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Posted: 9 years ago
U know how much i look forward for ur updates...waiting waiting...n wish u a v.v.v.v.v.happy new year 2016... 😆 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rose1998

RES!

UNRES!

Nimmie,
Fabulous chapter. How can Swara laugh infront a assassin and how can't she do it when it is infront our Gabby. I liked this part very much.The comic element you bring in your stories are worth a second reading. Your vocabulary also seems quite wide.👏

Rose..
🤗.
aww.. thank you SO much dear for such generous words.
*hugs*
and yeah.. that's our Swara.😆. and He let her be. that proves that this girl can get away with anything when it comes to him.


Sanskaar name revealing was awesome. After a lot of waiting we got our Swasan back.
Totally worth an applaude Nimmie.👏.

Thank you so very much dearie.
and yes.. our Swasan are going to stay.
I am really glad you liked the update dear.
Thanx again..

Lots of love.



P.S; Happy New yeaer. Have a blast this year!

Thankh ku Rose.. wish you the very same. Rocking new year ahead.⭐️

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TRPS

Hey Nimmi. 🤗

Toshi..
🤗

Sooo!! Gaby boy stole the thunder as usual. Period.
I think it was one of the best days of Swara's life. Aha!! Charming handsome assassin Gabby who makes delicious food for her , nice company to talk on any thing. *Awesome, so cool* he first thwarted Dragon 🤣 then that leech and biggest fool KC.😃 it was so pleasurable to read.

Thankh ku😳.
barring that Assassin part he indeed sounds like a perfect man. haina!
and now toh we are not even bothered about his profession😆.
Let's see when Swara will join us.


Gabby is so caring naa!! he asked KC to stay away from Swara even when She will come back.
I know no one can match him. but Since boy's mann is being a hardcore rebellious, I thought Dragon's tips could help. err!! whom I was kidding !! *Sowwy Gabby* * and lots of hugs from... Swara* . asking Gabby to take tips to manage Swara from "mosquito sized dragon".. and she ran as he had insecticide in his hand.🤣 to be honest, never thought Dragon is so coward. by the way!! for Swara, Now no need to feel intimidated by Dragon!! As she can remind of Gaby to Dragon now and then. 😉.

Toshi.. girl you have a mean sense of humour.
i am now visualizing Gaby with an insecticide and dragon the size of mosquito zooming away.
you really are a girl after my own heart.
psst.. Bullies are cowards. that's why our cute little Dragon got so scared. poor thing.
and hey good advice for Swara Toshi.😆



And Gaby asked my doubt from Swara and also enlightened the situation. OK!! Gotcha girl!!

hey.. he surely listens to you Toshi. dil ka connection eh😳!

Ahaan!!! badhne lagein hain do dilon ki nazdeekiyaan.. ☺️ they trust, believe each other so much.
and that Hug!! Hayee!!! 😃 Both felt so good and at peace.

❤️. more nazdeekiyan on the way.
all our Id's will be banned the way this story will progress beware hu😆!


So, Sanskaar entered in the picture. I just don't have heart to laugh on him. because after seeing his personality , I think he never wanted this. but If Swara's laugh can bring smile on his face and made him feel less guilty, then I am alright.

more than Swara i am cracking up.
after all that image building his name turned out to be errr. so Sanskaari. can't think of anyone more asanskaari than him.


Nimmi, I have one doubt. If Swara will publish or telecast his all details, won't he expose fully in front of all, especially to those who know who is Gabriel.

feeling like Dumbledore shaking his head at Harry when confronted with questions Toshi
*shakes head*
can't reveal anything now. well our guy being Lafanga (your name for him. gahh i so love this name) won't care a hoot.
but what will happen when Swara goes ahead with the story.. that part will be told only in the last epis.
showie.😳.


Well, it was very hilarious update and yeah, with suspense of the past. eagerly waiting for the next update. 😊.

Thank you so very much Dear girl.
🤗.
I am so glad you enjoyed the update.
will update soon..

Happy new year to you too Nimmi. 🤗




awwiee.
thank you so very much buddy for such a beautiful message..
a fantastic new year to you too darling.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

sorry it took me a bit of time to get through the update. swara is so childlike in this...her naivet in how an assassin should look like, about the battle field she is in, KC, and his name...as sanskar said, he doesnt encounter this in his world, it is rare for him and it attracts him immensely. and swara on her part sees warmth and protection in him that he hasnt let any one else see. so you have peel a small aspect of his past...his name...that he has been willing to open up to swara about. looking forward to seeing them open up more with each other. who is this baba?

amazing wrrittig. as i said before, the way you write make it easier for me to visualise the scenes. amazing amazing amazing 👏 👏 🤗



Sapna..
🤗.

Thank you so much dear friend.
for reading the update and liking it.
and this wonderful comment.

you know your musings give me new perspective and help me to mold my story accordingly.
so big thank you for this.

showie.. Baba mystery will be opened in later updates. but not much further i guess. soon. pakka.

and thank you so much for the compliment Sapna.🤗.
You really are sweet.

Lots of love.❤️.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess2791

Wonderful loved very much. Read both character in one go. Sorry for late comment im on holiday take care.?




Thank you so much Princess.🤗.
Enjoy your holidays dear.
happy times.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Hey girl
It was really a surprise to get 3 back to back updates.
Loved the Dragon date. Hw easily Gabriel convinced Dragon of his occupation. The gift idea was awesome.
kc is an idiot. Gabriel gave him an attack. Also Gabriel made sure tht KC won't hurt his girl in future. Hope KC will be true to his words.
Gabriel's name is Sanskaar. Wht the mystery behind this name, wld like to know.
Waiting for next update.



Sanavi..
🤗

Thank you so much dear for liking the update and this comment.

if KC won't keep his words.. well our guy is there to remind him na😈.

yeah.. Imagine.. Gabriel is Sanskaar. no wonder Swara cracked up.
and hey.. the mystery shall be unveiled soon. or a little later.
hope you will enjoy that part.😳.

Thanks again dearie.
love.
and jhappis.



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cinderella3

Nimmi... 🤗

Ashi..
🤗


First of all, a very happy new year to you! May all your dreams come true in the coming year. And enjoy your trip! 😃
Appy appy new year to you too dear girl and best wishes.

Now coming back to the update; I was literally laughing out loud reading the meeting between Gaby and Dragon! 🤣 Girl! It was so entertaining! 😆.

Thankh ku.
thankh ku😳. i am so glad this update made you laugh.

And then comes the leech, the jackass, KC. 🤢 My face really twisted in displeasure reading about him. But then, an evil smile started spreading on my face the moment Gabriel caught hold of him. Tch! tch! I'm so evil! 😈.

we all are evil.😆. man we are certified mean girls.
adoring and assassin. and cheering his errr acts.

Gabriel... I love this man! I love his attitude! Ahhh! I love everything about him! ❤️ The way he gives it back to people and put them in their places! But when it comes to our crazily adorable girl, he just can't do anything. He calls her Kitten, but he himself acts like one in front of her! 😆 How easily he gives in to her whims and fancies! And he hugged her back?! Awww... That was so adorable! .

awww... loved the way you put it Ashi.
Gabriel and his attitude.
he indeed acts like a kitten in front of her. her personal genie too. jo hukum mere aaka kinds.
gee.. i am cho glad the hug turned out to be sweet.😳

Ah! At last Sanskar makes an entry! 😎

Sanskar! The Assassin! 🤣.

i still can't believe that the character like Gabriel has got such a sanskaari name. had he been a real character he would have sued me. (or murdered me😆)

I'm glad that though unintentionally, Swara helped Gaby in healing one of his wounds. And I'm sure that her companionship will soon heal him completely. I'm eager to see their equation once that happens!

Fingers crossed*.
hopefully we will get a beautiful story of a life time.


Continue soon dear! Thank you for the pm! 🤗.

My pleasure dearest.🤗
Thank you so much Ashi for this wonderful comment.

love ya.


Love,
Ashi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Hey Nimmi thank you so very much for this amazing long long long update I absolutely loved reading it I had a huge smile on my face while reading this one it was sheer beauty believe me..

The undercurrents of attraction felt by Swara on seeing Gabriel aka Sanskaar's suave persona and her hilarious request to him to look like an assassin had me laughing like crazy..

Kashmi..
🤗

Thank you so much dearie.
and hey i should be thanking you for liking this update and this amazing comment.
I am so glad you enjoyed it.

The dragon Swara Gabriel meeting was funny yet again dragon assuming Gabriel as Swara's boyfriend which he will maybe in the future kabhi toh hoga hi.. Her absolutely scared reactions on his suggestion to show her how a real true blue assassin he is.. And then I absolutely loved hoe Gabriel kicked KC's backside royal kick on his backside by God..

boyfriend.. yup. he will be more than that. much more.
will take it slow. dum biryani! yo!

and haha. we are so mean. enjoying the thrashing that poor KC got. and good old dragon and her slaying.😆


The possessive side did come out when he told him to stay the hell away from his pixie girl on whom only he has the right to irk and irritate.. And then the best part of this update was the beautiful side hug awwweee I was soo soo soo happy..

gee... thank you so much Kashmi
i really am happy that this update made you so happy. sachhi.


The awkward side hug and that awkward smile on Gabriel's part and the blinding smile by Swara all i could imagine in my small brain.. That part was the best..

and this is just the beginning.
fingers crossed for more beautiful moments between those two.❤️

And then the KJO style rapid fire round just that the difference Gabriel wasn't gonna get a goodie actually he did get one but a different one and a bigger one.. The continous laughter by Swara on knowing his real name, so finally his name is out..

yeah his name is out. and poor thing got laughed at for that. more like got ROFL for that name.😆.
loved the way you put it girl. Goodie!

Sanskaar's reasoning to himself as to why she is dear to him and why he wouldn't protect her.. I loved that part.. Growing feelings on his part.. I'm loving it just loved this update and the previous one's too..

Thank you so very much Kashmi for liking the updates and for this wonderful comment.
hopefully you will enjoy the further story too.

Lots and lots of love.


Love,
Kashmi

P.S Update very very soon and as big as this one..

Edited by Banjaaran... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dimaag

Hey Nimmi! 😉
Two updates? 👏 Firstly that part was so dramatic where Gabriel almost choked kc and asked about what he gonna do with swara at office. After that,I was laughing loud while reading the concern of Gabriel of asking kc to become nonexistent as he tried the other way🤣.
Secondly I know all will agree to the title( may be) in swara's story- Sanskar the assasin. Made me grin too. The name is too contradictory with that of the work he actually does.
At first I thought may be laksh was following them but when I read it was kc,yeah! I thought how can Nimmi be like a meek and start the whole action scenario so fast? 😕 Kidding yaar! 😃
Happy new year in advance and I hope 2016 brings a bagful of prosperity and success to your life too.
Thanks for the pm and the wonderful updates,my girlfriend 😃 and once you come back do update soon.

Lots dhisum dhiisum & love
😉 N



Girlfriend.
🤗

single update re.. but it became too long to fit in. Again!

thank you so much dear N for reading the updates and liking them re.
and then this lovely comment.

yeah! Sanskaar the assassin🤣.
Gabriel ban gaya Sanskaar. he never would have imagined it. kaha his job and kaha that traditional beautiful name. Bechara!

gee.. you know me so well N.😈.
Meanie Me!
nayy.. i will throw in more suspense and torture before😆.

thank you for the wonderful wishes dearie.
I wish you the very same.
big and bigger Jhappis.
🤗.

(and yo! will update choon).

Lots of love.





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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: simsen23

Dear Nimmi...
It was a treat from you...
The date of gabriel and dragon was hilarious...
Haha 😆 ..i can imagine her face...lol
then the tratment to the jerk KC was awesome
swara's monolouge about playgirl magazine 😆
seriously ...our gabby is superb
..finally gabriel is sanskar...
Sanskar the assassin
I felt the feelings of sanskar 😉
the most catchy one was his kitten...i just love my swasan...
I will miss sunday update...but we can understand...still whenever you get time please update
Happy new year
love
simi 😊



Simi..
🤗.

Thank you so much darling for liking the updates.
and this sweet comment.
I am really happy you enjoyed the story.

😆 feelings of Gabriel when he hears that Sanskaari name for his asanskaari self.
oh the irony!

me lubs Swasan too.
chame pinch mate.

showie about the missed update simi. and thank you for being so sweet.
will update soon.

big hugs and lots of love.❤️




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