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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Nimmi...
It was a treat from you...
The date of gabriel and dragon was hilarious...
Haha 😆 ..i can imagine her face...lol
then the tratment to the jerk KC was awesome
swara's monolouge about playgirl magazine 😆
seriously ...our gabby is superb
..finally gabriel is sanskar...
Sanskar the assassin
I felt the feelings of sanskar 😉
the most catchy one was his kitten...i just love my swasan...
I will miss sunday update...but we can understand...still whenever you get time please update
Happy new year
love
simi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
its awesome dear...n have a beautiful year ahead to u..in advance "Happy New Yaar Nimmi".
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Posted: 9 years ago
I hate you! Yes I simply do...I hate all those who force me to take a leap and harbour feelings for abraded beings of the night. And I hate them more for the fact that they keep me hooked in a manner that is most tantalising and almost irresistible! The last time that someone had messed up my head this bad was Allan Cubitt with his Paul Spector in a series called The Fall. I was praying like a devout Catholic for the well being of a serial killer and rapist and here you are screwing my mind to do the same for an assassin!!



Not fair Nimmi...not fair at all! I am a good girl, I went to a Convent where Sisters taught me not to harbour sinister thoughts and Gaby boy is evoking some high end forbidden fantasies! I'll be damned and I also fear that I will never be salvaged...so much for loving Judas err, Gabriel!



I am a nomad much like you...to stick around at one place is really not my cup of lassi...so while roaming around I stumbled upon this Gaby boy and yes there was no turning back, not even when I was writing my exams which are pretty important you see. Anyways bundling all that aside, there is something religiously sinister about Gabriel and no its not just his name that ticks you, maybe something way beyond that. The opening of the novel was not grim at all. Instead it was neatly cultivated and maybe that is exactly what pulled my curious cat out of her slumber. When you said in initial lines that it's a dark fiction my mind drew up images of Gabriel being a victim of some sort of savage uprising but I was balled over seeing that I had been siding with a completely wrong notion of things. He isn't a victim that I had initially suspected him to be rather he is the predator that leaps in that one fatal move and ends with a rattling intensity of victory!



I am a literature student + biology student( a complicated, messed up thing please don't investigate!!) and characterisation is like a sacrament that is not to be messed with and I love you so much more for that. I hate when evil or grey is justified. I hate when they are given a sad whip to self flagellate. I believe in choosing things for yourself and Gabriel comes across as someone who has chosen a dark life for himself and that too without a stench of remorse of any kind. What I love even more is that duniya-jaaye-bhaad-mein attitude! Oh God! Why can't you make men like him in reality??





Another brilliant aspect of this is the colour play! While Gabriel is seen lurking in shadows, Swara dwell in a different hue...such a stark contrast! And how well it fits into the story! I am holding a few cards close as far as Swara is concerned. She really is an alluring trouble, a deadly siren and a congenial idiot all rolled into one! And thank heavens she is not the self-loathing woman that we are presented with on the show, this one is more on the edge. Me likey!! The other thing that I like is the fact that she isn't forcing her ideas on this man, all she wants is a clear cut way out all the while playing friends with benefits. Not bad...not bad at all. But what surprised me the most was her sheer innocence, I could see why Gabriel was so baffled and taken aback with that key ingredient that makes the most of this petite yet formidable Swara Bose. I am really pulling my hairs in excitement for I want to see the meandering rivers that creates such an odd yet wonderful personality who is giving Gabriel a thorough run for his faculties! I really love their encounters, which are surprisingly pleasant...at times it seems like Gaby sweetie is dealing with a temperamental four year old!



I am 31 chapters late but mann-mein-hai-vishwaas-poora-hai-vishwaas that I'll make a detailed comment on each one of them! Also I have to continue my tryst with my dentist so yeah a painful new year is seemingly ahead!



Anyways happy new year to you! And thank you for wishing me luck for my exams...they were GREAT!!



P.S. Aren't you Candy Lemon from Happenstance?? I can swear I have read this on that blog!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow! 3 updates in one go ... loving the New Year Gift to us! 😃
Haha .. so the pinup guy of 'PlayGirl' 😆 makes the mighty Dragon into a Mouse and the way she scooted! She was so nervous.. did not even want to have contact with Swara directly, hiding behind Bozo shield! LOL!

And KC!!! So Gabriel ensured he doesn't trouble Swara later on! Sweet of him or is he J?!😳

The side hug is much like in the serial! Well lets see how much time it takes from the friendly side hug to passionate frontal hug both in this story and in the serial! 😉

Finally 'Sanskar' has come out! I am so glad that Swara and her antics making Sanskar come out of the hurt, bitterness and be able to smile. 😊

Happy new year Nimmi. You can call me Jas! 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
i joined india forums just for u..very nyc update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Again sorry for late reply
Busy now a days
Lovely update
N happy new year dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmie 🤗 🤗
Yippie Yippie New Year Babes.. Wish U A Very Fab Year Ahead. Stay blessed. Sound Safe!😳

Yay me back to Updates🤗
chap30: Mindblowing Update Nimmo! Just Amazing.Im not going to cut deep into it n distrub U kiddo😆. Im just loving d way the plot very much as its progressing!Lob Ya for this piece❤️. Swara,poor lady losted her Samsung Galaxy S6!😆. And our hero is just least bothered about it!! thorughly enjoied der convo. Both are falling .I missed Anjel alot but wat to do lil bc around my xams. Loved the way swara pulled Gabreil cheeks.Aww! I was literally imagining VaHe over der. oh god dey just look adorable! Imagining Varun over. Loved loved Gabreil and laksh part to core. I love this firing Gabreil!He was back with full rage! Cmon gabreil pull him out!
Touched by this'Always pleasure to cook for her' OH MY GOSH!!! loved it!
chap31:- Gabreil and Swara silent monologues! 👏 .Best part dragan gabreil and Swara. Dragon 🤣 .Nimmo It seems U digged deeply to know about weapons.As always U surprise me girlie! KC digged his own way😆.Will he play along with Ram in future?!hpe No!Got hard from Gabreil😆.BTW Loved 'touch me not'. apt name.! cmon gabreil!! Side hug❤️. Is Gabreil shy or Uncomfortable?!😆..And the most most awaited sequence aired! yay hurray 🥳 whoa!! Finally Gabreil turned to SANSKAR! My dil❤️.Im dead!!.But it seems like his Fb is scary and pain.hmm plz dont make us wait along!Loved loved loved it. Awesome Updates as always!
Trust me I was grinning, laughing and even slightly blushing(donno why!😆)while reading Gabreil and Swara convo and my mom was passing dirty looks all over And bleive me it was not easy to calm her down!!😆
Lob Ya! Amazing!!
Wish U all success all around! Keep Smilling! Happy journey! TC😳
Edited by Anglaise - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey just loved chap 31...dis s getting really interesting...now gabriel trusts swara very much . he even told his real name to her
Sanskar the assassin ...too good dear ...damn why the chap ended. I want more. Happiee vacations n new year...plz update soon ...
Ayushi
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Posted: 9 years ago
waitng for the nxt update...pls update fast...i wait for Wednesdays and Sundays...very nice story...sum tyms i think that cvs should take ideas from u...at least it contains some adventure some fun...not lyk every day rona dhona...its really boring...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey sweety 😳 waiting for update.. 😃

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