Ragini-Ek nayi shuruwat FF Ch-16 Updated & Finished..... - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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it's awsm update
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

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wow dis first part was amazing n interesting. plzz update next part sooon
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CH-2
Pooja ends. All the family members where having breakfast.
Sid & Viren where ready to go to office.
Vandana- Chalo puja acche se ho gayi. Hai na maa.
Naintara- Haa, aur Nivi & Ragini ne sab kucch acche se samhal liya.
Bhupat- Accha chalo ab main aaram karne jaata hoon.
Ragini- Dada saheb aap phir bhul gaye naa.
Bhupat looks towards Naintara. She signals like "I dont know"
Bhupat- (Looking confused) Main kya bhool gaya beta?
Nivi- Aapki Medicine Dada saheb. Ragini aapki medicine ki baat kar rahi hai. She hands over a glass of water to him & Ragini hands him his medicine.
Ragini- Dada saheb aap hamesha bhul jaate.
Bhupat- Jab ghar mein mera itna khayal rakh ne wali ek nahi doon-doon betiyaan ho toh mujhe fikar karne ki kya jarrurat hai. He blesses both of them. All the family members smile except Chanchal. She thinks-
Chanchal (self-thought)- Pata nahi kaun sa jadu kar diya hai jise dekho woh Nivedita aur Ragini ke hi guun gata rahta hai.
Bhupat go to his room. Others to went to there rooms. Only Sid, Ragini,Viren & Nivi are there.
Sid - Viren aaj tu hamare naye hotel ke liye plot dekhne jaa raha hai na.
Viren- Haa bhai, Bas direct wahi jaa raha hoon.
Sid- Okay chal phir shaam ko milte hai. Ragini main jaa raha hu.
Sid & Viren leave.
Ragini & Nivi finishes kitchen work. They go to see Kavya & Naren. They were playing.
Nivi- Ragini, Mujhe tummse kucch baat karna hai. Tere room mein chal sakte hai.
Ragini- Haa, dii, aayiey na. They go to her room.
Nivi- Ragini, tu mujhe apni badi bahen manti hai na.
Ragini- Haa, Baat kya hai?
Nivi- Ragini, Kya tere aur Sid ke rishte mein sab kucch sahi hai? Mera matlab tumhari shaadi ko 4 saal hogaye lekin tum donno ke beech aaj bhi kaphi awkwardness hai.
Ragini- Dii,mujhe pata hai aap kya kahna chachati hai, lekin aap toh jaanti hai na meri aur Sid ki shaadi kin circumstances mein hui thhi. Aur mera past... Darr lagta hai di, phir se kissi ke karib jaane main, phir kissi pein vishwaas karne mein, phir kissi se pyaar karne main, darr lagta hai ki phir wahi sab kucch toh nahi hoga na jo pahele hua. Tears were flowing from her eyes. Aapko pata hai dii, aajtak jis par bhi vishwaas kiya ussne sirf dokha diya. Maine uss aadmi se pyaar kiya thha, hamare parivaar waalo ne usse chunna thha hamare liye, lekin ussne kabhi hameshe pyaar kiya hi nahi, woh toh hamari bahen se pyaar karta thha, aur hamari bahen ussne kya kiya humnne uss par kitna vishwaas kiya thha lekin ussne hamare hi peeth par khangar laga diya. Aur jis insaan ne humme pyaar ke liye ladna sikhaya woh bhi humme majdhaar mein chod kar chala gaya. Humme har kadam par dokha hi milla... (She breaks down)
Nivi comes and hugs her.
Nivi- Ragini, kya tum jaanti ho Sid tumse kitna pyaar karta hai. Tumhare liye usska pyaar uski aankho mein dikhta hai. Woh tumhare saath kabhi bhi na toh galat karenga aur na hi hone denga. Uski aur ek kadam badha kar toh dekho.
Ragini- Hum jaante hai dii, jaante hai ki Sid hummse bahut pyaar karte hai lekin hamara darr humme aage badhne hi nahi deta hai.
Nivi- Toh nikal doon iss darr ko apni dil se Ragini, aur Sid ki taraf kadam badhao. Ragini apni aankhe band karo aur mujhe batao tumhe kiya dikhai deta hai.
Ragini closes her eyes. She sees her & Sid's moments which they shared (like there wedding, there first hug, Sid consoling her after knowing her past etc.) a smile comes on her face. She opens her eyes. She was shocked a little.
Nivi- Mujhe ummed hai tumhe sab kucch samaj aa gaya hoga, Ragini. Mujhe kucch kaam hai, main abhi aayi. Nivi goes out, (Self thought) Main jaanti hu Ragini tum bhi Sid se pyaar karti ho, lekin jarrorat thhi toh sirf tumhare darr ko kahtam karne ki,jo ho chuka hai & she smiles.
Ragini again closes her eyes & remember her & Sid's moments. She opens her eyes & say "I love You , Sid". She thinks how to tell this to Sid. She thinks to call Sid but drops the idea. Then
Nandu- Ragini bhabhi aaj dopahar mein kya banana hai.
Ragini- (Coming out of Sid's thought) Nandu, aap chaliye main aati hoon.
She goes down looking lost . Nivi was already there. She noticed and smirked to herself.
Nivi-(Softly in Ragini's ear) Sid ke baare mein soch rahi hoon.
Ragini- (who was lost) Haa...
Nivi chuckels a little.
Ragini comes out of her world & says nahi mera matlab thha ki... (She bluses)
Nivi- Oye hoye, dekho kaise chehra laal hue jaa raha hai.(She said teasing her)
Ragini- Dii... aap bhi na...
Nivi- Tu kucch surprise kuy nahi plan karti Sid ke liye.
Ragini- Surprise, not a bad idea dii.
In evening, Sid & Viren comes and goes to there respective rooms.
He sees Ragini helping Kavya & Naren with there home work ( that 's A,b,c,d) He was mesmerised to see her, She had a smile on her face which was making her look more like an angel. He was staring her from the door. Ragini feels Sid's presence & look towards door. They have an eye lock. Kavya too sees him & shouts, Daida... There eyelock breaks. Kavya and Naren run towards Sid. Sid hugs them and ask kaisi hai meri princess aur mera buddy kaisa.
Kavya- Main thhik hu Daida.
Naren- Main nhi accha hu bade papa (he says in his cute voice)
Aap dono ki padhai ho gayi, he asks. Haa (both say in unison)
He gives them chocolates and they go for playing.
At night, after dinner, he first goes to children's room. he sees them sleeping & kisses them on head. He thinks, Ragini kahan hai lagta hai room mein hongi. He closes the door of children's room & heads towards his room. He opens his room & get shocked. The whole room was decoreted with Candels. He sees Ragini standing infront of him in a beautiful red saree. He was mesmerized by her beauty. He goes to her and says,
Sid- Ragini, yeh sab...
Ragini puts her figures on his leps & says,
Ragini- Aaj sirf main bolungi aur aap sunne ge , She hugs him and says I Love you Sid, I love you alot.
Sid was shocked , he can't beleive the day, the moment for which he was waiting has finally arrived. He hugs her back. The time stops for them. She breaks the hug and tries to go. Sid pulls her towards him and says abb main tumhe kahi nahi jaane dunga. He picks her up & goes to bed. All the candels blow off.
So how is ch-2?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really nice update
comtinue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsm update...
jst luved it...
thanks for pm
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Awesome update
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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dis part was awesum plz update nxt part soon
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CH-3
Its morning, sun rays falls on Sid's face. He opens his eyes and smiles remembering his & Ragini's moments. He watches Ragini coming out after her bath drying her hairs. She has a smile on her face. She goes to dressing table wear 's her mangal sutra and puts sindoor in her maang. She was smiling throughout. Sid notice this and a mischevious smile comes on his face. He goes to Ragini and back hug her.
Sid- Kya baat hai, madam aaj bada smile kar rahi hai. Mere baare mein soch rahi thhi kya.
Ragini blushes a little and then turns to Sid,
Ragini- Mr Patidev mere pass aur bhi bahut cheeze hai sochne ke liye, aur aap ko joging par nahi jaana kya. She says trying to go.
Sid blocks her way & says ab jiski patni itni khoobsurat ho uss pati ka mann bahar jaane ka kaise karenga. Aur waise tum kaho toh aaj jogging kya main aaj office bhi nahi jaata hu. He says coming very close to Ragini. Ragini blushes and pushed him a little. He falls on the bed & Ragini breaks out in a laughter. Sid says Ragini & starts running behind her. They run in whole room & Sid catches her. He comes very close to her. They both can hear there heart beats.
Ragini- Sid, yeh aap kya kar rahe hai, koi aa jaaye ga. Hatiye mujhe kaam hai, mujhe jaane dijiye.
Sid- Aaj koi nahi aaye ga madam kuyki darwaza andar se bandh hai. He gives a mischevious smile to her. He says waise agar tum jaana chahti ho toh jaao lekin usse pahele tumhe mujhe kucch dena hoga.
Ragini- (with nervousness) Matlab, she could sense mischeif in his voice.
Sid- (grinning at her) Ek kiss.(he said pointing towards his lips)
Ragini blushed alot her face went pink. She thinks some thing and says okay but first close your eyes. Sid closes his eyes. Ragini comes close to him & he could feel her warm breath on his face. She was about to kiss but she kiss him on his cheeks and run away pushing Sid a little. Sid blushes & smiles to himself.
Ragini goes to kids room & see them sleeping. She goes and wake them up. Kavya , Naren chalo uttho bacche, school nahi jaana kya.
Kavya- Sonne doon na mumma, bass thodi der aur.
Ragini- Bilcul nahi, Kavya chalo, uttho brush karo, and she tickels kavya a little.
Kavya starts laughing and wakes up. Naren also open his eyes but closes it seeing Ragini. Ragini notices this and goes towards Naren saying arrey Naren toh abhi tak uttha hi nahi & she was about to tickel him when he stands & and says main utth gaya badi maa. Ragini hugs both of them & get them ready. Meanwhile Nivi comes saying chalo baccho nasta tayaar hai. Nivi see Ragini smiling & she understands the reason. She too smiles. Childrens run down for there break fast.
Nivi- Kya baat hai Ragini aaj toh bilkul nayi dulhaan ki tarah lag rahi ho. (She said teasing Ragini)
Ragini- Kya di aap bhi na...
Nivi- Waise Ragini main bahut khush hu tumahare aur Sid ke liye.
Ragini- Thanks Dii, agar aap nahi hoti toh...
She was cut by Nivi,
Nivi- Main kuy nahi hoti, haa and they both share the hug. Chal ab niche chalte hai.
All the family members were having breakfast. When Viren asks Sid,
Viren- Bhai, kal maine aapko bataya thha na, hamari Kolkata wali branch ne SSLM Pvt Ltd. ke saath ek deal sign ki hai.
Sid- Haa, Viren main Kolkatta branch ke supervisor se baat ki hai aur kaha hai unki file bejh dene ko, yaha Mumbai. Ek baar file aa jaye. phir main aur tu usse check kar ke SSLM ke owners ke saath deal sign kar lenge.
Viren - Haa, good idea,bhai.
They both go to office.


Okay, So how is this CH-3. Any one can guess the owners of SSLM Pvt Ltd.

Edited by ck1234 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb...
sslm means swara,sanskaar, laksh maheswari!!??
waitng for nxt part

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