SwaSan TS: Music of the Soul-The Agony & the Ecstasy-Completed - Page 16

Originally posted by: Sree...

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That was beautiful. I really loved how you built up the raag bhairav. And I loved how you wrote about Sanskar's love for the music. The part where you wrote about Sanskar's love. That was so touching. And then the part where both Sanskar and Swara remember the times after Diwali. Where there are the small little steps towards Swara accepting Sanskar. Wow. That captured my heart. I read and reread it a few times.

I must say that the confrontation was heart wrenching, specially remembering yesterday's episode. Personally I wished Swara would not have needed the little prodding Ragini gave her. But I know how important that bit is in your TS. Part of her redemption.

Also the whole use of music to win back sanskar's trust. I was grinning from ear to ear reading it. And the scene in the room.AWWW.. I could give anything to see something like that on the show.

Can't wait for part three. But take your time. I'm sure sabr ka phal meetha hi hoga

Love

Sree <3

Originally posted by: Shadow-Fax

OMG, that was s awesome, the moment sanky says he is going to kiss her i started blushing☺️ actually imagining this scene in my head.❤️. Beautifully scripted with some equally beautiful dialogues. Thoroughly thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the pm, Viji😊

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Sree...🤗 🤗

Thanks for that lovely comment. Bhairav is one of my favorites, along with Yaman Kalyan and Todi. I chose the chapter names keeping those in mind. 😉 Actually I love Bhairavi, too, but I don't have plans for a 4th chapter. 😆

Very glad you liked various aspects of the chapter, and its so nice of you to mention them specifically. I wanted to tie in the present state of affairs, with the slow blossoming of the SwaSan relationship we saw around Diwali. That sets the tone, really, for their present rapprochement after they resolve the MU.

About the SwaRagini conversation--yeah, I needed to put that there since I am working on redeeming Ragini in this Fic. 😊 So its going to be SwaSan centric, but Ragini will be like an important second lead.

I know you are a major music fan, and I loved that bit in your OS, too. So I was very happy to hear to liked that part of this chapter. And about their scene in the room--well, I was in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that. 😳

Will try my best to get chap 3 up soon, could take a few days though.

When do you plan to write your next, BTW? Do PM me whenever you do.

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Sudha...you're absolutely welcome about the PM, and thanks so much for this lovely comment. Am very glad you liked this chapter. I was going ☺️ when I wrote that SwaSan romance scene as well. 😳

Originally posted by: luvakanksha

Part 2 is beautiful

Swasan conversation is perfect

Sanskar and swara's feelings come across brilliantly from this part

I loved how swara convinced him to forgive her such simplicity no major drama

👏

Originally posted by: Shadow-Fax

Hey viji😊 you're welcome as well. SERIOUSLY that romance part was very romantic☺️

Actually SwaSan's intense chemistry and the ffs like yours are greatly inspiring me to write on this crackling jodi..😳

Originally posted by: Sree...

Me and music fan? My mom would be cracking up if she saw that. She apparently believes I detest musica and can't appreciate it. I'm honestly a dance person. Dance is my life. So it's more of the love for any art that I tried to portray.

I will surely be wrong something. Now that I'm free. I have a basic idea in my mind, just needs a bitore refinement. And of course I'll PM you. :)

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice..

Swasan conversation is sort of heart to heart talk..

Finally MU clear..

They are finally one now...

Loved it..

Thank u for the Pm..

Continue soon..