The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145 - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice..finally swara's confusion is clear.
Update soon and thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really cute update Bubble😳

Swasan nok-jhoks were a delight to read..😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
i m in luvng dis mature lakshya
nd wow totaly luv ch 10 lakshya atitude
lakshya swara convo
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh poor sanskar?! why this lady wake him up in early morning 2.00?
Swara- why she s interfering Ragya?!
btw, loved d way swara rubbed sanskar's wet hair with towel in chap9!
Nice Update dear. Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey!

I read all the parts today! Lovely FF, really enjoyed reading it! I like your wrting style, the way you analyse the characters' feelings. But I have one request- Please put some SwaSan romance. You take your time.. I will be hooked! But will expect loads of SwaSan please..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice couple of chapters, Bubble. I liked chap 10 mostly for the mature, level headed interaction between Lakshya and Sanskaar. I liked how Lakshya did feel a bit irritated that Sanskaar was asking him stuff about his private moments with Ragini, but recognised that he was only doing this out of genuine concern that Ragini could be manipulating him.
Swara, on the other hand, jumped to conclusions and actually accused him of "taking advantage" of Ragini. 😆 She still doesnt fully realize that her messed up sister isn't a vulnerable babe in the woods.😉

I did find Lakshya's sentence to Swara, sarcastically asking if she was feeling jealous, somewhat malicious. Considering he knows how Sanskaar feels about her, he really needn't have resorted to that...Though of course, I guess he still has some resentment at the way things there panned out.

As for chapter 11, I liked the mature way you made Sanskaar and Swara talk their way through their slight misunderstanding, rather than retreat behind walls of hurt and mistrust. Sanskaar obviously felt, that one reason for Swara's extreme reaction to the news of Lakshya taking his relationship with Ragini forward, was her own residual feelings for him. I liked the fact that though he was hurt by this, he handled it in a very mature manner. And Swara, though she got angry and asked him to sleep in the guest room, realized she needs to clarify things. That conversation over steaming mugs of Badam milk, in the wee hours of the morning, was wonderful. 😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
phew...glad they got that out frm their systems. ... uncharacteristically sanskaar was hung on the idea tht swara loves laksh still ... so hopefully they will go to the next phase frm here now...
Thnx fr the pm bubble.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Allyson

Another nice update. I love the camaraderie between these two.


Thank you, glad you liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

Awesome as always... Thank god swara understood everything and made it clear with sanskar 😊


Thanks!

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