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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

This was really very very sweet
How cute they are ❤️
I loved it, update soon 😳

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

ThANK YOU SO MUCH ALL OF YOU FOR YOUR LIKES AND WONDERFUL COMMENTS!😊 That means a lot to me...Thank you all of you once again...😳😳

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gayu6

@gayu6

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Loved it and loved her smart weapon to make him sleep on bed. And as of nw he s her favourite lovely teddy too continue

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Please do continue.

Would love to read

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Woww its so awesome. ..the beginnings of swara's awareness fr sanskaar. ...and he is sooo damn perfect ...such assurance he gives her...why dont u turn this into a 3 shot with the final part of their consummation

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

amazing story.loved both the parts

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jess_27

@jess_27

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

awesome... hoping that u could turn it into a three shot, and show their intense love..

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Amrtina

@Amrtina

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Amazing

Plz write an other update

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

How we long to see this on the show! Loved that you explored Swara's growing realisation of feelings and physical attraction for Sanskaar- the absence on the show makes people question her hormones and preferences 😆 but here there was no doubt! Nice!

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hayee!
Loved how you penned out that physical pull Swara had towards Sanskaar & how she wasn't able to resist it. Then her being utterly horrified at her own behaviour, but Sanskaar supporting her and teaching her to explore these new found feelings. 😳

Wonderful!

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