The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145

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Posted: 9 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome.. 😊

Glad you liked 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: eshat.k
Umm really gentle! And soothing ''better to have the house completely to themselves'' SwaSan is So Sweet

Loved your update bubble,
Great job

Nice, na? 😳 It's great when a house full of people suddenly empties itself and there is a chance for romance 😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: Sanavi
Loved both parts.
Part 38. Ragini understood where she is wrong nd will right the things hopefully.
Part 39. Loved swasan romance.

Thanks Sanavi 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#764

Originally posted by: Allyson
Great couple of updates. I like your pattern of focusing one update on Ragini and one on Swara. It really keeps everything nice and balanced.

Thanks Allyson 😊 - it tends to tilt a bit to Ragya since they have the more complicated story but ultimately I'm trying for a story about all four

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: hp_2006
Just now read parts from 34 to 39 dear Bubble..and they were all so good to read..sorry for being late in reading and commenting..😳
Finally Ragini got to know about Lakshya from sanskaar😉 loved the way she confessed everything to lakshya..glad she did it..and lakshya also forgave her..younger raginis insecurities for swara and sharmishta and lakshya trying to console her everything was so perfect..👏
and i loved all raglak moments..😳
swasan story also progressed and swara initiated the kiss was..ohhh my god..you just killed me with this update yaar☺️ superb mind blowing kiss it was..i am still in hot swasanworld..

Glad you enjoyed this Naina.

Ragini and Lakshya coming closer to understanding each other

And Swara - yes, Sanskaar making sure to keep her pace.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: StarshineHues
I sat down and read your story in one go, its that wonderful. Your Ragini reminds me of one of my favorite fictional characters of all time - Scarlett O'Hara. Not a popular choice I know, but I love her to bits. She's headstrong and selfish, but is so strong and so passionate. And I adore your Lakshya as well. He's perfect for your Ragini, so resolute and determined. You're building up their relationship wonderfully, and in tandem with Ragini's evolution. I love how Lakshya sees he's contributed to Ragini's insecurities as well, albeit unknowingly. And I love they way you write them - with all this emotional build-up, they still have that zing to them.

Thanks so much!

I guess Ragini is a bit like Scarlett in the sense of being somewhat amoral - and yes, I do love that she thrums with passion.

Thanks for liking this Lakshya - I like him quite a lot myself.

And happy to know I'm communicating the zing 😃