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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank god! Sakura you have updated the chapters by now. I was so impatient from morning that I couldn't help myself from gazing at my mobile. I think, if my phone had been a living being, it could have scolded me back with plenty of good words 😉 . It's battery draining badly. Sakura! You have made me an addict of your stories.
The conversation between swara and sk was within limits, yet comforting for swara,a girl who had just gone through a tremendous bad phase. I couldn't imagine sk would have been so sympathetic and witty at the same time. It was a pleasure reading your stories after a very bad day dear. I mean when I was hardly thinking off of coming of a good thing for me today, then came your update. Now I'm feeling yeah! It's alright to drain some battery for a betterment. It made my day yaar! Superb one.
Thanks for the PM. And yes! Like today you did...do update the chapters like this.Update soon 😛
Lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow i read two of the last parts in one go ,Amazing ,amazing👏👏
Pls continue soon😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey Saku!!! 🤗
as usual brilliant update. :)) just loving the way they are coming close to each other. he noticed and pretended as he hasn't seen her. :)) that was really sweet . :)) and Ahh! Swara and her observatios.. 😳 forgetting her worries and noticing his hair. 😛 and now I am eagerly waiting for mysteries of these off-limit topics to be dissolved. :))
and Saku!! I never asked to you to pm me as there was no need to bother you . well, I always come running for reading your updates.. 😛 but after some days , I will be inactive here for months ,so dear ,whenever you will write next story ,please pm me.. :)) I don't want to miss you and your work. 🤗
Keep writing and update soon dear. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all, thank you sooo much for updating on a Saturday! I know I sound selfish, but I just love reading your stories:))))
Beautiful update as always!
SK found a break through in Swara 's case. It would be interesting to find the mystery behind the real culprit.
Casper is attracted to our hot shot lawyer for sure, she wanted to slide her fingers through his silky hair! Great improvement from her side:)
I have been wondering, so who is Icarus here?
It can't be SK who'll definitely fall for our Casper, the Snow White.
Heard the news you won't be active after Jan? Pls don't stop writing dear. Write when ever it's possible...no pressure. ..we Swasanians have practice patience, watching all the crazy twists in SR every weekday just for a glimpse of Swasan. Lol!
Looking forward for your next update.
Enjoy your weekend too!

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Sakura 🤗

Sharmista knew no one would take swara in and yet she left her and went with Shekar. Good thing she is with SK, atleast he cares. Loved the hanky scene and their conversation. His care was subtle and comforting.

One more clue is out. Waiting for the face off and the past to unfold.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update⭐️
Continue soon...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
waiting for the next part and for when DP and SK comes face to face
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

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Hey Saku...sorry for un-resing a bit late, but this weekend has been one of those that are busier even than weekdays! 😕

As always, a brilliantly paced chapter. I've noticed this in most of the chapters across all your works, there is a lovely tempo you maintain throughout.

You have written SK in this work so well. He knows just how to handle Swara; how to reassure her, while at the same time not make her feel he is patronizing her or pitying her. I liked the touch about him giving her his kerchief to wipe her tears; him cajoling her to stop crying by teasing her with his nick name for her "Casper" 😆; and asking if she isn't too old to be crying during power blackouts!! 😆 This is so what Swara needs right now; not a guy she doesn't know too well smothering her with ostentatious concern (even if its heartfelt), but a more casual, breezy approach. And boy, it certainly worked. BTW, Casper noticed SK's soft hair. 😛 What next? His smoky gray (If he follows Perry Mason!) or caramel brown eyes? 😉

Again, I felt disappointed with Shomi. She feels her daughter may not even have found a friend's house to stay in, but still chose to take the easy option and go back with that poor excuse of a father, husband and human being in general--Shekar "waste of space" Gadodia. 😡 She even cuts the call diplomatically since the said waste of space is---well---occupying space nearby! This is the 2nd work of yours where you've made me not so fond of Shomi 😉 After IK/SQ. I felt just so desperately sorry for Swara, reading how lonely and forlorn she felt.

Brilliant stroke about the Mehndi BTW. So canny of SK, what observation and presence of mind, to have spotted it. So now it appears Ragini was not just jumping to conclusions after she saw Swara trying to pull out the knife---she was lying through her teeth, since Swara hadn't handled the knife at all!

Does that mean Ragini is the murderess? Or at the very least, she saw who the killer was, but tried to conveniently frame Swara? Man, theories, theories! I know only 2 things for certain, neither SK nor Casper is the murderer! 😆

Can't wait for the next chapter, Saku. 😊



Hi Viji...
Yes, the weekend is double trouble for me too...just found time to log in from my computer. Ah...the feeling of reading you comment the first thing I do on IF😊
You know I always write with a target in mind, to end the story in a certain number of chapters, so the fast pace is mandatory here. As for SK, he reads people so well and can adopt different approaches for different people. I usually adore those who can care without making the other acknowledge it as a debt or feel gratitude about the action...SK here is exactly that.
Shomi...I knew when I wrote this one, weeks back that you're going to hate her. The feeling is mutual, she should have stood up for her child, no matter what her reasons for not doing so are.
The Mehendi is a door opening to a new universe of possibilities. It might just lead Ragini to jail too...or not.
I will post the next soon Viji!
Thanks a ton of tons for this lovely comment!🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

2 chapters at 1 go!!! Wasn't really disappointed at shekhar in part 5 ... he is quite a loser but somehow expected shomi to be somewht more supporting of swara. Tho its the best thing tht swara staying with sanskaar...she cant be safer anywhere else. Sply since its a murder case and the real murderer is obviously absconding. ..

Sanskaar is funny...poor casper and swara??? I really like casper n hez d friendly ghost!! Whr as swara is miles away frm being friendly atm :P

Yup laksh is like i expected. ... i wonder if dp will allow him to continue with the next trial or take over already?

Hahahaha hiring swara as a maid was just the right trick...but how amazed he is tht he knws swara so well...we r amazed too sanskaar. ...kuch aur baat toh nahi...?? *wink wink*

I really liked the easy camaraderie of swara n sanskaar during d power cut and how easily she speaks to him now abt the case...so a new discovery abt the mehndi...poor swara also realises now tht her dear sister lied abt wht she saw??? Tht she could actually hate her??? Getting more sinister. .who is swara trying to save here?? Or does she even knw ... has she just confessed on her sister's suggestion tht she saw swara kill n swara assumed ragini is saying the truth? ?

Aaah now sanskaar wants to hide abt his relationship with the maheshwaris...wonder how long will he keep tht hidden frm her...i want the skeletons to come out of the room soon!!!

Hey dear!
I'm glad you enjoyed the treat. I have a reason for Shomi's behavior although I'm not sure how much it justifies her. Swara is better off with SK, I agree. Yes, he is kind of a cool guy, always funny. He means the selfless part of Casper, not the friendly part :P
Lakshya is Lakshya, I love to hate him and I agree with you there, it would be Durga next time against SK.
I'm glad you enjoyed the SwaSan moments as well, you'll know more about Ragini soon. SK's truth will be out too.
Thanks a lot dear!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Hey Sakura awesome update

Loved it
I wrote a lamba comment on last two parts yesterday night
The net went haywire and the comment didn't get posted
Anyways loved the trial
Sanskar is like an angel
He is so good that he is helping her with an accommodation
I felt sorry for Swara that Shomi and Shekhar don't care about her
I don't know but I feel that DP and Lakshya are trying to unnecessary make Swara a criminal
This update was awesome
Sanskar supporting Swara
I like the nickname Casper
Thanks for the pm
Update soon
Please don't stop writing I don't mind update once a while if not regularly

Hey Mansi,
I know your state, happens with me all the time. I just hate my network😡
Thanks dear, yes SK is Swara's personal angel. Durga and Lakshya are kind of evil true...
You're welcome about the PM dear.
Yes, I would write once a while...😊

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