SwaSan TS: Music of the Soul-The Agony & the Ecstasy-Completed - Page 11

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey...thanks so much for those lovely words. 🤗

I have a lot of sympathy for Ragini too. She's chosen a terribly wrong path, of course. But she had a lot of good in her, before Lakshya broke her heart and her dreams, and Sanskaar gave her a nudge down this vengeful path. He tried, of course, to turn her back from the brink, but she was probably too far gone then.

I would love to see a properly executed redemption track for Ragini, and I do feel Sanskaar would want to help her on the process. After all, he knows better than anyone, the importance of a chance to repent and redeem oneself.

I am going to make Swara pine and miss Sanskaar a lot here. 😆 Frankly, he has been wearing his heart on his sleeve for so long, its high time she did the chasing and the wooing. 😳 She needs to assuage his hurt and win back his trust, too.

Yeah, Sanskaar would be hurt at her lack of trust in him, but he is always going to be there for her, to ensure she's doing OK. He loves her after all, irrevocably and unconditionally. Swara just has to realize she feels the same way about him, the sooner the better. 😉

Originally posted by: arohijsp

I love it!
You have nicely penned what goes through Ragini.
And Sanskaar...love him as always, so Ragini also noticed his beautiful long lashes..oh my expression king ...the last part, whole scene was just beautiful. Pls update soon:))

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks a ton Sree, for that lovely comment. 😊 Glad you liked the portrayal of Ragini here. I do feel she is a fascinating character, and she had a lot of good in her, that is probably still hidden within. I wanted to explore the layers and shades to her nature, and I'm happy you liked that.

And I really wanted to interweave music into this piece, as you said, Swaragini started with the concept of music, but that's got completely forgotten, with just the occasional random mention of a music teacher in Benares, whom Swara wants to recruit for her planned school! The ambiance in the end kind of flowed from the theme I had set for the first chapter, since Raag Yaman Kalyan is an evening Raag.

Thanks again for reading and commenting! 🤗

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Yeah! And update soon!🤗
Eagerly waiting yaar..

Originally posted by: luv_virmaan

@bold: And the sadistic part of me just did a small dance reading that.

And as you said, Sanskaar's been wearing his heart on his sleeve for too long. Its time he takes a backseat for a while and let Swara do the running (behind him) 😉

Originally posted by: Sree...

I think the main problem with Indian telly is that they fail to discover the depth of any character and is often shown as either black or white. I really think that Ragini as a character has a lot of scope. Unfortunately, we only have FF/OSs to discover such characters.

Waiting for part 2

Originally posted by: samiya.059

You have time n again asked me to write poetry but believe me dear I don't have the guts to try it.. poetry is something which requires soul heart n depth and a huge vocab which i lack big time lol...but there are few works which truly make me hungry for more n more...u surely are among those ..What a fabulous writer u r my friend

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.

Good work! You should really be writing for this show. You are doing a fabulous job.

Sorry for not giving you a detailed comment. I'm currently preparing for finals.

Nisha