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misaki

@misaki

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

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Medhu what a way to announce your come back!🤗 That was so you!😊

I loved how you started off describing the significance of a father especially in a daughter's life. It's not fair but it's true that we always love our dads a little more than our mom's 😉 Our heroes😃 Loved that part! Very heart warming. I especially loved how you mentioned that Swara never truly missed him before she got to know that he existed. That's the sad part really. I guess she was better off not knowing seeing as how worthless her father is.😡

But I absolutely loved the part where Sanskaar goes from being her hubby to her parent! Very very adorable! His threat was seriously epic - No kisses from me anymore, cavities are a big turn off🤣🤣 Can't stop laughing! I can actually imagine Sanskaar(VK) scrunching up his face and warning her trying to put up his best "I'm serious don't argue with me" face on!😆

I have had more than my fair number of visits to the dentist that I will never be afraid of them anymore. 😆 But I can totally get why people are scared of them! Ice cream is definitely worth all that pain.

Kids of SwaSan - Jaldi karo yaar! We are seriously waiting 😆

So very adorable it was Medhu and welcome back! 🤗🤗

Edited by misaki - 9 years ago

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

I sincerely hope medha that these sweet moments of swason doesn't remain just part of your stories and we never get to see them on screen
I really love how u weave the whole story
After being subjected to "INDIA KA FIRST DUMB IDOL KAUN "competition
whole week.This was truly a relief
Loved every bit of it
Amazingly written
Had started missing ur and Viji's stories
The story was so cute n lovely
thanks for pm

Edited by samiya.059 - 9 years ago

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: RK-ki-Kaneez
Loved the os especially the part where swara feeling were described of pain of not having a male figure in her life to give her a feeling of protection or not ever knowing how it feels to be a daddy's girl

thanks dear..appreciate you getting back to me on this.😊

yes, everybody needs a father figure in their lives..a guiding hand.

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Nice...
Swara missing a fatherly figure,..
A caring person who would care only for her...

And come sanskar, Who is her relief!!!
Wow...
Nice..

and the swasan cute punishment in the end!!!
Hahhaha..

Swara is just so childish at time...

Loved it

glad u liked it jidnyasa...

kya karegi..

dentist ke naam se toh everybody starts shivering.😆

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Oh, its half done huh? 😃 That's good news...now get the fully completed one out asap. 😉 I think I should follow your policy of not watching episodes unless it gets glowing reviews from forum wasis. I got so bugged with last couple of episodes, I can't even explain...

Does Swara have short term memory loss? 😆 Me thinks she grasped a live wire for real, this time. In Friday's episode, she gives a death glare to Lakshya for showing obvious mistrust when he asked her "tumhe jawaab dena hi hoga...you can't avoid us like this..."

But in yesterday's episode, she thanks him (as well as Sanskaar) for "believing her". 🤢 Hello? When did Lakshya trust her? Lakshya's response to this was so puke worthy---he says, without the faintest touch of irony "I trusted you from long before, Swara, I kept telling you Ragini was in the wrong"...

Even Sanskaar, who always had these fascinating layers and edges to his character, lets this foolishly bland assertion by Lakshya slide. Some snarky retort, that it was Lakshya's mistrust of Swara that has landed them all in this soup would have been appropriate? Sigh...why do I get an uneasy feeling, that after elevating Swara to a pedestal, they are now making Sansku too into a mahaan?

Sorry for the rant, Medhu...seriously I am this close to getting disengaged from the serial, and ironically, I so desperately want to stay in love with it.

I mean that guy had literally punched him almost saying sanskaar had purchased bungalows and what not for swara...(no idea why that is supposed to be such a felony though, he is her husband)...and laksh has promised he would be just friends with her..and of course he is totally over-reacting if that statement of his is correct. does she not wanna question him on these lines??

and trust karke kaunsa teer mar diya? laksh does not trust her once..and now he is doing so(although where he trusted her i failed to see even now😡).

but no. madam thanked him of all people for what? trusting her?🤢 my god..when does anyone thank people for trusting them after having been proved correct just a couple of weeks back. and mm people...they are like poor little ragini😡..whatever rags is she ain't no poor little thing.they doubt swara? like why????😲and mahaan sanskaar??ore baba.

human psychology ke bara baj gaye.🤢

there now i have ranted too viji..and i feel better.😃

Edited by medhasankar - 9 years ago

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
Cute OS!
Loved it
And it was very well written👏😊

hey sakshi right? u've changed ur user name😃??

thanks re.😊

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arohijsp

@arohijsp

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Thanks for the lovely OS.
I loved it! Actually for me it was emotional, you see my father was a dentist, he was so good and caring. He passed away ten years ago and I still miss him. I took good care of my teeth since then. Now I have a cavity it's paining sometimes, I do the same remedies mentioned in your OS! I'm waiting for my husband who's comming down for his vacation in December to take me to his dentist.lol

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nissi or jesi

@Jess_Ru

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

medha🤗 was busy so came now to forums

comng to d os astonishing,breathtaking,stunning...words over re i thought to use these one by one for ur fictions...but as always cause of dis os i had to use every word

do write more

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Hey Medhu🤗 So happy to see you back in action!!
My dentist looks like Thor with his hammer too, I'm dead scared of him! Can understand what Swara might be going through!
Her musings about fathers just filed my eyes, it reminded me of Dad, being his princess is the best thing in life, it was a heart warming part dear!
Now Sanskar is going to be a spoiling father, ice cream as many as she wants? Like really? Now she's going to abuse that boon to dust, poor chap, he's going to suffer a lot I guess.
I agree with your final conclusion, they'd make awesome parents. Such a caring mother and a strong and wise father is every child's dream, and of cause they both love each other so much hence would love any child double right? Oh, such visuals that line creates in my mind...adorable SwaSan kids!!!

Hey Saku,

I am my dad's apple-of -the-eye too. an only child on top of that..so u can imagine how attached i am to him.😃

Sanskaar is going to be an awesome father huh? he'll have good practice looking after swara before the kids come.😆

ma baap adhe pagal bachhe purey pagal.😆