SwaSan OS (on Swara's Confession) New update pg 5

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good morning to all, im not tht good in writing but its jst a try & a lil piece of my imagination, which im going to share, something i wrote first time on SwaSan


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Situation: Swara realized her mistake & apologized to Sanskar but ,he refused to accept her apology &upset with her, both are not in talking terms, when Durga Prasadji told sansker about a important deal where Swara's presence is also needed so they hv to go to tht meeting which will held lil far away from their city.

Sanskar wasn't ready to go to this trip as he was afraid may b he might get weaker if she will b around & tht too all alone ,but he couldn't refuse his bade papa's order & so they start to go on their destination,


As they sit on the car none of them where talking, there was a silent which was haunting inside the car,

Swara (to herself) how I wished we could b like b4, tht fun moment, that ease we used to share, but I knw galti meri hai, I spoiled everything , she recall tht moment , whn she accused him & he got hurt badly, a tear escaped from her eyes & she said, I lost him forever! How could I do this? Couldn't trust whn he always trusted me blindly? How.. I wish k god does some miracle & I get a second chance to keep him in my life forever, she came out from all her thought with a jerk & realized the car was stopped in the middle of an isolated place, & Sanskar was trying to start it,she put her hand on his shoulder & asked

Sw: Sansarkm kiya hua? Tumne gari kyu rok di

He gave her a glare, which make her lil scared & she removed her hand & murmur a sorry

Sn ( replied, not trying to look at her & trying to start the car) : maine jan bujhke nehi roki, achanak start band hogay, tum gari mei betho, mai jake dekhta hu,

She gave him a nod, after sometime she went out of the car & went to see what sanskar doing,

sw: sanskar kiya hua,

San : Pata nehi , lagta hai mechanic ko bulana hoga, he dialed the number jst to notice their wr no network

Sn: oho this network! I guess we hv to look her & there for any garage , tum ruko Mai dekh k ata ho

Sw: nehi Sanskar Ye Jagah Bohat Sunsan hai i ll get scared so pls take me with u

Sans think for some time & agreed & both start to walk, it was like 20 mins they wr walking but there wr no sign of any garage or people ! He then tried again to call but no use! He got angry & said Damn kicking few stones which wr coming on his way

Sw: sanskar Tum itne gusse mei kyu ho? What's wrong?

Sans: r u crazy? Tum pagal ho kiya? Hum yaha ek Sunsan raste mei vattak rahe hai, phone nehi kam kar raha, as pass log nehi dikh rahe aise situation mei mujhe Kia nachu?

Swa: relax i knw the situation is scary but itna Bhi bura nehi hai

San: what do u mean? Tumhe yaha aise maza ara hai Kia?

Swa: maza to nehi Araha, but achha zaroor lag raha hai, Akhir tum Jo mere sath ho

Deep eye lock after few sec sanskar brush off those thought which was raising hope again

Sans: what rubbish!

Swa: seriously sanskar ! Kitne din huye we didn't get time to spend together or talk I want to tell u.. B4 she could complete he start speaking

Grabbing her by shoulder

Sans: what else u ll say yehi u don't want to doubt me par halat aise the ! Mujhe is bat ka utna bura nehi laga k Tumne mujhe sawal kiya jitna bura is k laga k Tumne yeh feel kiya tht I didn't change! Tumne mujhe Us sanskar ki yaad dila Di whom I never want to remember ! Tears roll down from her eyes ! B4 they could cont their argument it start raining all of a sudden& Tht moment sanskar forgot about their discussion & Took her hand & run to get some shelter ! While Swara got hurt on her leg & fall sanskar stopped & saw tht wound? He took the feet into his knee & tired his handkerchief, while swara was adoring him! Swara to himself , no matter how much angry he is, he can't see me in trouble & thts what make him special , how I wished to hold him tight & never let him go! Par Kaise? After he was done with ting he tried to give her support ! While she was admiring ( staring at him lovingly) him , soon they saw a big tree where they ll b able to get shelter from rain, they went their and make , both were standing but not looking at each other swara was shivering badly which wasn't unnoticed by sanskar , he went closer to her & take off his jacket & wrapped it around her shivering body , as soon as he wrapped her their eyes met & they went to any other world, intense eyelock! Swara's hair strands wr troubling her & sanskar didn't realize when his hands automatically went to remove them from her face, as his finger get into touch with her skin butterflies wr dancing into her stomach , and with the rain drop & cool breeze they didn't realize they they wr coming closer to each other so close tht their lips wr about to meet both closed their eyes whn a sound of thunder get them back to their sense? Sanskar realized what he was about to to he moved away & turn his face to other said & said I'm sorry in a rude tone, swara was felt sad & coulsnt take it anymore she jst hugged him tightly frm the back & broke into tears !

Sw: sanskar pls don't do this to u & to me! I knw u love me & u will never force ur love on me but sanskar last few days whn u wr angry with me & make distance frm me then I reuse tum mere kiya ho! Sanskar I can't live with out u I knw I have u a lot ! Uske liye mujhe tum koi Bhi saza dedo par plz mujhse dur math raho, I can't imagine my life without u! I love u plz give me & us another chance,

Sanskar can't hold his anger anymore he faced to her & hugged her tight , she also hugged him back happily then they broke the hug & he cupped her face

San: I never want to b the reason of ur tears I alwYs want to make u smile swara I love u & will love u forever saying this he wiped off her tears by placing soft Kisses on he cheeks & at last on forehead then they look at each other lovingly & sAid

San: I love u swara! I really don

Swa: I love u too sanskar? Then sanskar wrapped her around him giving his full warmth to get her all the pain, while she was resting her head on his chest!


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Nice...morning morning sweet swasan os...my day will go well
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

Nice...morning morning sweet swasan os...my day will go well


thank u :) & really hope like the morning whole week we at least get a SwaSan moment so tht week goes well too 😳
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thank u so much
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Very very cute OS Liana, loved reading it, it made my morning very happy 🤗
Swasan outside house with no one else around, I wish it happens soon.

Love

Ranjini
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Awesome OS
loved it ❤️
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Fantastic start for a new day.great os
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wow liana 👏...at the start was very happy dat swara was suffering😈and their confrontation awesome ...it was few words but apt loved it re
ending tho epic tha
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Originally posted by: MFRanjini

Very very cute OS Liana, loved reading it, it made my morning very happy 🤗

Swasan outside house with no one else around, I wish it happens soon.

Love

Ranjini


thank u so so much ranjini for taking out time to read & comment 🤗 means a lot 😳 & jst hope like today morning the whole week we get small (cant xpect much na ) SwaSan moments to cherish & get happy :))

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