pressed her cheeks tightly with his fingers.
Sa: This physical pain is nothing Swara..Do you know how much pain did I feel when you left me years ago and that too without any proper explanation..?
Tears were streaming down her eyes now and she was still looking into his eyes vehemently.
Sw: I know I did the right thing, Sanskaar..! And as I told you in that note, we were never meant to be..
Hearing those words, Sanskaar felt as if she had verbally slapped him and tears welled up inside his eyes. But then hot anger coursed through his veins and he pushed her face backwards.
Sa: I hate you, Swara..
She cringed at his words. He looked at Shriya and then again at Swara who was still sitting on the floor unmoved.
Sa: And I will prove that she is not my daughter..
Sanskaar walked off from there without a backward glance. He walked out of the front doors and sat down on the steps. His eyes were full of tears and he was shaking all over. Still he didn't cry.
He thought, "Why Swara..? Why..? What did I do to deserve all this..? How can you say that we were never meant to be..? And if that is so, why did you come back now..? What is it that you want from me now... "
He ran his hand along his hair in frustration and thought again, "And why are you lying Swara..? We both very well know that we never had any sort of physical relationship. Then, how can you say that Shriya is my daughter!! We have only kissed at those two instances and our relationship only lasted for those four days. And why do you want to prove that she is my daughter, if you do not want to keep any relationship with me. "
He stiffened a bit and thought in a determined manner. "I can't understand why you are here after all these years and what do you want from me. But I will surely find out the reason, Miss. Swara Shah."
He got up and retired to his room which was upstairs.
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Next day morning, Sanskaar was woken up by some tiny hands who were patting his chest. He opened his eyes and saw Rahul and Dhruv who were looking at his intently. Suddenly, he felt a warm feeling inside his heart and he smiled at the two innocent souls who actually cared about him in this whole huge house.
Ra & Dh : Good morning Chachu..
Sa: (holding their hands and smiling) Good morning my little champs..
Ra: (whines) Offo Chachu..How many times we have to tell you..We are not "little"..
Dh: Yeah I am eight years old and he is Nine. How can you call us "little"..?
Sa: (smiles widely and sits up on the bed) Oh..I forgot buddies.. Ok so my "not so little champs", what are you both doing in my bedroom..?
Rahul and Dhruv climbed onto his bed and sat down on the two sides of Sanskaar, facing him.
Ra: Ok..You have to explain..
Sa: (surprised)About what, guys..?
Dh: About that lady, Swara and that little girl, Shriya..
Sanskaar's facial expression changed into a serious one and he looked away feeling dejected. Rahul and Dhruv looked at each other and exchanged an "I told you so" kind of look.
Ra: So, it's true then..Isn't it Chachu..?
Sanskaar looked up at him feeling perplexed.
Sa: What..?
Ra: Swara was your girl friend and you both had a daughter. And you dumped her..!
Dh: No Rahul bhaiyya..She dumped him...Isn't it, Chachu..?
He was looking at both of them feeling flabbergast. Suddenly he felt like laughing out loud. But still he ,maintained a serious face and answered them.
Sa: Listen, both of you.. She was my girlfriend and I won't deny it. But all I can say is that kid is not my daughter. Swara is lying and I don't know why she is trying to trap me into this.
The kids were listening to him now with rapt attention. An idea clicked in his mind.
Sa: And you both are my friends right so you need to help me. See, you both will be here when I and your Daadaji go to office. So you both need to do some tasks for me.
Ra: Like what..?
Sa: You both need to collect proofs against her. i.e., you must do some spy work for me..
Excitement dawned on their faces and they smiled at him wickedly.
Dh: You mean, spying like James Bond..
Ra: And we need to report to you..Like you are our Boss.
Sa: (laughs) Of course..
Rahul and Dhruv also laughed and the three of them gave high fives to each other.
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Sanskaar, Durgaprasad, Rahul and Dhruv sat down to have breakfast. He looked at their servant, Kishan who was placing food on the table.
DP: Kishan, where is Swara..? Ask her to come and have breakfast.
Ki: Saab ji, Swara ji told me that from today onwards, she and Shriya will have their meals in the guest room itself. She told that she didn't want to disturb any of you. Some time before, she came into the kitchen and took food for both of them into the guest room.
Durgaprasad threw a seething look towards Sanskaar's direction and started having his food. Sanskaar looked into his plate guiltily and then looked at the kids. Both of them gave him a thumbs-up each and closed their eyes in an assuring way.
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Later, after Durgaprasad and Sanskaar left to the office, Rahul and Dhruv walked towards the guest room. They knocked on the door and Swara opened the door. She was surprised to see the kids and smiled at them.
Sw: Hi..
Ra: Hi..Can we come in..?
Sw: (delighted) Why not..Come in, both of you..
Rahul and Dhruv walked inside the room and their eyes fell upon Shriya, who was sitting on the floor and was playing with her Barbie doll. They both looked at each other and smirked as they remembered their Mission No.1 : "Become friends with the little girl."
The boys sat down on the floor beside Shriya. They had liked the kid from the very first sight and they thought that she was cute.
Dh: Hello Shriya..Can we both join with you..?
Swara watched as Shriya looked up at the two boys innocently. Rahul touched her little arm and smiled affectionately.
Ra: Shriya, I am Rahul and he is Dhruv..We are your new friends..
Shriya smiled at them and then looked at Swara, feeling excited.
Sh: Mumma..See, I got new friends..?
Swara smiled at her and kissed on her cheek.
Sw: Ok Shriya..Mumma has some work to do..I have to wash our clothes and you can play with your friends. Boys, will you please look after her for some time..?
Ra: Sure ..(smiles)
When Swara went inside the washroom, the boys had an idea.
Dh: Shriya, shall we play blind fold game..?
Sh: Ok.. but I don't know how to play..
Ra: It's easy..We will tie this hand kerchief around your eyes so that you won't be able to see us. you have to follow our sound and then you have to catch one of us. That person will have to tie the kerchief around his eyes and start the game again.
Sh: Wow..That is interesting..!
Dhruv tied the cloth around her eyes and made sure that she couldn't see. He played with her by making different noises and she laughed and followed him into the hall. Meanwhile, Rahul walked around the room to find some clue. He opened the cupboards and searched them. But he could find only her clothes and Shriya's dresses. He closed them and opened the table drawers. He could find nothing inside them too. He tried to open her suitcase, but it was locked.
His eyes fell upon her hand bag and he opened it. He rummaged inside its contents and found nothing suspicious.
Suddenly, another idea propped inside her head, "Her mobile..!"
Ra: I can check her mobile to get some proof..
He saw that it was placed on the table near the window. He walked towards it and took it in his hand. But to his disappointment, it was locked with a pattern password.
Just then he heard the sounds of running water stop from the washroom.
Ra: Oh no..! She will be coming out any time now. I need to be with Dhruv and Shriya so that she wouldn't get suspicious.
He didn't waste time to run into the hall and joined the other two kids.
After some time, Swara approached the kids and felt happy when she saw that Shriya was enjoying immensely.
Sw: (clearing her throat) Excuse me..Who wants chocolate milk shake?
Rahul, Dhruv and Shriya stopped playing and removed the blind fold to look at her excitedly. All three of them cried in unison "I want".
Sw: (laughs softly) Then come and sit down at the dining table. I have kept three huge glasses filled with milkshake for you all.
The kids ran towards the table and sat down. They took their glasses and drank merrily. After smacking their lips they looked at her again.
Ra: Can I have more, Swara Aunty..It's really tasty.
Dh: Yeah..Even I want more..
Sh: (sweetly)Mumma..for me too please..
Shriya asked in a real sweet way that Rahul and Dhruv felt their heart melt. They had already started doting on the little girl.
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After having their lunch, filled with special dishes prepared by Swara, the boys felt that she was a great cook. They watched Swara as she fed Shriya with so much love.
Dh: (whispers into Rahul's ears seriously) Bhaiyya, Shriya is so lucky..See, how much her Mumma cares for her.
Ra: (whispers back) Swara Aunty is such a nice mother. Our Mumma doesn't even have time for us. (looks at his brother grumpily) Always office, office, office..
Swara noticed them and frowned feeling amused.
Sw: What is it, both of you..?
Rahul and Dhruv shrugged their shoulders and excused themselves from the table. They went off to wash their hands.
Afterwards, Swara and Shriya went off to the guest room for a short nap, while the boys retired to their bedroom. They sat down on their bed and were in deep thought. Suddenly Dhruv turned to his brother and asked.
Dh: bhaiyya, what if Swara Aunty became our Chachi instead of Kanika Aunty.
Ra: Wow Dhruv, even I was thinking the same. Why can't Chachu marry her..?
Dh: I was wondering why they even broke their relationship. Swara Aunty is a really nice woman and Sanskaar Chachu is also a great person. He cares for us more than our Papa - Mumma.
Ra: (smiles widely)And Shriya..She is an angel..I would love to have her as my little sister. She is so adorable.
Dh: Bhaiyya..Let's just drop this mission which Chachu gave us..Instead of that we will take up another mission. Let's make Chachu fall in love with Swara Chachi again.
Ra: (gives a high five to Dhruv) Alright then..!
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End of PART 4
Hope you all enjoyed the update..
Please share your views..
Love
Naina😊

Edited by hp_2006 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aahaa...such cute boys...changed their mission at their will...tho yes swara is really so sweet as is shriya but this is a great mystery!!! Why did she leave him suddenly n now why is she bck n who does this girl belong to ... how is sanskaar her dad? I hv a feeling shriya is not her own daughter but mayb sanskaar had an affair with another girl after breaking off with swara or even bfr the swara encounter and this girl is hers but she died n swara took over her care...?????
Ok sorry m over guessing but now ull b away fr a week so no updates and the suspense will be on till then!!

Have a lovely vacation Naina
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing upate
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