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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm
hey dear beautifully written please make it ss or ff and dont frgt to pm me

Thank you very much. I'll surely try to make it a SS..😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hii Kashmi...a very beautiful update!! M so glad laksh is getting his just dues. ..wht a deluded chap...after so much happening he has no remorse...ulta hez still manhandling swara and forcing himself on her when he knws clearly tht she has no feelings at all fr him...looks like he has turned as mental as ragini was...or tht ragini turned sane n transferred her madness on to him!!

Poor swara it will take soo long fr her to heal emotionally tho having loving sanskaar with her will be a big boon fr her.

M glad she is on the way to resolve her differences with ragini too...hope this ragini is genuinely contrite but cant find any reason she shouldn't be. Her main n only reason fr all her evil n criminal acts was laksh who doesn't care a penny fr her n she finally got it clear in her head.

It would be nice if u continued the story further ...

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Hii Kashmi...a very beautiful update!! M so glad laksh is getting his just dues. ..wht a deluded chap...after so much happening he has no remorse...ulta hez still manhandling swara and forcing himself on her when he knws clearly tht she has no feelings at all fr him...looks like he has turned as mental as ragini was...or tht ragini turned sane n transferred her madness on to him!!
Poor swara it will take soo long fr her to heal emotionally tho having loving sanskaar with her will be a big boon fr her.

M glad she is on the way to resolve her differences with ragini too...hope this ragini is genuinely contrite but cant find any reason she shouldn't be. Her main n only reason fr all her evil n criminal acts was laksh who doesn't care a penny fr her n she finally got it clear in her head.

It would be nice if u continued the story further ...

Hey dear thank you so much for this lovely comment I'm glad you've had a good reading experience.. May I know your name??

Yes finally Ragini found her moment of epiphany and she realized that she is loving and worshipping someone who doesn't even deserve it..

So now she has finally given up on her pursuit and she wants to revert back and undo what she did and if she can't undo atleast repent for what was done at her hands..

And as for Laksh he has truly become very delusional.. He cannot accept Swara's no and the fact that she loves Sanskaar..

Yes I will continue with this one and make it an SS..

Lots of love,

Kashmi 🤗

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Autumn_Hue

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#64

Originally posted by: sarchanu
hi i just read this from the start and i love it, it was very touching. the way you portray swara and sanskar is lovely, detailed and in short awesome. would love to read more, please update fast.
hoping for scenes with the family and laksh and ragini getting what they deserve for always treating swara like a doormat. Why is it that swara is always the one who should give explanations and she is not trusted and getting hurt? i want sanskar to be her knight in shining armour and go ballistic on the family especially on sujatha and AP. I want swara to be given her respect and right as Mrs Swara Sanskar Maheswari. i want to see the understanding between sanskar and swara, as he understands what she went through and when she is at the breaking point.
i want to see the love between swara and sanskar as they help each other with their grief and guilt respectively.
I know it is not easy writing a story with abuse in it, as it is not easy to understand what people go through and how they react to it, but you have done a wonderful job.
keep it up and thanks for this fiction.
please update soon.

Hey dear thank you so much for such a lamba waala comment, glad you loved this story..

It's been a teeny bit tough for me but the comments and encouragement really kept me going really..

You will see quite a lot unfold in the coming chapters I hope I live up to your expectations..

And I'm thankful for you for liking and commenting don't thank Mr for this fiction dear.. 😃

Lots of love,

Kashmi 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Hey dear thank you so much for this lovely comment I'm glad you've had a good reading experience.. May I know your name?

Lots of love,

Kashmi 🤗

Im Tasneem 😊😊

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Autumn_Hue

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#66

Author's Note:

Guys did I go wrong somewhere with the fourth chapter because I got a pretty low response for this hardly 5-6 comments on this.. Let me if I've gone wrong somewhere..

Also I have started writing the fifth chapter so yet again any scene suggestions from you guys as readers, would love to weave it in my story.

Thank you.

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Kashmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

its a good story different one continue plz n less comments may be due to so much trauma involved in d story bciz of wat laksh did

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: KawalArora
its a good story different one continue plz n less comments may be due to so much trauma involved in d story bciz of wat laksh did

Thank you so much, I shall continue very soon 😊