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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Brilliant, simply brilliant 👏
Part 7: Poison part- Sanskar and Ragini's conversation was amazing. The way he tried to explain her that she should give up hurting Laksh and Swara, that Swara doesn't deserve this pain. And yeah he admitted that he started loving her 😳
Are you threatening me Ragini?'
I'm explaining Sanskar. You and I, we are creatures of the night, we have no business with dawn and lights!'

Elixir: the beginning was very sweet 😳 Distance and time, will heal the cracks in their relationship, they already had trust; someday they would have love too. Smiling to herself at the innocent thought Swara woke up, into the warmest of sunlight illuminating her room.
And then back to Poison: Swara got to know that Sanskar joined hands with Ragini and he was behind all this. But he genuinely confessed his feelings to her. He truly loves her.
Wait wait wait. Kavita is Adarsh's wife ?😲
Part 8- Kavita 😡 She just used Sanskar, actually she was having an affair with Adarsh. OMG
She is a heartless woman. Feeling so bad for him and Parineeta 😭
Sanskar lied to her that he doesn't love her anymore. But (thank god Swara is different from the serial) she knew he was lying.
How evil are Kavita and Ragini? Ugh 😡
Car mein bomb? 😲
Swara got to know about Kavita's plan and she lost her memory?
Elixir: Got to see a human side of Ragini. She still cares for Laksh. And he had the guts to reclaim his love for Swara? Ugh 🤔
And once again she reduced him as a pawn. And he believed her, will he try to kill Swara?
How cunning is Ragini !
Part 9- the initial comparison of love and rain was simply brilliant Saku 👏
Swara managed to reach in time to save Sanskar, but unfortunately she got injured.
You described Sanskar's fear of losing her so well.
Love the way she tried to reassure him, by putting a hand on his shoulder. She understands him so well ❤️
How did you know? How can you read me so well, when you don't remember anything about yourself how can you know so much about me?
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Perhaps it's because you belong to me, that sense had made me forget myself and remember you instead.'

The cunning plans of RagLak. Is he still convinced that Swara doesn't love Sanskar? And they would use the drug on her? Oh god.
Aww how sweet of Pari bhabhi, she went to meet Swara. LOL i so agree with Swara, how can Adarsh choose a girl like Kavita over Parineeta?
Then again, Adarsh was not the most intelligent Maheshwari she had met.😆
The last part was mesmerizing SwaSan conversation ❤️
Part 10- Saku how beautifully did you write this? Take a bow 👏
Even after using the drug Swara could only remember Sanskar.
What can I do if you were not worth remembering?' 🥳 This line made my day 😆
Was he spying SwaSan when they kissed each other? 😲
And he revealed everything. He was saying that he planted the bomb in Sanskar's car so proudly. WTH did he realize that he could have died that day? He tried to kill his own brother 😡
Ragini helped SwaSan, yayyy 🥳 I'm so happy.
She got to know the truth, she was convinced that Swara killed her mother. But actually Swara's mom died 😭
The last lines ❤️
You're a goddess for me. A dream I never wish to wake from, a charm I wish would never be lifted, too pure that I fear to touch, too prevailing yet distant, like sunshine, not really a part of my world yet the ruler of it all. [...]
I am a part of you, world is for the rest.'
❤️
So so so beautiful Saku 👏
Your stories are very well written and fab 👏
Sorry for unressing so late




Wow! One of the longest comments I've ever received. Did you love it that much? Here I tried to make Ragini a little less cold and more sharp and witty. So her conversations are always deep and meaningful😊
Sanskar in his revenge and love both was a honest man, he said what he felt straightforwardly⭐️
Lakshya is a lost case here, which I revealed in the start. He is selfish to an extent that he doesn't really care who he hurts in the process...his brother, wife, love anything🤢
Kavita is a manipulative woman, however she reached her ends.
I'm glad you loved most of SwaSan scenes here. I wanted to add more romantic aspect than I had in IK and SQ.
Thank you dear, for all the lovely words, they mean a lot to me and I really appreciate them🤗
It's alright, I always wait for your comments, so the long wait doesn't really matter😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a lovely story. It's honestly one of th b est stories of Swasan I have read so far.
You write so well .
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: amimus

What a lovely story. It's honestly one of th b est stories of Swasan I have read so far.

You write so well .

Thank you dear😊 I'm glad you found it interesting. If you're interested you can check my other works on SwaSan too😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Thank you dear😊 I'm glad you found it interesting. If you're interested you can check my other works on SwaSan too😳

If you can give me the links I surely will read them
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
One of the best story i have read
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Sakura,
Just finished Elixir and am completely drunk on it. Will update once I am able to form coherent sentences.

Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Sakura.😊
Read all the parts together. Awesome update dear.👏 A beautiful mixture of Poison and Elixir. But i just loved the last part so much!!! The last Elixir was exceptionally beautiful.😳
With love. Sorry for the short reply.😳
Aheli.
Sakura24 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Awesome
One of the best story i have read

Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sakura,

Just finished Elixir and am completely drunk on it. Will update once I am able to form coherent sentences.

Nyna

Hi Nyna,
Thank you so much dear. It means a lot to say you are drunk in elixir😳
Love,
Sakura
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Sakura.😊
Read all the parts together. Awesome update dear.👏 A beautiful mixture of Poison and Elixir. But i just loved the last part so much!!! The last Elixir was exceptionally beautiful.😳
With love. Sorry for the short reply.😳
Aheli.

Hi Aheli,
That's so good to hear😊 Thank you very much. I'm glad both elixir and poison had entertained you. If you're interested please check out my other stories too, the index is beneath this post as my signature. I hope you will enjoy them as well. I'm too glad that you replied in whatever length possible dear.
Love,
Sakura

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