Ragini ff-Zindagi milengi dubara (CH-5 UPDATED on pg-11) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
amazing concept.
plzz pm me for further updte
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
thanks... will update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: azira07

really a awesome update i really felt relax as viren and children'sn thank u for pm waiting for next update

glad that u liked it...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Aayushi15

Wow very nice chapter. Please update soon.
I have a request. Please edit the title after you update with the chapter no. So that its easy to know that you uploaded a new part.
Thanks...

yep i will do it...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: sudhi03

Eagerly waiting for the net part. Please update yaar

will update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CH-4
Scene starts in Baadi---
After having dinner the Maheshwari's has left. Shekher & Sharmishta too go to there rooms. Dada ji was sleeping, but there was no sleep in Dadi's eyes. She was thinking of a plan to destroy Maheshwaris.
Next Morning------
In Deewaan Mansion, Viren gets up and sees himself sleeping in kids room. He remembers Ragini singing a bhajan. He smiles and thinks- Kittni pyaari awaaz hai iss ki. He goes to his room to get ready.
In her room Ragini too gets up. She feels happy. She says- Its a new day & a new start. Ppl will see a new Ragini nowonwards. She goes to get ready. After sometime she gets ready and goes out. She meets Avantika.
Avantika- So ready Ragini for the new start.
Ragini- Yes aunty...
Avantika gives her a look. Ragini understands and says sorry- Maa. Avantika smiles.
Just then Avantika's mobile rings. She goes to talk.
As Ragini was going She sees kids sleeping. She thinks to wake them up.
Ragini- Ansh & Payal get up beta...
Ansh & Payal gets up & sees Ragini. They hug her.
Ansh & Payal- Good Morning , Aunty...
Ragini too wishes them back & kisses there forhead.
She sees tears in Ansh & Payal eyes.
Ragini- What happened kids... why are u crying??
Ansh & Payal again hugs her tight.
Ansh- U know aunty till today, only dadi & dad used to wake us up so lovinly.
Payal- And when today u wake up us ... we felt as our mother is waking up.
They cry. Ragini to get teary eyes. She very well knew how kids feel when they loose there mother, after all she too lost her mother when she was a kid. She too always earned for a mother's love.
Ragini breaks the hug & wipes there tears.
Ragini- Dont cry, now with ur dadi & dad i too am here. I will wake u guys everyday.
Ansh- So can we call u Mumma.
Ragini nods in yes. They both get happy. Just then Ragini sees Avantika & Viren on the door. They too had tears in there eyes. They wipe it & enters the room.
Kids see them and goes to them. Ansh & Payal- Good Morning dad & dadi... They wish them back.
Ansh- Dadi u know we got a mumma too. They say pointing towards Ragini.
Payal- Yes Dadi, our family is complete.
They take Rags hands & keeps it on Viren's. They both feel like a shock in there body. Avantika thinks-- Sacch mein aaj merra pariwaar complete ho gaya. Aur abb mein Ragini ko Viren ke pyaar ka aishaash karwungi. She smiles. Her thoughts get disturbed by Ansh voice.
Avantika- Accha, challo ansh ,payal tum donno fresh ho lo. She takes them from there.
Viren leaves Ragini hands. Sorry, woh bacche...He says.
Ragini- Its okay Viren ji main samjhti hu. Aap bahut pyaar karte hai innse.
Viren- Haa... khud se bhi jayadaa.
Ragini smiles.
Viren- BTW, Ragini hamari koi deal hui thhi kal.
Ragini- Deal...
Viren- Haa, yahi ki abb jab hum dost hai toh tum mujhe Viren jii nahi balki Viren bollo gi.
Ragini- Yep... woh sorry.. She holds her ears like a kid.
Viren smiles and says- Dosti mein no sorry, no thank u...
Ragini smiles. Viren gets mesmerized seeing her smile.
Ragini- Lets go downstairs.
She was abt to go when something pulls her. She sees her dupatta stuck in Virens watch.
Ragini- Viren...
Viren (In his own world)- Tum kittni khusurat ho Ragini.
As he said murmuring Ragini coul not hear.
Ragini- Kya... She sakes him a little.
He comes out of his world...
So how is this chapter...
Note--- Guys plz comment, i should know whether u are liking this story or not... U can also give suggestions regarding moments between Viren & Rags...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
I love your ff Swara is very harsh! How mean and why dadi think she is the cause of Ragini's problems?
They all forgot Ragini its very painful

Continue soon and post it soon too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Nice update.
I love the concept of the story
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Nice update
Loving Viren and ragini

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