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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Superb update...enjoyed the cross examination...very interesting. Awaiting the next part.

Thanks dear!
I'm updating in a short while!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swa291



thanks nahi mujhe quickly next update chahiye 😉

At your disposal in a moment😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dimaag

Sakura dear! That confidence sk had while questioning ragini and off course the pleasant smiles thrown at her in each intervals to gear up the drama in the court was brilliant👏.

I don't know why? But I like court trials( not in reality) where one says objection my lord and all,while the judge sustains it. Speaking about sanskar ignoring swara when the proceedings began, sounds similar to the current track.
Finally sk finished his theory by clearing up the little bit of confusion when he further said that ragini can be great writer... me😃 sahi bola!
Thanks for the update. And it's ok dear. We can read long chapters, when we know its sk and swara in it. Superb update!! Do update soon.

I like court trials too, hence wrote this one. Thanks dear, I'm glad you enjoyed Ragini's lost battle here.
I am updating now!
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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Casper did you really had the need to remind me of him 😭

How can a father 😡😡 leave his daughter in streets whatever she may or may not have done and sharmista here is sooo am not getting the correct word ... Swara says something and she believes swara has a friend to go to .. if her own father wont have her in his house will a friend take her in... Sharmista seems too eager to wash her hands off swara ...


SK😳 seems to understand swara more than anyone... And there conversations are really interesting and if i may say fun...

So DP and Lakshya 😲😲are the Prosecutors does they want the real culprit to get punished or just swara to be behind bars coz i have doubts on their motives 🤢🤢...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shekhar is just a spineless father... And the casper thing was really hilarious...
Well this is first SS of yours where I a not confused and am enjoying reading it...
You always come up with such dfferent and unique ideas for your stories and always manage to make me fall in love with them

Also Durgarasad makes me want to doubt him that does he have some ulterior motive behind getting swara punished...
Edited by manasie23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update👏
Shekar is so disgusting😡 n shomi , though she showed concern she doesn't seem much bothered about swara.
Sanskar helped her out😳 he understands her so well, but why is he helping her so much?? Little confused about that😕 but loved swasan convo
N in the previous chapter court trial ws brilliant⭐️👏 love d SK a lot
Plz continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi i liked this story would you plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww...sk helps swara. I think he is been drawn to her by some attraction rather than mere professionalism. Sk thinks that to know her ,its better to live with her. And maid? ... Oh sakura I was speechless reading it. That was unexpected.
You made shekar just like he is in the show. A blind person,full of ego and dominating. He never lets anyone else a chance to speak up their mind.
Now cleaning that awful home of sk can give swara some headaches and backaches as well. I know he would ask her to do 24 hrs of house chores to keep an eye on her.
So you too like court trials? Same pinch girl! Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res 😊

Will comment in detail later, Saku. In the meantime, I loved SK's nickname for Swara: "Casper". 😆

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Great chapter, Saku. You have etched the characters so well, and blended the sheer pain Swara felt at the abandonment by her father, with the very sharp, ironic humor displayed in the verbal barbs between Sanskaar and Swara. 😊 SK certainly does care for her far more than an average defense lawyer does, or indeed should, care for his client. Wonder what would happen at that tricky point when he realizes he loves her, or she loves him?

Shekar is as in the serial--a spineless, brainless, waste of space. And a pompous ass to boot. Shomi at least tried to defend her daughter, but Swara here, as in the serial, is more bothered about everyone else's security and relationships, rather than her own. I loved the way Sanskaar got her up from the defeated, grief stricken mood, he didn't give her an ounce of pity, he just humorously and matter of factly offered her space in his home to stay in, bu virtue of her appointment as his maid!! 😆 At least secretary or assistant bana deta!

And Casper--My God, no words for the brilliance of this nick name. Too Good. 😆

The end showed both Lakshya and Durga Prasad behaving in a most reptilian manner. I'm a little confused about their motive though. Lakshya seems to still firmly believe Swara committed the crime. Durga Prasad says so too, but I have my doubts if he knows very well who the real culprit is, and is merely scapegoating Swara?

Nice tie in at the end, with the line on the wings melting, BTW, There's the tie in with Icarus I was waiting for!

Waiting for the next one, Saku dear! And I was broken hearted, BTW, when I saw your reply to Medhu's comment. You are not going to be active after January, is it? Is this your last SS on the forum? Yaar, say that isn't so, I am going to miss you like crazy!



Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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