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Beautiful update. Swara's growing feelings towards Sanskaar perfectly expressed. I mean who could turn away from such an irresistible husband. Love how Sanskaar solved all her confusions. We all are in love with him!

i dnt knw wht to cmnt..

aww how cute mukthai pm keliye🤗...loved her exploration description

Loved the second part veryyy much
Swara's growing feelings for him and Sanskaar assurance was very well written
Beautiful👏

Loved swasan s always cute. He made her tension free. Awesome do write more.

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Woww its so awesome. ..the beginnings of swara's awareness fr sanskaar. ...and he is sooo damn perfect ...such assurance he gives her...why dont u turn this into a 3 shot with the final part of their consummation

Thank u so much dear...I was not planning with the third shot...as u suggested i will think about that..

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Hayee!
Loved how you penned out that physical pull Swara had towards Sanskaar & how she wasn't able to resist it. Then her being utterly horrified at her own behaviour, but Sanskaar supporting her and teaching her to explore these new found feelings. 😳

Wonderful!

thank u so much dear for feedback...u always makes me feel happy about my work by your comment...thanks

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

How we long to see this on the show! Loved that you explored Swara's growing realisation of feelings and physical attraction for Sanskaar- the absence on the show makes people question her hormones and preferences😆but here there was no doubt! Nice!

Finally i got it...thank you so much for your feedback...this is mine second work on which you gave your take...i actually waited for this from so long...i guess this was really good work of mine...
thank you so much!

Originally posted by: arohijsp

Beautiful update. Swara's growing feelings towards Sanskaar perfectly expressed. I mean who could turn away from such an irresistible husband. Love how Sanskaar solved all her confusions. We all are in love with him!

thank you so much...i totally agree to u...we all r in love with him!

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

i dnt knw wht to cmnt..

m still in the updt of swasan...

how beautiful u weite...

swara's growing feelings & sanskar...hayeee.dreaming again.

i love love it.

thank you so much dear...