SwaSan TS: Vindicatory Turmoil [Completed]

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

heyyaaa dear
really amazinhgg
d way u described their feelings... mindblowinggg

plz cont this

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Awesome update

Swara and Sanskar love story tainted with Ragini's plots

I felt so bad for Swasan to be separated and all the marriage drama...

Swara should act fast and get her Sanskar back

Please continue it

Thanks for the pm

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Anglaise

@Anglaise

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Awesome Os 👍🏼
do continue plz

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TRPS

@TRPS

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

you wrote it so neatly.. I was so intrigued in the story Thus felt so heavy hearted after reading it despite the happy ending!!! thank God that in the end everything was sorted between Swasan and they are together.. :))
To be honest, I seriously don't want their story to go in this way in serial because whatever Swara said to Sanskaar is right. it will be so painful to watch. hope, everything goes well.
PS- hoping to see more stories from you.. :))

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Man, did she fight back or what? ⭐️

Both Sanskaar's & Swara's agony was really nicely portrayed. Their understanding and the maturity these two have to talk through where they went wrong and how they're going to build it all back up again is what I love about them.

Loved Swara's answer to Sujata. Gosh how much I want her to give one of her famous lectures to her MIL on being one of the biggest obstacles to Sanskaar's happiness.

Swasan kicking Ragini's ass is one of my fav parts! 👏 They don't let no third party come between them. Such a shame CVs have forgotten about that CD! This head ache of a drama could've easily ended if they applied little bit of logic in their stories!

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Kashis

@Kashish_shine

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

epic... great two shots ff.. your next ff tere pyar me ... update soon dear

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

finally swasan are together...

their converstion in room..

swara stoping thr roka...

Loved it..

thank you for the pm..

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Swathy

@SwathyS

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

When swara said all those thimgs in the 2nd part you had me dislike sanskar a bit...😔

loved the way you said the whole thing...

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Hey Sharon,
Lovely work as expected from you. I thankfully read both parts together as my currently fragile heart wouldn't have wanted to wait for things to be put right in part 2:). Part 1 was heartbreakingly effective. You already know I like my angst and in this the whole despair and helplessness on both sides came across in waves. SwaSan have such awful families, it's hard to know whom to hate more! But before they fought the world so we could cope. Now their relentless plotting has driven a wedge, it's so sad but I'm glad you sorted it in your part 2. That too was realistically difficult enough as when the situation has become so bad you can't correct it without a real Big Bang and this certainly delivered that. Really liked Swara's stand she took and then finally Sanskaar understanding the real truth of it. Sorry I'm late commenting but travelling. Really liked this and wish we get a resolution that suits our shipper hearts in the show asap! Lots of love xoxo