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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ishanita

well cannt say anything about swara but i was feeling everything and sanskaars dialogue gave me goosebumps. ..
plz give either an epilogue or consummation as end of this ts
ishanita



Hey thank you so much...

I am touched by knowing you connected so well with story...

I'm not sure about continuation of this...still trying to gather my thoughts...If I planned to write so will let you know for sure...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
wooow..it s really nice.👍🏼.why dont u continue..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
It was just Wonderful!!! Awesome, Amazing, Romantic, Touchy.😊
Swara is getting attracted towards Sanskar!! 😳
Sanskar understanding Swara's feelings so nicely.😳
Why don't u continue and make it a 3 shot??😭
Plzz I request u to make another part of this 2 shot where Swara will finally confess her feelings to Sanskar and then they will consummate their marriage.😉 Plzz cont.😭
- Aheli.
Edited by Humnava - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Superb please write a third part...It was a really nice read...
Thanks for sharing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Hey , Its me again.
Read both the parts.
Both were amazing.
Beautifully written.
Loved it .
Keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Mukku its too awesome just read it today.
OMG swara feels sanky's presence...thats a very good cosmic cnnction b/w the duo.
shomi shona cnvo abt hr sleeping style was 🤣
swara is falling fr him
Sanskar words abt swara's unspoken feeling is too good to hear!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Hey dear Mukta.😊
Read both the parts together. Beautiful and awesome updates.👏 Loved Swara's concern for Sanskar in the 1st part and loved all the SwaSan moments and Swara's growing feeling for Sanskar in the 2nd part.😳 And Sanskar. Haayee!! So romantic!! And when Swara could feel Sanskar's presence in their room. Loved that part so much.😳 And Sanskar was awake in the morning when Swara was trying to feel him.😉 Plzz update a third part also where Swara will finally confess her feelings for Sanskar and take their marriage to the next level.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Oh my God...Seriously??
How the hell I did miss replying to such wonderful comments here...
This is the most liked story of mine here...
Thank you...😳
Glad to know that you people liked it😊...

Well I kind of lost track for continuation of this..

So I guess I won't be writing third part but may be I will write short drabble series somewhere related to this...that depends if I get time and better idea...Lets see...

But Thank you...😳 for liking this story...

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