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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

It was fabulous as usual

I mean till the end you had kept me till the edge bitting my nails and my brother hitting me each time my fingers went in my mouth
I read the last 3 chapters in one go
I thought it may be Durga Prasad or Shekhar as the murderer could not think of Lakshya
Thanks for the pm
I am so very eagerly waiting for the next story

Thank you so much Mansi,
you made my day by saying it was nail biting good.
I will come back with another soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akanjli

Hey Sakura, what to say, you just blew my mind today.

The court scene was really nicely done, with suspense, heartbreaks, revelations just at the nick of time. I always kmew that Ragini was behind all these, but you will make her a murderer. She destroyed herself in love here. She was strong enough to take the blame on herself and that I admire. I have no words for Laksh 🤢

The Sanskaar Annapurna scene was everything I wanted it to be. It was beautiful and nice to know that Annapurna began her redemption and Sanskaar began to forgive her. Reading the word Ma rather than Mrs.Maheswari was really nice.

And lastly the SwaSan scene. The innocent Swara and the playful Sanskaar . I missed them. They are flying of to their heaven and that interaction passed a beautiful and warm feeling in my heart.

Thank You Sakura for these beautiful SS you have written until now. ❤️

PS. I would have blabbered more but I have a test tomorrow and my mother is throwing daggers at me 🤣 . I really loved Vic here. Do bring him in more stories you write in future.And Thanks for the PM.
Merry Christmas
-Ahana

Thanks Ahana,
I hope your test went well...
I'm so glad to read such a long comment, they always make my heart skip a beat or two...
Happy you liked all their interactions and even felt strongly for Ragini's twisted love... I don't have words for Lakshya either.
Hope to see you on my next as well.
Merry Christmas😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanya17

omg what a twist my suspect was dp n ragini i thought laksh don't hv much idea abt d murder n he turns out d murderer i mean he claimed to love swara n framed her fr d murder which ws actuallay comitted by him if sk wudn't hv took dis case n proved swara innocent she cud hv even gt death sentence even when ragini took d blame to save him he went to swara n claimed to lv her i dnt knw wt to say fr such a disgusting person . Sk n ap scene was nice n i lkd d twist dat dis tym ap chose her son sk n casper finally turning into their trueself sanskar n swara i lvd dat . I hv a request plz write an epilogue if possible i really wanna read more i really wanna knw hw dp is feeling after his favorate son went to jail n he finally gt punishnent fr wht he did with sanskar n fr his wrongdoing n i also wnt to knw who is swaras father the story is amazing n i am crazy fr ur stories all of ur stories r my favourate i really lvd all of ur stories n waiting fr nxt one

Thanks for the lovely message Sanya. I'm so glad you liked it this much and felt for each character. I would try to come back with another one soon. Hope to see you reading that as well.
love,
Sakura😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

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I am so embarrassed as I've firstly not finished reading this wonderful story and secondly not commented even on parts I've read so am reserving! It's my X mas day present to open and enjoy and read :)

Hey Shru,
Don't be embarrassed dear, we're all busy I understand that. Glad you dropped by though😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swa291

well i never thought it could be lakshya
I though may be DP or Ap had some hand but not lakshya
will be waiting for more from you

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much dear.
I will write another soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TRPS

First of all , Merry Christmas to you , Saku!! 🤗
and yeah, what a twisty twist!! criminal himself was fighting for his case and had guys to come in front of Swara. ugh!! but if he is responsible ,I guess Raagini is equally responsible too.. I agree with SK here about justice...
And I agree with Sk again. 😃 kinda complicated Annapooraa... despite loving Sanskaar, blinded in urge to make family complete, she did utterly wrong, atleast now she gathered the courage to do right. finally SK would be relieved after realising that she always loved her. well, no matter what they can't come on previous equations, at least they can find peace specially SK. so him callng maa. :) So,all and all, it was nice idea of Annapoornaa of calling him for case. but still I couldn't understand she was comparing her act with Swara's. Err!!!
yippie,Finally Icarus got final destinal of fight..
just love how they made each other understand to let go past and talk to their mothers. I wonder what was the Shekhar's reaction after listening truth. well, can't hope good from him..
and Vic did the good job again.. :))
oye!! why SK thought she won't come with him!??! and that reply, human hosepipes 🤣 SK is SK!! haha!!
and the confession of Swara same in SK's style was superb. truly heartwarming. I noticed, they both never forgot to mention about each other eyes. :D well, love the whole interaction of SK and Casper in last part from beginning to end... finally,Swara and Sanskaar..
Saku , this thrilling and enjoyable journey of SK and Casper turning into Sanskaar and Swara is totally worth of reading. It is really my pleasure to read. :) and well, the usual dialogue isn't need now, so in the end all I have to say, come soon Saku. 🤗 gonna miss you and your story. 😊 by the way dear, nowadays winter is so chilling and spring is needed. 😉 Isn't it!!! 😃



Merry Christmas to you too 🤗
Oh yes SK is always talking sense. Annapurna took the first step in to helping him find peace which is all she can do at the moment. I couldn't tolerate more bitterness from Shekar sorry dear. I'm glad you enjoyed SK's sense of humor, and Swara's confession. Both found home and happy ending.
I will come back soon.
Oh, you want Spring? I'll see about that😉
Thank you so much dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice..

Loved both the parts..

Lucky murdered..
OMG...
That was a shock!!!

SwaSan together finally..

Thanks a lot.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Shruti,
I will comment to that too lovely comment once you've finished reading dear, I want to write an equally worthy reply, not just a thank you...
For now, thanks a lot!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Wow mindblowing farewell,loved it to the core👏👏👏

Continue writing ,loved it a lot👏👏

Thanks a lot dear, it means a lot😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey sakura! 😉
Sorry my friend. But yes I have thoroughly read the last two updates even if I left my brain somewhere in the middle of my not so good days. 😭 was literally crying to jump and come to the forum and say wow sakura! the chapters are very well written.
You already know that I love court trials 😃 and you make sure of it that not a single emotion is left untouched in your piece of writing. So awesome!!
Every character particularly sk's mom took the charm in the finale. Sk as usual had superbly bowled and durga prasad was out from the field, not leaving him a chance to score even a run. Ragini! Oh poor girl! Trying to save laksh over swara? She spilled it before sk. And laksh no more words- just a tight slap😡 Pyaar karna ka dawaa karta hai? Why didn't he confessed his crimes in front of the court when his love was being humiliated in the court for his crime?
Swara - I totally didn't thought you are going to make her so mature and independent girl😲. That took my heart away. She took her own decision unlike the swara in the show who would after a dozen tortures come back to her baba and cry and forget everything easily.
Well a very long comment indeed but I can't help it my friend. So it was awesome 😃 and outstanding above all sakura!.If you again write something do pm me yaar! I know you do but still. And wishing you a very happy new year! My dearest friend.👏 it was really wonderful.

Lots of love
😉 N

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