The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145

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Esha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: soapbubble

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Nice, na?😳It's great when a house full of people suddenly empties itself and there is a chance for romance😳😳

Obviously 😉 you're quite smart about these things 😆

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950660

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Posted: 9 years ago

#782

It's becoming more n more interesting now..

Loved ur update again..

Waiting for next part.. :))

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#783

Ragini won't get forgiveness from Swara so easily..I loved the way Swara asked "What??" to Lakshya😆..

Swasan convo was so sweet..especially "tumhare aarzoon mere dil mein tezaab banke tapakte hain"..Beautiful dialogue Bubble 🤗
Sanskaar knows how to console Swara..😳
Now what is Ragya planning..Why do they suddenly want Ragini to go and look after Maa..To get their forgiveness, I guess..

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Indrani

@indrani7495

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Posted: 9 years ago

#784

Bubble 🤗 sorry for late rply dear...thnx for the pm's...
read both parts 39 and 40 togetha...lovely updates...😳

Part 39 - my swasan finally kissed o how lovely it was ...n swara being the initiator...😉 ahan ...nyc swara is improving...slow n dreamy romance lyk ds i luv it...😳 and d last lyn aww...sanskar's favryt flavour is swara's chocolate kisses wid a vanilla hint...loved that part ...how sweet😆

Part 40- ahh ...dese two sisters hope dey get back to nrmal soon...😊 but yes ofcrse swara will take tym...loved it wen swara askd laksh "What!?" annoyingly...😆 bt y will ragini go to shomi instd of swara 😳 what is lakshya's plan...:/ agar dono jaate to achha hota ...both sisters cud have mended their relation while they both took care of shomi togetha...
neway...lovely updates...will wait for the nxt updates!! 😃
Love...
Indrani🤗

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MillionThoughts

@MillionThoughts

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Posted: 9 years ago

#785

Hey Bubble... I'm so sorry that I'm not regularly reviewing the chapters. Like always, life's in the way.
I hope you won't get mad.
But I just want to make one thing clear, you're one of the best writers on the forum.
I really hope you write a Fic or Atleast a OneShot specifically on RagYa/RagLak.

Love
TJ!

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nida

@mystery75

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Posted: 9 years ago

#786

oh no not again plzz

now if swara agrees and ragini goes to take care of maa then after some time again her insecurities will gain control of her as she thinks that swara and lakshya are alone in MM...and there she goes again plotting against swara... ragini should not take such steps until and unless shs is not sure to trust her own heart and mind plzz ...warna phr unnecessary drama and all

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Wonderful couple of chapters Bubble---I just loved both Chap 39 and 40. 😊 The SwaSan choco brownie and vanilla flavored kiss in Chap 39 was so tender, sweet, romantic and awesome! Really delicious, as much as a choco brownie sizzler! 😆 😳

And thank you, thank you, for Swara's behavior chap 40. This is how a rational human being, who has been repeatedly betrayed and cheated reacts. Not by repeatedly forgiving the serial offender. But by baffled hurt, mistrust, and at least some level of hostility. It doesn't all become OK one fine day, just because the offending person makes some gestures. Forgiveness, especially repeat forgiveness after repeatedly sinning against that person, has to be earned. The Swara on the show kept forgiving Ragini ad nauseam, and that was probably part of the problem. Ragini never seemed to feel an iota of remorse for what she'd done.

But here, she does seem to regret--partly because she does, at some level, intrinsically feel its wrong, and partly because Lakshya has made her see just how foolish and paranoid she was. Let's see how she tries to win Swara's forgiveness and acceptance by genuinely, solicitously taking care of Shomi. 😊

Cheers

Viji

Thanks so much Viji!

Yes it does take time to trust again, right? You can even forgive if you have so much understanding and compassion but you have to be realistic about the malice another person is capable of. Blind trust is just silly.

I'm really disappointed by the Ragini on the show although they seem to be moving towards redeeming her, don't they? This version is slightly more intelligent.

Glad you enjoyed Swasan 😳

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soapbubble

@soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: whity.007
Hope again she will win every one
Heart

Hope so 😊

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soapbubble

@soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
Awesome update Bubble!
SwaSan relationship is developing so well.<3
Even Raglak. This is good!
Loved it

So glad you like how it's going😊

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soapbubble

@soapbubble

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+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
I'm loving ur updates Bubble...so sorry I haven't replied to many though!!

The way this story is going is just tooo good...laksh here is unbelievably understanding and smart and knows exactly how to tackle Ragini...and the way he took over the situation at the farmhouse and got Ragini talking about her insecurities and helping her see things in perspective...wow!!

The swasan scenes..well they r my favorite...sply Swara asking Sanskaar for a kiss!!! And Sanskaar's reaction to tht!!!!!

Awww poor Shomi's unwell but what super sync btwn ragya now...they realized without speaking what had to be done! I wonder if Swara will agree or not

Lots of love
Tas

Hi Tas,

Yeah Rag-Lak quite on the same page now - so interesting.

Ragini has to handle things right from here on.

Glad you liked Swasan 😳