SwaSan TS: Music of the Soul-The Agony & the Ecstasy-Completed - Page 42

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Me finally aa gai... 😆🤗 Ok I have unresed on page 2 but you don't need to go back I am pasting my response here only... 😳

Viji... 🤗First of all extremely sorry for such a late response. Things kept me away from completely reading the story until today. I have to say ..this is one of the most beautiful story you have written. You keep getting better and better with each story such that I find myself short of right words to describe how I feel reading them. One thing which I can describe is I got speechless for first few minutes after reading.. and that happened with this too... Dude... you leave me in awe always.This story was woven amazingly... Loved the depth and how you included ragas and wrote three parts based on them.
Part 1: The way you wrote Ragini is amazing. Your words showed the transformation of Ragini from an angel to the person possessed with Satan soul so amazingly. And lets not forget the difference between love of Sanskaar and Ragini towards their respective better halves. Then my most favorite part in this installment... The talk between Sanskaar and Ragini... Seriously Viji.. I would love to see this kind of frenemy interaction on show too. I am damn sure... if Ragini ever genuinely wants to repent... It will be Sanskaar who can understand her the most and show her correct path. Swara can be there for Ragini but she will not understand the guilt which Ragini will feel... IF SHE EVER repents...Though chances seems so low of that happening... Coming back to the TS itself, loved the way how Sanskaar countered every action and words of Ragini. He was not overly hostile but neither was he mellowed about his stance towards her. You wrote that part so amazingly. Other thing I loved in this part is how slowly you awakened the little part of old Ragini once again... I am saying this for all parts .. the gradual steps of Ragini from that vindictive person towards her redemption is portrayed amazingly😳😳Her realization... the gradual return of that soft heart she used have... those feelings she had for her sister... Just amazing.👏 The Ragini on show should be like this but alas we have gotten Satan herself there. The Raga you used here... telling you the truth... I had no idea about ragas and all but being a curious one...First I researched about all 3 ragas and then I read this TS. I still dont have much knowledge but I do tried understand now the mood behind these raga (I hope I succeeded to grasp right thing..correct me if I am wrong) From what i read this raga is taught to people first because of its simple structure... yet very few can master it to the T. I will quote the line I read about it : "Its simplicity is deceptive" And no other line can describe Ragini's character better than this line. I heard few pieces too.. and really they were calm yet ..I there was a haunting note in them. Just like you described Ragini... 😳

Part 2: A painter needs a paint to show a scene... but you, my dear, can do that just by your words... With your words you painted the morning of Maheshwaris so beautifully. Loved the way you showed a little glimpse of the bond Annapurna and Sanskaar shared by stating how mornings used to be when Sanskaar was younger. I researched this raga too... 😆😆 And I totally agree that this raga is somber yet its creates such a feeling of devotion... which Sanskaar has in abundance for his loved once. Loved the way you described this raga and showed the relation between it and Sanskaar's nature. You described Sanskaar feelings here so beautifully. Swara's mistrust had almost destroyed the foundations on which Sanskaar's whole world was on. Your words illustrated his hurt, pain and broken hopes so aptly and so did Swara's longing, the regret and need to make every thing right. Loved Swaragini scene very much... the way Ragini advised Swara was perfect. She took the first step toward her redemption.😳 Annapurna attitude towards Swara is so biased Viji... I hate that woman for it. I am glad she let her took duty of Aarti that day... 😳😳 Thank God she is little afraid of her husband... 😃😳😆 The song Swara chose can it be Jaago Mohan Pyaare??? 😳😉 Just as I said earlier .. I was researching ...and I found that this particular bhajan is a raag bhairav based song... And Maheshwari house has Krishna idol in mandir and also lyrics will go with the sentiments which Swara is trying to convey.
But really which ever the song is... that scene you wrote was damn amazing... I am clearly imagine it happening in front of my eyes...😳 It will be so beautiful if Swara express her feeling through singing... but we all know how we are getting her confession... We are getting it in mandir but she is begging there... I am so disappointed about that... I hope later cvs will give us a proper mutual confession. Coming back to TS... I freaking loved the last part of this installment... The way you wrote Swara and her dialogues were amazing... She chose right words to say to Sanskaar not her usual non-sense babble. I did small chicka-chicka dance when the finally made up... 😃😃 And then you made this scene more beautiful by making Swara dazzled by Sasnkaar's eyes... that was beautiful scene when she told him about his eyes. Totally adorable and lovely scene. And the next scene... Do I need to say more... you had me blushing here.. ☺️ It was simply beautiful... Their first kiss was so romantic and sensual... Loved the was you describe it so beautifully... 👏👏👏 Loved the way you wrote their love, passion and chemistry in that scene... Just amazing😳


Part 3 : What an amazing end to this whole TS... Just perfect... The opening scene where Ragini sings and Swara watches her was amazing ... I loved the way you showed the sisterhood of these two here...😳 I didn't found much on this Raga.. but you yourself have explained it so beautifully here.. Loved the way you started the flashback from SwaSan scene... Like I said you keep getting better and better not only with each story... you keep getting better and better with each part... you had me blushing here once again... ☺️But like I said earlier... you have written this kiss scenes so beautifully... I am literally swooning here reading them. 😳 SwaSan and Ragini scene was amazing... I just simply adore that scene. 😳 Laksh Maheshwari... What I can say about him... jitna bola jaaye kum hai... But loved the way you delved in his mind and wrote his thought... He is one weak willed and selfish person 🤢 Loved the way how his plan got spoiled ... 😃😃 And that slap... mwwwaaah... I love you for writing it... Annapurna... as I stated earlier.. I hate this woman... she is one biased one... 🤢🤢 You fullfilled my secret wish by sending away SwaSan from MM... I tell you ..these two need to leave that place... I hope cvs bhi sun le ye baat... .The ending part.. so sweet and romantic and serene... loved it... you know how much I love flirty Sanskaar... ☺️

All in all... This one is my favorite now ...Simply loved it Viji... 🤗You're such a wonderful writer. I hope to see your name in bookstores one day... 😳Just keep rocking...
With tons of love,
Nitz 😳

Originally posted by: abika

Awesome

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan

YOUR WRITINGS ARE TOO GOOD YAAR

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan

YOUR WRITINGS ARE TOO GOOD YAAR

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Me finally aa gai... 😆🤗 Ok I have unresed on page 2 but you don't need to go back I am pasting my response here only... 😳

Viji... 🤗First of all extremely sorry for such a late response. Things kept me away from completely reading the story until today. I have to say ..this is one of the most beautiful story you have written. You keep getting better and better with each story such that I find myself short of right words to describe how I feel reading them. One thing which I can describe is I got speechless for first few minutes after reading.. and that happened with this too... Dude... you leave me in awe always.This story was woven amazingly... Loved the depth and how you included ragas and wrote three parts based on them.
Part 1: The way you wrote Ragini is amazing. Your words showed the transformation of Ragini from an angel to the person possessed with Satan soul so amazingly. And lets not forget the difference between love of Sanskaar and Ragini towards their respective better halves. Then my most favorite part in this installment... The talk between Sanskaar and Ragini... Seriously Viji.. I would love to see this kind of frenemy interaction on show too. I am damn sure... if Ragini ever genuinely wants to repent... It will be Sanskaar who can understand her the most and show her correct path. Swara can be there for Ragini but she will not understand the guilt which Ragini will feel... IF SHE EVER repents...Though chances seems so low of that happening... Coming back to the TS itself, loved the way how Sanskaar countered every action and words of Ragini. He was not overly hostile but neither was he mellowed about his stance towards her. You wrote that part so amazingly. Other thing I loved in this part is how slowly you awakened the little part of old Ragini once again... I am saying this for all parts .. the gradual steps of Ragini from that vindictive person towards her redemption is portrayed amazingly😳😳Her realization... the gradual return of that soft heart she used have... those feelings she had for her sister... Just amazing.👏 The Ragini on show should be like this but alas we have gotten Satan herself there. The Raga you used here... telling you the truth... I had no idea about ragas and all but being a curious one...First I researched about all 3 ragas and then I read this TS. I still dont have much knowledge but I do tried understand now the mood behind these raga (I hope I succeeded to grasp right thing..correct me if I am wrong) From what i read this raga is taught to people first because of its simple structure... yet very few can master it to the T. I will quote the line I read about it : "Its simplicity is deceptive" And no other line can describe Ragini's character better than this line. I heard few pieces too.. and really they were calm yet ..I there was a haunting note in them. Just like you described Ragini... 😳

Part 2: A painter needs a paint to show a scene... but you, my dear, can do that just by your words... With your words you painted the morning of Maheshwaris so beautifully. Loved the way you showed a little glimpse of the bond Annapurna and Sanskaar shared by stating how mornings used to be when Sanskaar was younger. I researched this raga too... 😆😆 And I totally agree that this raga is somber yet its creates such a feeling of devotion... which Sanskaar has in abundance for his loved once. Loved the way you described this raga and showed the relation between it and Sanskaar's nature. You described Sanskaar feelings here so beautifully. Swara's mistrust had almost destroyed the foundations on which Sanskaar's whole world was on. Your words illustrated his hurt, pain and broken hopes so aptly and so did Swara's longing, the regret and need to make every thing right. Loved Swaragini scene very much... the way Ragini advised Swara was perfect. She took the first step toward her redemption.😳 Annapurna attitude towards Swara is so biased Viji... I hate that woman for it. I am glad she let her took duty of Aarti that day... 😳😳 Thank God she is little afraid of her husband... 😃😳😆 The song Swara chose can it be Jaago Mohan Pyaare??? 😳😉 Just as I said earlier .. I was researching ...and I found that this particular bhajan is a raag bhairav based song... And Maheshwari house has Krishna idol in mandir and also lyrics will go with the sentiments which Swara is trying to convey.
But really which ever the song is... that scene you wrote was damn amazing... I am clearly imagine it happening in front of my eyes...😳 It will be so beautiful if Swara express her feeling through singing... but we all know how we are getting her confession... We are getting it in mandir but she is begging there... I am so disappointed about that... I hope later cvs will give us a proper mutual confession. Coming back to TS... I freaking loved the last part of this installment... The way you wrote Swara and her dialogues were amazing... She chose right words to say to Sanskaar not her usual non-sense babble. I did small chicka-chicka dance when the finally made up... 😃😃 And then you made this scene more beautiful by making Swara dazzled by Sasnkaar's eyes... that was beautiful scene when she told him about his eyes. Totally adorable and lovely scene. And the next scene... Do I need to say more... you had me blushing here.. ☺️ It was simply beautiful... Their first kiss was so romantic and sensual... Loved the was you describe it so beautifully... 👏👏👏 Loved the way you wrote their love, passion and chemistry in that scene... Just amazing😳


Part 3 : What an amazing end to this whole TS... Just perfect... The opening scene where Ragini sings and Swara watches her was amazing ... I loved the way you showed the sisterhood of these two here...😳 I didn't found much on this Raga.. but you yourself have explained it so beautifully here.. Loved the way you started the flashback from SwaSan scene... Like I said you keep getting better and better not only with each story... you keep getting better and better with each part... you had me blushing here once again... ☺️But like I said earlier... you have written this kiss scenes so beautifully... I am literally swooning here reading them. 😳 SwaSan and Ragini scene was amazing... I just simply adore that scene. 😳 Laksh Maheshwari... What I can say about him... jitna bola jaaye kum hai... But loved the way you delved in his mind and wrote his thought... He is one weak willed and selfish person 🤢 Loved the way how his plan got spoiled ... 😃😃 And that slap... mwwwaaah... I love you for writing it... Annapurna... as I stated earlier.. I hate this woman... she is one biased one... 🤢🤢 You fullfilled my secret wish by sending away SwaSan from MM... I tell you ..these two need to leave that place... I hope cvs bhi sun le ye baat... .The ending part.. so sweet and romantic and serene... loved it... you know how much I love flirty Sanskaar... ☺️

All in all... This one is my favorite now ...Simply loved it Viji... 🤗You're such a wonderful writer. I hope to see your name in bookstores one day... 😳Just keep rocking...
With tons of love,
Nitz 😳

Originally posted by: jasw

2016 is definitely looking more promising than 2015, Viji(going by the current track)! 😃

Beautiful ending of the TS - music of the soul. 👏

Wish in the serial, Swara is more serious about her Music than Maheshwaris!! 😆

Originally posted by: jasw

2016 is definitely looking more promising than 2015, Viji(going by the current track)! 😃

Beautiful ending of the TS - music of the soul. 👏

Wish in the serial, Swara is more serious about her Music than Maheshwaris!! 😆