SwaSan TS: Music of the Soul-The Agony & the Ecstasy-Completed - Page 18

Viji ! 🤗That was the best, most Swasanlicious treat I could dream of ever getting !

Originally posted by: Sree...

I could definitely write about dance. Ill try and incorporate it in my next fic. or maybe another one. Thanks for the idea and motivation. 😳

Firstly wanna tell sorry for replying late..
Read the two parts in one go..
Wanna give applauses 👏 👏 👏
It is a unique piece of writing..
I just loved the title
"Music of The Soul- The Agony &the Ecstasy".. 😛
The whole essence of the story is hidden behind it..
It has a beautiful musical theme..
I learnt this ragas and now understanding it again in a different style gave me immense pleasure.
😳
You described brilliantly the significance of the ragas.. 👏
I am amazed how perfectly u differenciated the love of Ragini for Lakshya and the love of Sanskaar in the first part..
You lightened up the dark sides of Ragini's character, her feelings..
The most awaited convo between Sanskaar and Ragini was really brilliant and excellently written.. 👏
The ignorance of Sanskaar bothering Swara..
For the 2nd part
It has a lovely starting..
Annapurna's aarti and Sanskaar's reactions to it, u penned it down so nicely. 👏
Swara and Sanskaar's conversation is heart wrenching but a much needed one..
How you portrayed the inner turmoil and agony of SwaSan is simply favulous..
Ragini and Swara's interaction was a surprise and I enjoyed it.. 😛
Raag Vairab did its magic and SwaSan were together again in a perfect way..
Then the romantic moment between them..
It was so passionate and a serene one at the same time.. [:D/]
I blushed furiously while reading and at last we got back the smiling angels. 😳
Okay my rant became much longer!
Can't stop myself after reading such a master piece.. 😉
Now desperately waiting for the last part 'Raag Todi'..
😛
Viji only can give lots of love and hugs for you.. 🤗 🤗
Muaaahh..

Love,

~Purbi.

Viji

I read it again and again and again

It was cute❤️

The way Swara described Sanskar's eyes aww

I loved Ragini here... for once she didn't ask Swara's help (her actual intention) but helped Swara instead...

Please do not redeem Lakshya... At least not here...

He is ignorant of his actions and more so of its consequences...

But I suggest you write piece on him (his redemption) if he interests you that much. I know you already did a piece on him. But redeeming him could be so different

What songs do you have in mind while writing I'm just curious

Latha

Originally posted by: piccola1

Viji ! 🤗That was the best, most Swasanlicious treat I could dream of ever getting !

I will have to do a <RES> here, so I can go back home, and re-read it to my heart's content. I will then down and be able to really respond to this TS in the manner that it truly deserves.

<RES> till I return.

It is very good. U truly gave justice to all characters n portrayed all emotions so well. In the last when sanskar kissed her u just did nt rush evrything but wrote so beautifully. It felt like string of pearls what u hv written

Thanks so much friends, for your very lovely comments. I am deeply touched and humbled. Am reading them all, will catch up individually and reply to all comments later tonight or tomorrow. Have some stuff to attend to at home now.

awesum 2nd part...⭐️⭐️⭐️i

its so beautiful dr...loved it

ahh!wht to say...i mean ..i cnt find words...