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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Preet what a lovely lovely OS.🤗

Sanskaar's khichdi adventure obviously made Sujata need to hire a cleaning service.:DD

" chhora khana bana ke gaya ya jang ladke?""🤣"aaj toh kitchen ka satyanash hoga''

poor sanskaar he caught fever from Swara.:(((

but how adorable were the both of them. Husband caring for his darling wife..and wife doing the same.

I kept imagining only at the background descriptions you gave.

Round up your last exam day after tomorrow nicely. Best of luck.

Love--

Medha.

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mridulakrishnan

@mridulakrishnan

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

cute story dear...sanskar kitna khayal raktha swara ka...😊

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Its sweet cute lovely os.
How much i love ths caring sanskar,also naughty one.
Swasan nt only share thr happynes,sadnes thy share thr fever also.lol.
I love it.i wish serial me aisa kuch mil jata i mean 4m swara's side.

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wow awesome awesome update...

Loved it it much...

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nissi or jesi

@Jess_Ru

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

res

unres yesss i got it ... ur name preet hain na saw in a comment heard about u in AT long time back ...

damn good os me too want sanskar in kitchen he will look super hot ...thanks to u ...dono pagal iss mein nahi hain 😃

thanks for pm do write more

Edited by Messi2 - 9 years ago

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naina

@hp_2006

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awww😳😳😳 Such a beautiful OS filled with the warmth of their love..

Sanskaar took care of Swara with his heart..

I loved Sujata's dialogues..The way she screamed at her chora after he had made the kitchen a war place..😆

But your description of Sanskaar with the khichdi inside their bedroom was so cute..his apron his hair everything you just described perfectly😃😃

And finally the kiss..☺️ It was sooo perrrfffecttt😳

And poor Sanskaar , got fever from Swara..🤣 But it was so sweet, because of the kiss na..😉

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Awe it was so cute

Loved it

Sanskar making food for Swara

It was truly adorable

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Nice...

Loved SwaSAN CARING FOR EACH OTHER...

Thank you for the PM

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Very cute and lovely Preet. I am a big fan of nature descriptions, so I got completely involved in your tale, the moment you talked about the November breeze, the red, orange and yellow leaves whispering to each other while floating along in the wind...😊 very lovely imagery.

And our favorite couple taking care of each other when they are unwell...so romantic. First Sansku is the ideal pati and takes perfect care of Swara---and is unable to resist kissing his lovely patni even when she has fever. 😊

And the next day, she is perfectly all right (maybe the injection, maybe the medicines, or maybe Sanskaar's kiss? 😛), but Sanskaar is now unwell. So now its Swara's turn to take care of him. 😉

That last quote on laughter being the shortest distance between 2 people: so very profound.

I loved this piece!

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Sorry dear, I read this a while ago but could not comment because I was having world war III with my internet connection. Thank god I won in the end!

This is awesome! Together in sickness and in health just like a husband and wife should. I adore that cooking for Swara part! He's so concerned for her.

This is one of the cutest one shots I've read! Wonderful to the last word!!!

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