SwaSan TS: Vindicatory Turmoil [Completed]

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Sharon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
I hv not heard this song but nevertheless the words penned by you are simply beautiful and the way they evocate the pain and longings of both swara and sanskaar are heartbreaking. ... so much love but so much misunderstanding. .. pls do make it a 2 shot and remove their differences! !

Hi dear!! Hope you like the second part..

I too heard this song only on mtv top 20.. when i heard only the audio and then the recent happenings of the show, i felt this works.

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: TRPS
due to misunderstanding and nil communication problem only increases... sigh!!! the pain...
it's good that Swara is determined to make everything right and take khair-khabar of Sanskaar... 😈
waiting for the next parts.. 😊

Lol!!!

Truly theres a certain limit a girl can take.. but when he repeatedly hurts her for one slip, Swara needs to take her Jhansi ki Rani roop.😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: The-Heart
Very emotional OS😭
Beautifully written, you described their feelings very well👏
Sanskar agreed to marry some one ? I cant digest this
Waiting for next part, continue soon
Please give a happy ending

I guess Sanskaar would also not be able to digest such a decision. You would know the reason if you read the next part.😊

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Sharon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: foresight
you have portrayed sanskar's feelings, his wishes and his desire to have swara stop the wedding so beautifully. i could almost visualise it. him picking her up and placing the comforter on her.
and then in the next part, you went and explained what she went through. she realise he still cares for her, but still won't give her the time of the day because of the distrust.

i loved how you structured their flashbacks and even more how you said that sanskar did his part of the fight, not it is swara's turn. i hope she first and succeeds.

looking forward to the next part of this. this one does deserve completion. please don't leave it here.

Hi foresight!

Thanks a lot for your detailed comment.

Both are fighters and loce is something thats both their strength and weakness. However now the balances seem messed up where this love is Sanskaar's weakness and Swara's stregth. When you have a weakness ypu lose half the battle. However with SwaSan, Swara would not let her love be defeated so easily.

Do read the next part and let me know your comments.

Cheers

Sharon