PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN

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isha

@ishanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#981

Omg!

What was that?

Naina surprise was a shock for m...sweet shock...loved it

True yaar up to how long he cud save himself from his wife?

That line was so funny...'pink tongue was visible'

🤣

So stlast the ice wall has broken but but m now doubtful that sanskar may refer to their consummation as a mistake u know what I mean,otherwise u wud HV ended ff here so there shud be a twist but I seriously pray that I am wrong.

Love u shooo much

Try to update soon

Ishita

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arathy

@sarathy321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#982

Hai naina. ..

A lovely update after a long time. .

Hope u enjoyed vishu nicely..

Was eagerly waiting for ur update. .

swara's sweet torture of caring her husband was nice to watch...thanks for a long update ...

IIthink this update was a cliff hanger...the last scene was so hot..but I think it is probably swaras dream...

Will wait for next episode to know it..

Hope u update next part soon

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#983

oh my god... I was waiting for the update... n was thinking that what will happen...but ya you really surprised me with the ending of the chapter. I was like it will be just a dream of swara or sanskar but it was not. 😊 by the way chapter is awesome. just loved it. love the way how sanskar can not avoid swara despite of being angry. n ya plz update it soon 😳 ⭐️
p.s I don't know what Vishu is but hope u had fun. 😳

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#984

Awsome chptr naina

all scenes r lovely but in lst u surprise

i thinks its a dream of swara ya sanskar

update soon nxt chptr

loved it

thnks for pm

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#985

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Dear Naina,

What a lovely update - so finally they, or rather Sanskaar, realises that it was stupid of him not to acknowledge and admit his love for Swara. Guess he unknowingly made that decision, when he ended casually wrapping his arm around her petite form. (Swara's reaction was a little hilarious - what did she think his forearm was and she was trying to ''feel' it 😆)

But he did not give in so quickly either - he had to act all gruff and distant at the breakfast, which was okay, sort of, it gave a hint of some trouble in paradise to Annapurna. She insisted that Sanskaar go alone to bring Swara home so that they could have a private conversation in the car - did not work out well either.

But when comes late from office - where he spent a lot of time, unsuccessfully trying to sort out his conflicting emotions - he does notice the love in Swara's eyes. But he still has to be the stuborn guy though he does fail quite miserably - for Swara recognises that he still loves her and is hiding it behind the paid she caused him. Quite evident, he gets her comfortable clothes and stops working when he notices that the light is disturbing her.

But the next morning brings down all those barriers does it not - As Swara ignites a fire in him and he gives in to the love he always had for her. A beautiful surrender, where they lose themselves to find the other.

Loved it - and please a quick update next.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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_InDreamWorld_

@_InDreamWorld_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#986

Hi naina fab update i liked their first night n 1st day he cant resiste her to long. Annapurna send him alone to bring swara so that they came close.

He brought some decent dress for swara😆 finally he gave up n their suhagday happend☺️

is it final part I dont want this story end so soon😭

Edited by Red.orchid - 9 years ago

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Robia Yousaf

@robiayousaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#987

thank GOD update to milli...Awesome

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Anusha

@Anusha62

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Posted: 9 years ago

#988

Naina aww what a lovely update dear,every scene was writen perfectly u suprised us wid swasan romance atlast na.didn't thought sanskar v'l accept swara so easily.superb!!

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sumeetadeb

@sumeetadeb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#989

After a long time.what can i say about the latest update.it is awesome😊

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Annu

@ANNU30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#990

Amazing update👏

Last part wad really surprised still hadn't believe that in real it's happened i hope in next update u will not give us shock that either swara or sanskar r dreaming please don't.

Please update soon now days u r giving us update little late. Plz... update soon