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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Hi Kashmi, Do Continue this SS, I do eagerly wait for your updates . This is one of my favourites and It really good and dont take less comments has an reason to think otherwise.

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-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

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Hey Kashmi 🤗

Apologies for the ridiculously late commenting.

Part 6-

I loved it so much. 🤗

Like how you showed Swara is still extremely fragile and tender through that nightmare of hers where she fails to differentiate between reality for a moment. She is still trapped in that hell. For some reason, the way Sanskaar held her in his arms until she fell asleep touched me so much. What an absolutely heart warming sight.

Swara trusts Sanskaar so much. ❤️ The way she admired her hubby, not at all hesitant to show her affection for the man who's saving her. These small lil things just makes me go all mushy inside. 😳

What happened next.. Wow. ☺️ Wowiieee. ☺️ Uff. ☺️. That was just so pleasant and beautiful, nothing more to add!

I liked the way Ragini was physically trying to remove all those touches from Laksh, her frustration and disgust nicely penned out.

Part 7- Thank you for making that Swaragini union bearable. 😆 I liked the simplicity of it. Ragini doesn't need a speech to ask for forgiveness from Swara- she should know that her sister knows her well. Swara's words to Ragini about her tears were apt- that is an advice she needs since she became someone else while trying to win Laksh. There is a lack of confidence within Ragini which is probably why she became Swara in every essence starting from wardrobe when she found out Laksh liked her sister, not her. I have an immense dislike for Ragini- the character is just beyond repair for me now- so I don't sympathise with her in anyway (it's a personal thing 😛).

It was so nice to see normalcy in daily routine for SwaSan, especially the way they caught up on each other's lives through cups of tea in the evening. 😳

Annapurna. 😳 I pity the woman for being so weak & cowardly.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Kashmi dear

I have been late with a comment as things have been manic and the one I am writing sucks all my time up but I can assure you nothing is wrong with your excellent story 😃. I read the last part and loved it, just haven't had time to drop a detailed view. I am eagerly awaiting updates so pls don't give up!

Lots of love xoxo

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Kashmi dear
I have been late with a comment as things have been manic and the one I am writing sucks all my time up but I can assure you nothing is wrong with your excellent story 😃. I read the last part and loved it, just haven't had time to drop a detailed view. I am eagerly awaiting updates so pls don't give up!

Lots of love xoxo

Ohhh shoot would you believe if I'd say that I scrapped you not seconds ago so that you would drop in your feedback on my update.. What telepathy we share ehh? 😆😆😆

It's alright Shruti no problems take your time if it's getting too manic I completely understand..

I'll continue writing it won't give up for sure I'm so glad you liked it.. 😃😃

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jess_27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

heyyy kashmi... sorry sorry sorry for late reply.. idk how i missed reading your update... thanks for the PM seriously...

swara and sanskar have got into such a sweet relationship of care more than anything else.. the way they say that they will miss each while parting...

Ap's love for laksh is understood afterall, she is a mother.. but her son surely deserves no mercy for what he did... and gladly enough ragini also had tried to make peace with this situation.. but failed miserably.. that could be said by seeing the condition of her room..

but the good thing was that ragini finally understood her mistake and hopefully will do her best to rectify it...

swara's scars have have almost become invisible thanks to sanskar's love for her..

lovely update.. waiting for the next one.. i love to read your story so i would definitely wish that u continue...

love

Jessica

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Autumn_Hue

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Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: jess_27
heyyy kashmi... sorry sorry sorry for late reply.. idk how i missed reading your update... thanks for the PM seriously...
swara and sanskar have got into such a sweet relationship of care more than anything else.. the way they say that they will miss each while parting...

Ap's love for laksh is understood afterall, she is a mother.. but her son surely deserves no mercy for what he did... and gladly enough ragini also had tried to make peace with this situation.. but failed miserably.. that could be said by seeing the condition of her room..

but the good thing was that ragini finally understood her mistake and hopefully will do her best to rectify it...

swara's scars have have almost become invisible thanks to sanskar's love for her..

lovely update.. waiting for the next one.. i love to read your story so i would definitely wish that u continue...

love
Jessica

Hey Jess as I said it's fine if you replied late don't Chastise yourself for it.. 😊

I'm so so happy you liked the update and Swara and Sanskaar's love story development.. 😃

Many things to unfold in the upcoming chapters for all the readers including you.. 😉

And yes I will continue with this one.. 😳

P.S: This is like the longest comment that you've ever typed for me extremely sweet of you to do it since I know you're not the best with words of praise.. Happy me 😃

Lots of love,

Kashmi 🤗

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Hey Kashmi...this story is going really great...please proceed as u had planned it...I'm sorry if I haven't always replied to each chapter as I hv 2 school going kids so often just hv enough time to just read and like ...but m definitely following it and would love to read further whatever u have planned

Love Tasneem

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Hey Kashmi...this story is going really great...please proceed as u had planned it...I'm sorry if I haven't always replied to each chapter as I hv 2 school going kids so often just hv enough time to just read and like ...but m definitely following it and would love to read further whatever u have planned

Love Tasneem

Hey Tasneem it's alright dear I understand happens sometimes.. I'm surely proceeding with the way I'd planned this story won't abandon this..😃

And wow!!! You're a mummy that sounds pretty cool that you have two bacchas too.. Wow that's news.. I was under the impression you'd be a college going student but then I went wring here..😆

Love,

Kashmi 🤗

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
Hi Kashmi!
I'm so sorry. I used to be so eager for your updates and I'm commenting so late.
Really sorry!
So the update was really good! I loved it. Swaragini relationship was back on a good note. And this sort of blow was needed for Ragini to realise that her obsession for Laksh is not everything and that loving a man who can not even acknowledge her love and rather lay his dirty hands on his sister-in-law is totally futile and actually a mistake!
Swaragini convo was really good. And actually the whole update was amazing!
Sanskaar is also happy that Swaragini are back together again!
Very good<3<3
Again apologies for the late comment.
Love ya loads
Sakshi😳

Sakshu!!!

It's alright baby doll happens you commented that suffices for me.. 😃

I'm glad you liked this chapter baby doll though it was low on Swasan content but will try to make up in the next update.. 😉😃

This reunion was in the pipeline because Ragini did get her senses back after the haze around her mind was cleared so then dished this one out.. 😃

Will update soon..

Love,

Kashmi 🤗

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: gayu6
Nice update so finally ragini is regreting her deeds n our swaragini is back. Sanskar is also happy tat he ll get his old friend back

Glad you liked the update dear.. Shall update pretty soon..

Love,

Kashmi 😃

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