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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

i loved the easy camaraderie they finally fell into now...they have gotten used to each other and there is warmth in them and likely even for the others not so nice remarks. i don't think swara realised she will need to call him this soon...but then it KC had to show his true colours. you are amazing...you have brought a high speed car chase into this one. totally action packed masala story this is turing out to be. i cannot wait for Gabriel to rush over and save her. the goons are then going to care about their comments when they see who they are facing. wounded lion is out on the prowl. looking forward to the next action packed edition 👏



Sapna..
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thank you so much dear girl for this wonderful comment.
they surely were such an unlikely flatmates.. Him a calm force and she a chaos.
hopefully further story would do justice to this equation.

thankh ku..😳. i love car chases.. especially if a girl is at wheels! girl power yo!

goons will have a heart seizure i guess. they went thinking they are hunting a deer😈.

thank you once again dearie for liking this update and this wonderful comment.
love.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Read it 😉. Maybe i should wait before jumping to read it the minute i see the PM. 😆 . Since you always leave me wanting to read the next chapter like now and if i asked you after few hours of your posting a new one to update the next chapter it might seem reasonable than asking minutes later 😆.Well since i cant be so mean and greedy i wont say it today but let me know when you update .😊.

Nita..
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you really are so cute. thank you for this.



So on to the chapter now, i loved it , so Gabriel stayed there for a week and they become kind of roomates , i always such type of friendships turning into Love later kind of Romance 😉. So they have become close and i love it.

same pinch. i love my love stories to have a strong foundation. nothing is stronger than friendship for this. let's take it slooowww!

He never said a single things about her but he knows almost everything about her ? And i love their daily routine you created . Cant Gabriel stay back in the house now since SWara life is in danger ofcourse not because i like to see them living together once again 😆.

your wish my command girl.
not giving away anything now. but choon! i promise!


I think she will come to like the deal Gabriel made than the deal she wanted, And as someone above said i didnt think she would need to call him so soon but well i am glad it happened.
and i think she will make full use of this deal too. our girl is quite diabolical that way.
let me know if the story goes too fast. it is indeed quite fast paced me thinks.


Ofcourse Kc has to be such idiot to believe them to be CBI without asking to see their Credentials. What a reporter ?😡 .
our good old KC. such a wonderful.. errr.. Ass.😆.

Thank you so much Nita for liking the update and commenting.
love.🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: simsen23

Nimmi...
Simi..
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..i know its fiction not real
but i felt pain in my heart after reading swara and gabriel's separation.

aww.. it is just temporary dear. not even a day passed by. they will be back together soon.

they had long convos..wow
he knws everything abt her
she knws nothing...they were so happy in that love nest
... 😭 ..but separated...
cheer up dear. you will get them back soon. real soon.

I want to send the man KC to hell...coz of him..swara is unsafe...
N gabriel ...did nt he feel something ..(ya he felt...)but i mean emotion like love fr swara or pain fr separation?i knw gaby is a strong n rough guy...but still...
well he did think that it would be difficult to forget his nutty fruitcake😆. me thinks he got used to her now.

N m proud of gabriel ..he knws everything..philosophy,history..bla bla..n also behaves so well
Then..why this profession?...
a back story here. will come up in the main story later. hope you will like it simi.

I know i am asking u so many questions,but really i felt d separation of 2 souls...a rough n silent man and a cute but daring lady...
really showie about this dear one. but i will make it up to you.

I can say one line for gabriel...who has a awesom personality
"U CAN LOVE ME OR HATE ME,BUT CANT IGNORE ME"


neither his enemies nor his friends(well for me swara is his friend after the handshake) can ignore him...

Beautifully said.❤️


But i know they will meet again... 🥱 .. 😳 ...n we will get good swara-gabriel moments from u.
N dis apte n ram prashad...uff..shabji should know their true colour..
fingers crossed girl. hopefully you will enjoy the further story.😳

N yee swara on wheels...go girl...go sona..love u gabriel's kitten.
she is indeed a powerpuff girl

Update soon ...dear...cant wait for ur next update 😆.

thank you so very much Simi for this sweet comment. 🤗
Updating soon.

love
simi... 😊 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nusrat-kabir

Now i can't wait dear... 😭 ..but hope you will update soon 😃 ..and yeah...THANK YOU for the update ⭐️ 😆 👏



Nusrat🤗.

thank you so much girl.
yes! updating soon😳

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Posted: 9 years ago


Thank you Abika😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

I loved it

Thaught there will be a interview



Swetha..
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Thank you so much dear.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome awesome aweso loved it very much. Loved the way story progressing. Eagerly waiting the next update. Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Already read two times. But stil one more read needed. To comment. Wait...




Finally...
Wonderful update machi .

Machi..
🤗
Thank you so much.


Apte helping Laksh and Ram prasad for the promise.But that's not fair.
They are pampering Laksh is so so tooo much.I hating that.They can't baby sit him always. One day he has to taset his own venom.

well said dear. Laksh will soon taste his own venom. our guy will make sure of it.

Now they tracked Swara. Chasing her now.my institution is telling me that they might thing Bozo has her BF.it might go wrong. Nowadays it's failing me.

updating about that soon. hopefully you will enjoy it Machi.

No words for that LEECH kc

"He is GOD,I'm DEVIL."Nice .
And the whole interaction between G&S are soo good.

Ggaby will keep an eye on Swara.

Loads of Love for you...

and loads and loads of love for you too.
thank you for reading the update and liking it girl.🤗




Kamila...

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Banjaaran25 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rose1998

This chapter is so beautiful.
The way Swara thinks of Gabby and vice versa.Yes it will be difficult to forget here.Just like she is in his subconscious mind too.
He will be always there for Swara even he is dead.Yes he will be there.
Nice chapter Nimmie.



Rose..
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Thank you so much dear for reading the update and liking it.
and this comment.

Swara surely seeped into his subconsciousness. whether he likes it or not.
and He sure will be there for her. always.

thank you once again again.
love.



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bhshre95

Nimmi🤗. Wonderful update⭐️ quite fast paced

So gaby didn't give interview😆
Aww Both will miss each other😳 n Gaby can cook, he is an all rounder😳
N cho sweet of him , he promised to come whenever she needs help
So nw swara seems to be in big trouble, so will she manage by herself or will she call Gaby hope no harm is done to swara n bozo😭
N kc I just hate him😡
Don't keep me waiting much dear I really want read more
Plz continue soon...😃😃



Shreya..
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thank you so much dear for liking the update.

😆 He said he wont give the interview.. but... nopes not telling more now.
our guy is indeed all-rounder.

hummm.. will she call him or try to be a super girl and what about Bozo.. tell you what.. gonna update right now about it. hopefully you will like it.😳.

updating soon.

thanx again buddy.
love.

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