SwaSan TS: Music of the Soul-The Agony & the Ecstasy-Completed - Page 41

Originally posted by: Anglaise

wow Awsome Ts..
Lots of emotions and pains and U penned it so well.Ragini's way of redemption, sanskar's part to sort out things. Swara's confession. loved everything.Amazing work dear. Loved it! 🤗

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

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Thanks a ton dear, very glad you liked this 3S.

Am so very happy to hear that you liked Swara's realization of her deep love for Sanskaar; SwaSan reconciliation and romance; Sanskaar's guidance and support to Ragini for her repentance; and Ragini's ultimate redemption.

When you have the time, and if interested, do read my previous completed SwaSan OS/ TS, which are in my index. The link is at the bottom of my posts.

Cheers!

---Viji
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Originally posted by: Anglaise

Ofcourse viji..
Im gonna check it now. 🤗
Its olwaiz pleasure to read!!

Originally posted by: Anbhigya

Wowww... Music is soul n soul is music... U conveyed the msg so well... I loved it to the core... A redeemed ragz... A sensible swara.. N adorable as always my dear sansku.. Thnx for the PM buddy.. Holi.. Diwali n now music.. Just awsum.. Keep writing more..

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Hi Viji,

Thanks so much for the input. You are absolutely right, everyone has a chance to redeem themselves, whether they do or don't that's a different story. In the case of Laksya, his core has always been a pampered child, even if redemption occurs, the self-centered attitude will prevail.

Anyway, in the serial, I don't think Ragini or Lakshya would realize and be remorseful of sins in the near future...it's going to take a hurricane, earthquake and a tsunami to happen. I feel nausea watching Ragini's character in the serial. No one behaves in such a manner but the real witch for me is dadi, who is a willing accomplice.

Your redemption of Ragini made full sense and it also made Ragini more humane. The core nature prevailed...Loved it!

My grandmother...that lady is fantastically opened minded, I still wonder if she was born in the wrong era. I can confide everything under the sun to her...being scandalized,,,,I guess I'm more of a prude than she has ever been...😉

Me finally aa gai... 😆🤗 Ok I have unresed on page 2 but you don't need to go back I am pasting my response here only... 😳

Viji... 🤗First of all extremely sorry for such a late response. Things kept me away from completely reading the story until today. I have to say ..this is one of the most beautiful story you have written. You keep getting better and better with each story such that I find myself short of right words to describe how I feel reading them. One thing which I can describe is I got speechless for first few minutes after reading.. and that happened with this too... Dude... you leave me in awe always.This story was woven amazingly... Loved the depth and how you included ragas and wrote three parts based on them.
Part 1: The way you wrote Ragini is amazing. Your words showed the transformation of Ragini from an angel to the person possessed with Satan soul so amazingly. And lets not forget the difference between love of Sanskaar and Ragini towards their respective better halves. Then my most favorite part in this installment... The talk between Sanskaar and Ragini... Seriously Viji.. I would love to see this kind of frenemy interaction on show too. I am damn sure... if Ragini ever genuinely wants to repent... It will be Sanskaar who can understand her the most and show her correct path. Swara can be there for Ragini but she will not understand the guilt which Ragini will feel... IF SHE EVER repents...Though chances seems so low of that happening... Coming back to the TS itself, loved the way how Sanskaar countered every action and words of Ragini. He was not overly hostile but neither was he mellowed about his stance towards her. You wrote that part so amazingly. Other thing I loved in this part is how slowly you awakened the little part of old Ragini once again... I am saying this for all parts .. the gradual steps of Ragini from that vindictive person towards her redemption is portrayed amazingly😳😳Her realization... the gradual return of that soft heart she used have... those feelings she had for her sister... Just amazing.👏 The Ragini on show should be like this but alas we have gotten Satan herself there. The Raga you used here... telling you the truth... I had no idea about ragas and all but being a curious one...First I researched about all 3 ragas and then I read this TS. I still dont have much knowledge but I do tried understand now the mood behind these raga (I hope I succeeded to grasp right thing..correct me if I am wrong) From what i read this raga is taught to people first because of its simple structure... yet very few can master it to the T. I will quote the line I read about it : "Its simplicity is deceptive" And no other line can describe Ragini's character better than this line. I heard few pieces too.. and really they were calm yet ..I there was a haunting note in them. Just like you described Ragini... 😳