SwaSan TS: Music of the Soul-The Agony & the Ecstasy-Completed

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Jannat

@glitter567

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Thank you so much for such an amazing update...sent me straight to SwaSan dreamland.

Omg they kissed fjfjdhdhf ❤️🤪

Eagerly waiting for part 3 😳

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isha

@ishanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

that was a treat to read
loved it to d core
tnx for pm
ishanita

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soapbubble

@soapbubble

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+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Oh lovely part 2! Honey sweet...

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foresight

@foresight

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#184

I loved ow you went into the intricacies of the rag. build a subtle bond between annapurna and sanskar through it and through who he is as a person. you beautifully put that he gave swara the power to hurt him, but trusted her not to. loved that line.

i really liked how sanskar here asked her why didnt she ask him straight of what he was going when he was burning the blanket rather than asking obtuse questions, i was always bothered by it in the show. i am so glad your brought it up here. i am glad this swara realises there was changing in the nature of their relationship 😃

i liked how you put that fate is based on decisions. i always felt that ragini was more perceptive than swara. swara is more naive and utopia despite having had a tougher life and being elder to ragini. you brought that really well in ragini's advice to swara.

woh!! swara has really studied sanskar's eyes...even sanskar couldnt miss reading that sign and kissed her 😳 😉 and what a kiss...

amazing part and amazing rang 👏 👏 👏

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luv_virmaan

@luv_virmaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Viji!

The 2nd part was awesome 👏

You have written it so beautifully and so poignantly that I could visualise all that you have written. And the way you have blended in music to the story, is amazing.

Loved loved loved the way you showed Swara craving and pining for Sanskaar's attention and his presence.

Ragini and Swara's convo was really good too! Just like you have showed in your story, I feel ultimately, its Ragini, who is going to be the one who will make Swara realise her feelings for Sanskaar or atleast give her the push to go and confess, if she has realised it already.

I have always love the sister bond and I really want it to be re-established it back on the show.. They make an adorable sisters pair.

And the SwaSan scene

She sings for him 😳 Their patchup and her description of his eyes was just WOW!

And then their kiss... *sigh*

They are just adorable! And finally their misunderstanding is cleared

Waiting for the second part! And thank you so much for the PM 😳

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#186

@Part 2:

Your command over language is so good. As you go on describing things, early mornings in MM, their routines etc everything plays out in front of my eyes when I read your descriptions. Cut to the last scene...when even that plays out... 😆☺️

While in the show we are just assuming that Swara has been developing feelings for Sanskaar over the past few days it was good to see things from her perspective here & have it confirmed that yes she does feel something for him & considers him more than a friend. But then her doubting him becomes all the more disappointing than it was in the show. There at least I convinced myself saying that she is only his friend...

Sanskaar loves music & then Swara using that as a means to break the ice...brilliant👏

And coming to my most favourite part: that description of Sanskaar's eyes☺️ That was a mix of so many things on her part, it was sweet & cute & at the same time a confirmation of a growing awareness she has of him, just too good Viji😳 Only someone who has been observing him for long will note all these things

Loved the Oscar Wilde quote, but then I love everything the man says! I think I am going to sit down with my diary, open all your FFs & jot down all the wonderful quotes you add in all your works. I know many of them but will never be able to use them at the correct place like you always manage to do👏

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Ally

@Allyson

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Both parts are great Viji.

I love to read a levelheaded Sanskaar catching Ragini in her acts. He is her guru after all.

I also liked the short conversation between Swara and Ragini. I will always have hope for their sisterly bond.

Looking forward to part 3

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

This is beautiful!! I so loved this.

AP and Sanskaar share a unique bond. He is the son she always wished for. But he is not hers and so she harbors a slight dislike towards him for being more capable than Laksh in all aspects. And he knows it yet he respects and looks up to her. I loved the way you portrayed their bond through these little things, like morning aarti, where in he can be Sanskaar, her son and she can be his mom.

Ragini prompting Swara towards the path of realization 👍🏼 I don't think Swara even realized how deeply she felt for Sanskaar. The feeling had developed over time even without her realizing it. They say you never realize the worth of what you have until you lose it. I am glad that she caught up before it was completely lost.

Swara singing for him and conveying her feelings through music was brilliantly done. It added a certain depth to their equation. It matched their personalities perfectly. It was subtle, nuanced and so them.

Swara's detailed study of his eyes was dreamy ☺️

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nissi or jesi

@Jess_Ru

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#189

vijju waawa waawa...👏tusse chaa gaya ho jee

u know i didnt like when sanskar explained d reason of khambal jalloing to swara in epi ...i thought she should figure it out...nd voila u exactly gave me dis 🤗

dat kiss was so sweet nd cute❤️

jhalne wale jhalo😈

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#190

Beautiful TS, Viji. Loved how Swara made up to Sanskar in her own sweet innocent way. Haha ..when you were describing Sanskar's eyes ...I thought ...that is not Swara ..that is a Sanskar fan, Viji! 😃 Even the guys are not immune to praises it seems, the way he kissed her after hearing all praises about his eyes! 😳

Regarding the future track, I believe if you are redeeming Ragini, you should redeem Laksh too! As I have started watching this serial much later ... I was catching up with old episodes to understand Ragini and Laksh better ... and I kind of sympathize with both Laksh and Ragini. None of them were negative ...it's the circumstances which made them do negative things( I still believe Ragini has done more harm than Laksh). So both of them need a chance to redeem themselves.

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