The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

It was such a pleasure to read this update.. So easy going and impactful !

Finally it had bestowed on Lakshya, that Swasan are for each other n Sanskhar aint playing any games with him.. He is jus being loyal to lady he loves without demanding anything back..

I cnt say this about show, bt as per ur story.. I feel, its only Lakshya who can heal Ragini and show her the right part.. Only he can bring the old ragini back, not anyone in the world would b able to that accept for him.. May be he would help her to come out of her obsession n see d world in lighter means n in this process, falls in love with her.. Thr is a growth tht is needed in Ragya, not coz of pressure or guilt, but out of natural urge to mk it fine.. This is jus my way of thinking 😕

Baki, waitin for the next chapter.. Update soon :)

PS- Hv been a silent reader but its written so beautifully that made me leave a comment !

Originally posted by: sonakshi.sharma

Awesome update

I loved calling swara devi more from sanskar

Loved bonding b/w swasan

Cont soon

Waiting

Thanx 4 pm

Originally posted by: asexualflower

Hey,

Read all four parts at once and I must say it's a great start! Your concept is very interesting. I've buddy requested you, please accept and please PM me when you update. 😛

- Sapna

Originally posted by: Sakura24

From just four tiny parts this story has captured my full attention and also a place in my heart. The shades you've brought in Lakshya are praise worthy, he is all flesh and blood here, human and understood, to a certain length justified as well. But after reading this part, especially the last lines where he analyses Sanskar's course of action...am I allowed to feel a tad of fear?

For Ragini in the first part...well she is what we all know she can be.

Swara..her trust developing slowly towards Sanskar is beautifully put here, I loved reading their scene.

Sanskar...you're still building him up, for some reason he feels a mystery here more than on the show, shrewd...is it just me or is he layered here?

All in all, I really love the progress, can't wait to read more. Please continue soon.

-love

Sakura