SwaSan OS (on Swara's Confession) New update pg 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: luv_virmaan

Amazing OS :)

Hope something like this happens on the show
You are really good. Please write more :)


thanks a lot for ur lovely comment 😳 means a lot to me & will try to write whenever something come up into my mind😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really gud...keep on writing 👍🏼 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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im overwhelmed to see the response from u all 🤗 thanks a lot for taking out time to read & reply really means a lot to me 😳 here is another SwaSan Scn came from my imagination hope u guys ll like it as well 😊

SwaSan- part 2


Whole one day passed since she confessed & she was smiling recalling the yday's incident in tht jungle, while thinking about it, she was folding the cloths & went to the cupboard jst to find a small box, well wrapped inside it, she picked it up tht box & as she open it their was a beautiful diamond ring under it & beneath it there was a paper, it's a letter as she start reading it,


Dear Swara,

I was completely dead till u arrive into my life, u make me alive again & let me find my that soul which was lost somewhere year b4, I got so influenced by ur words that I start to love my life all over again & with time I cant stop myself from falling in love with you. But I never thought that I will b so lucky to b loved by you one day.. yeah & I cant believe that day will come so soon, yday when u confessed ur love for me, I feel like to b the happiest guy of this world, was in cloud 9, don't knw how to react. Thanks for giving me this happiness & I love you.

I know we are already married, & though when we got married I was in love with u but I never want this marriage to take place without ur willingness & now as u have accepted my love I want to marr s hapy u again. Will u marry me?

Your Sanskar



As she finished reading the letter her eyes were all moist & after a few sec she could feel his presence behind her, he slowly whispered & said,

San: kaho na, kiya hai tumhara jawab? Ll u marry me?

She jst nod her head s yes & turn around to face him & said

Sw: yes I will, while hugging him tight.. he too hug her back, eyes closed , to feel each other 's warmth in each other's arms . They stay like this for sometime & then broke the hug & look into each other's eyes all smiling. Then sanskar took tht ring & slid it into swara's finger while she was adoring him..

Sw( feeling shy) ab age kiya? R u seriously going to marry?

San: yeah by in my way,

Swara got confused : Matlab ??

San: bata ta ho, chalo, saying this he hold her hand and took her into their terrace ! Swara was surprised to see the whole place was d decorated with candles & diya 'a and in the middle their was a big candle ,

Sw: sanskar yeh San kiya hai & yeah Sab Tumne kab Kia?

Sansk( putting his hands around her neck) you were busy in cleaning our room,

Sw: but yeah Sab kis liye ?

San: humari Shadi k liye , Jo Shadi pure parivaar k Samne hui thi waha sare rasme thi aur Hamara rishta Jura par yaha aj Jo yaha hoga usme humare dil jurrenge. Is Agni k Samne hum woh kasmme khayenge Jo Humare dil se niklenge aur Hume janam Janam k liye, swara was touched & speechless ,

sw: Sanakar ! Said all emotionally , when he put his foot finger on her lips,

San: kuch mat kaho , bas is pal ko mehsos Karo , she smiled & give a nod.. Then he took a gorgeous duppata and put it around her head, it was another surprise for her,

sw: sanskar ab yeah?

San: tum kitne sawal karti to yaar, we r getting married to dulhan wali feel to ani chahiye na & wink , while she blushed they he hold her hand and they took the vows of their own around the fire! Sanskar's vows to swara , I promised that I will never let u b alone, I will b always their for u, no matter what comes in Future we will be together forever , will protect you from all the Evils & never let a drop of tear to fall from ur eyes . Swara's eyes feel with tears & love for him , after ther forth step , swara come forward & took the vows, she will always support him, no matter what she will never leave him, the more he loved her she will love him even more & that what make him surprised at tht point their sever phera's was over they had an eye lock as if they talking they will keep their promise till the last breath, then he put sindoor & tied the mangalsutra & then he place a soft kiss on her forehead & they hug saying I love you .. I love you too

Then as they broke the hug sanskar saw swara was crying , he jst cup her face & wiped it & and jst just now o promised I won't let you cry aur abhi tum chaiti ho ke Mai apne promise Pura na Karu? His words make her smile & he too smile & said now let's go from here or ghar wale agaye to Pata nehi Kaise react Kare!

She agreed to him & they left . As they went to their room, swara entered first & look around the place , suddenly her heart beating fast as she thought what might coming into their way! Sanskar closed the door & could sense her nervousness & he jst went nears & hugged tightly from back & put his chin on her shoulder,

San: what happen? Kiya soch rahi ho?

Swara doesn't want to show her nervousness to him so she said

Sw: nehi to , kuch nehi , getting out of his grip & giving excuse, Mai fresh hoke ati hoon

She was about to leave when he hold her hand from back & pulled her toward him , she got scared , her heart beats where so fast tht sanskar could also heard it, he make her face to him & make her face him while lifting her chin,

Sn:u can't hide ur feelings from me , I can sense it very well , but Tumhe aise awkward feel karne hi koi zaroorat nehi hai , kal Bhi I didn't force my right on u & aj Bhi nehi karunga , knowing that u love me it's enough for me,aur rest let it happen when it comes naturally ..

hearing this she was so touched that she hugged him tight & said

Sw : u said it wrong it's not u the luckiest it's me as I got u as my life partner I'm so lucky to have u in my life sanskar !

He caresses hair hair & places a soft kiss on her top of the hair , while she was closing her eyes, after sometime they broke the hug & he went to the couch again which make her surprise !

Sw: jab dil se rishta jura hai then y u r still in the couch!

San: he was lil surprised but manage to cover up! If u don't say it by urself how would I can? U knw I told u na tht Mai apna right nehi impose karne wala, she smile a lil and come closer to him and holding his collar , making him all nervous !

Sw: agar Mai kahu u can & u should ? Their wr an eyes lock & then a naughty smile playing on sanskar's face

San: then u can't stop me later ( saying this he went to standing position) holding swara by her shoulder,

Sw: Mai main to Mazak kar rahi thi, ( blushing & trying to skip from the situation) but he grabbed her by her waist & said

San: Is baat ko leke Tumhe Mazak nehi kar na chahiye tha, now u ll get punishment for this , saying this he nuzzle her nose & face which give shiver to her whole body ! Both were breathing fast, they look into each other's eyes and from eyes slowly sansker's eyes shifted to her lips, she also understand what's gonna happen & let sanskar capture her lips with his. They shared a passionate kiss& later that night they bcom one .



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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome dear...swasan remarriage n those promise wala part were too good...
do pm me for ur other work if possible..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Really gud...keep on writing 👍🏼 👏


thank u so much 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Liana...that was awesome...😳😳😳i loved both parts...u write so well👏👏👏itne din se koi swasan scene nahi mila..but ur OS make my day dear..love it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: staryypriya

awesome dear...swasan remarriage n those promise wala part were too good...
do pm me for ur other work if possible..


thanks a lot for ur lovely comment dear & will pm u next time if i come up with something 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks a lot dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanabmw

Liana...that was awesome...😳😳😳i loved both parts...u write so well👏👏👏itne din se koi swasan scene nahi mila..but ur OS make my day dear..love it😊


thanks a lot sana for ur lovely comment dear im glad to knw u loved it means a lot 😳 & what to do CV's not giving us any moment so khud se imagine kar k kam chalana parta hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2 was so romantic 😳 but iv got so used to laksh barging in on swasan moments, I kept expecting him to leap from somewhere during the pheras.. silly me! 😆
The OS made my day!!
Edited by ray93 - 9 years ago

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