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gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Nice update so finally ragini is regreting her deeds n our swaragini is back. Sanskar is also happy tat he ll get his old friend back

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Juanita

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+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#212

Awesome chapter. i loved it .Swaragini reunion was good . And ofcourse all the Swasan scene were amazing. Do continue soon dear.

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Autumn_Hue

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Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#213

Guys is there anything wrong with this story??

Because though there are likes but not enough comments am I hitting a wrong note somewhere or is it loss of interest?? The response before was way different and now it's totally different..

Tell me what to so should I wrap up this one or continue with it I have no idea because at the end of the day I write for you'll and your comments really really prove a source of motivation..

Let me know what to do..

Love,

Kashmi

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#214

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Dear Kashmi,

Firstly my apologies, I am one of those silent readers who never got around to writing a comment. Which considering how beautiful your story is - is a little unforgivable.

i had read all the parts 1-6 in on go and was really impressed with the way you have developed the characters and brought out such fine nuances.

Being molested is a nightmare, and Swara reaction was spot on. But the truly commendable character was Sanskaar, the gentleness with which he deals with her, the space he gives her as well as his constant assurance that he would be there for her all the time👏👏

Chapter 7 - Moments of Epiphany

So finally, Swara is moving out of her nightmare - and has reached a stage where she is not only comfortable with Sanskaar but is actually initiating the hugs.

Ragini's realisation of her guilt, her disgust with herself for her physical reaction with Lakshya and her acceptance of her wrongdoings - she is slowly embarking on the road to redemption. And Swara's empathy towards her sister was nicely done. Loved the update.

Please do update soon.

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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Robia Yousaf

@robiayousaf

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue
Guys is there anything wrong with this story??
Because though there are likes but not enough comments am I hitting a wrong note somewhere or is it loss of interest?? The response before was way different and now it's totally different..

Tell me what to so should I wrap up this one or continue with it I have no idea because at the end of the day I write for you'll and your comments really really prove a source of motivation..

Let me know what to do..

Love,
Kashmi

please continue this story

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Dear...

Im not good with words...but one thing i can tell u is ur story is amazing...superb...just loving it...

Dint think about less comments ..just continue your story...

Lots of love

Talia

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SIMI

@simsen23

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Nothing wrong...continue ...with regular updates..the story is perfect.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#218

this is a great story because it has a unique background.

please continue writing this story, don't finish so soon

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#219

Plz continue the story is nice and different it maybe that people are busy and cannot keep up...

I will for sure be waiting for the update from the last...nice journey with a nice bond...

Written in a lovely way. ..

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#220

Hey Kashmi!!
We all love the story okay??
You know how eager I'm for the updates na?
The story is going on a great note! And being a french person, I just love the name and the story.
It has a very unique concept and the way you write it makes it veryyy lovable.
So don't feel dejected okayy??
Go ahead dearie!
Sakshi

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