Dewani Dewani A Swasan Os

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This fiction is somewat related to the story typing it second time as pehle ka gaye😡 ...eating shots mind relaxed ...
SHE

Swara came outside the guest room...the onslought of tears came flooding her face...she knew wat she was upto but she wouldnt give up not on him ...its been a week since the horrific accident...which increased badimaa nd mom taunts ,ragini accusations,but what broke her was his behaviour ...his cold frozen behaviour...if only he saw her once ... if only she could see his eyes she would know wat he is going through...when she goes to his room he hides his face in a book but if he is ziddi am his wife ...suddenly a hand touched her turning she saw

'' hey bestie ...wattt up '' laksh said

'' oh ..u ... nothing ...its ur bhai ...he is ...''

'' fine, swara pls why do u bother for him when he doesnt just leave him to his state''

😡glaringly she said '' you know wat there are some badam in kitchen why dont u go eat them '' as he smiled nd went she thought maybe badam will activate his brains so he will stop spitting shit

HE

He saw few days back deepika's interview in a magazine but now he couldnt find it ...frustratingly he glacend at his bandaged leg ,at the room , and a table just few mins back swara kept a soup bowl on it...even thinking her name brought pain joy at once...how could he see ...he was longing too but is it right now?... the pictures... suggest dat... swara and lucky still... why is she still here even after her mom taunts ...there isnt any uniting mission ...tho why...she deserves better than dis forced marriage, better than me... i will talk to badepapa he thought determined


As evenging approached anyone could see the change in swara's behaviour ..her eyes sparkling ..small smile nd even a faint blush...swara herself could recognise the change ... if dis idea works everything will be alright she thought

'' hey swara... hmm now ur looking gud pehle u looked like a gost '' lucky said

'' oh dat... yeah am k''

'' umm so.. are u coming for the evng function...''

'' i cant yaar ...having some work...''

'' oh pls swara ... bhai will be fine its not like he is in coma so chill''

anger bubbled in her blood(Me: bilogically not possible but happens to me too when i see him on tv)...controlling she said '' am going to badi ...btwn did u eat those badam i told''

''yeah i did u care for me such...'' saying he went thinking his theories of show she still loves him etc...

'' i do care laksh'' she mumbled nd thought badam ka tho asar hua nahi ...lagtahey nuerologist ke pas leke jaana hoga ( Leke jao doc brain transplant karega tab teek hoga)


As eveng came sanskar entered his room from washroom to see lights were off ...suddenly light came but it was so dim lagta hain tubelight chale gaye ...night lamp se hee rehna hoga ...then he saw a person coming towards him...is it mom or uttara ...before he could say anything dat person came in full view...he was confounded...there was his love swara in a peech colour dress her face glowing ...then he saw her dress or is it lehenga ...watever it was it was a netted dress nd his eyes lost control from his brain...then he heard her voice

Nazar jo tere lage mein dewani hogayi

dewani haan dewani, dewani hogayi ...to his utter shock she started to dance

mashhoor mere ishq ki yeh kahani hogayi

jo tum ne na maani to mene bhi taani( changed dis to make it apt for the story)

kahan thi mein dekho kahan chali aayi( dis was true she never thought she would dance only for a person she thought)

kehte hain yeh dewani mastani hogayi

dewani haan dewani , dewani hogayi... as the dance ended she saw his face his mouth slightly opened... his eyes which were looking at her with so many emotions she did see them in his eyes before but a new emotion flashed through his eyes ...she lowered her face ...she knew wat it was ...desire... her face was☺️

'' umm... woh.. sanskar did u like dis... matlab it was for u to cheer u up'' as her lips moved he concentrated on them

'' waaat... u danced for me''

'' haan ...woh u were upset na... u didnt talk with me ...i dont know why u did like dis...but i wanted to cheer u up''...now everything was cleared for him if she wanted to go back to his bro she wouldnt do dis...means uss din something other happened he will find out not from her

'' it was beautiful.. woh kya kehte hain apsara... woh..but yeh idea mila kaise simar ka tho nahi hain na'' she was more than glad to see his mischevious expressions back...job done she thought

'' no sanskar... woh tho mere ek friend ka suggestion tha yeh''

'' accha kaun hein woh awesome friend''

'' she is awesome although once i sent her OUR pic she said ur droolworthy..nd sent some emoticons too...jwala is her name'' swara said with a little uneasy

'' accha ... abb mein hun hee aisa tho she will na its not her fault'' he saw her coming towards him with books in her hand ...she hit him once ...nd when acted as if in pain,,,she became concerned...then seein his cocky smile ...she smiled nd hit him again

the end

helo all well dis is dedicated to jwala( harshsriti) on her becoming dazzler nd also dedicated to all lionel messi fans here ... do share ur views...do ignore typos

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jessi🤗
This was so cute n funny
Loved swara's bafaam kha lo dialogue🤣
N ur commentary was superb
( Leke jao doc brain transplant karega tab teek hoga)🤣
Swara danced for sanskaar...aww so cute...sanskaar too liked it
N jwalu part was awesome vaisey she likes Laksh more😆
Loved it.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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badam se kya hoga...brain transplant hi theek hoga.

beautiful jesi...
especially swara realisation.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was very very cute...I want to see swara in that mode...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jessy my dear🤗
this OS was really so cute ,so short and sweet as well,loved reading it,loved jwala's part it ,wonderful dedication to our Jwalu dear👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Jessy my dear🤗

this OS was really so cute ,so short and sweet as well,loved reading it,loved jwala's part it ,wonderful dedication to our Jwalu dear👏


jenni its short for u guys not for me...😉 glad u like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONAL30

Jessi🤗

This was so cute n funny
Loved swara's bafaam kha lo dialogue🤣
N ur commentary was superb
( Leke jao doc brain transplant karega tab teek hoga)🤣
Swara danced for sanskaar...aww so cute...sanskaar too liked it
N jwalu part was awesome vaisey she likes Laksh more😆
Loved it.
Thanks for the pm



sonal are u k saw in shru post dat u fell from bed something like dat...

thanks re🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: medhasankar

🤣

badam se kya hoga...brain transplant hi theek hoga.

beautiful jesi...
especially swara realisation.


as i always say if u like it medha ...then i can relax😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

This was very very cute...I want to see swara in that mode...😉


me too..😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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jessu.. love you dear.. me swara's friend. . omg.. mein bahuth kush hoon.. mujhe swara jaise friend mili na.. lakshji ko milne keliye meine zaroor MM jaaeoonga. after all mera friend ka sasural hei na.. mujhe badam wala dialogue bahuth acha laga.. cute swasan one shot.. loved it yaar.. I'm very glad that you dedicated for me.. love you so much dear.. and write more..

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