SwaSan TS: Vindicatory Turmoil [Completed]

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Rumadiv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Heyyy do continue the story its tooo good

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Sharon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: -Ros-
Awesome OS.
Both Swara & Sanskaar's pain nicely depicted.

Please do continue, I'd love to see how Swara fights for her love now. 😳

Thank you Ros. It all started with the pain depicted in the song.

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Sharon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Sakura24
My vision is slightly blurred, you made me teary, please continue soon. It was too bitter...I'm waiting for the sweet end now. Touched me...every line is wonderful!

Hi Sakura, thanks for the kind words.

Hope you read the next part.

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Sharon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Awsm.
Thy r in so much pain.cnt soon

Thanks Sonu! Hope you liked the next part as well.😊

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Sharon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: MeraCheekuVirat
got me hooked into it.
beautifully written, can't wait to read the next part. :)
do continue soon.

donno why, but i feel this might air. The remarriage track and swara confessing on that moment. ;)

Not sure about the airing.. but yeah it's a possibility. But with this divorce track, I doubt the CVs know what they want to show us.😊

Hope you enjoyed the next part.

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Sharon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
This was a lovely OS, Sharon. ...very well written.
You must continue. 😊 Please give this a nice closure, with Swara's declaration and affirmation of love to Sanskaar. Waiting for part 2.

Hi Viji, thanks a lot for the encouraging words. Hope you read the part 2 as well.

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Sharon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: kaku17
Lovely. ...though am horrified that things have come to this...well I did want swara's repentance and her struggle to get to sanskaar but not even in my worst nightmare I thought of this...boo hoo hoo..

sanskaar agreeing to marry someone else is unacceptable to me...period. ...hope the makers wouldn't tread this path...

but I loved the way you described their feelings. ..both my babies are in pain...hopefully the sun will come out soon to help dissipate the gloom. ..
go swara go...claim your love as sanskaar is yours, the way you are his...and no one can come in between. ..fight for him ...

Please do update soon. ..am waiting to know how she would reclaim her love since her very fibre, her life is dependent upon him as he's her life...

Glad you liked it. Yes it's terrible feeling to watch Sanskaar hurt Swara. But he is also giving her the ammunition to fight. I feel for every hurt he is inflicting on her, some day she would fight back and claim him. Surely she will not let the new girl take her Sanskaar away like Ragini took Laksh. Sanskaar is her rock and heart and definitely she will not lose him at all costs.

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Sharon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: pujametallic
It's just awesome
I'm a fan of writing
Pls make it long
Keep Writing Such A Beautiful Things
You are an awesome writer

Thanks puja. . Hope he next part has been long enough 😆

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Sharon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy
The desolation was so perfectly put out.
Do continue.

P.S I loved all your previous works esp pyar ke rishtey and its sequel. Read them in a day :)

Thanks a lot Ben .

Glad you like the FFs. The sequel is engine soon. Hope you enjoyed the ride.