Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 44

Originally posted by: ketty84

👏 very well

😭 emotional

😊happy

😛😉 notty

❤️ lovely

👍🏼 ending

Originally posted by: anu91

Loved it...

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Saku 🤗

First, a huge apology! Like I said to you before, I read some parts but at an ungodly hour and I can't leave you a basic "it was nice" comment so wanted to wait and do this properly. So am going to comment on parts I have re-read to take me through the whole thing again! Some comments may be a repeat of parts I have read and commented before on but hope you won't mind my re-review of those!

Chap 3

Loved an angry Sanskaar- I am a weirdo- when powerful man do that sort of anger, I am all mush! 😆.Also the bond Sanskaar has with parineeta germinates here and I liked reading it. The boss-secretary gave me some IPK vibes but in a more finessed way which I liked. The memory recall coming in snatches and Sanskaar avoiding talking about them was good too. And RagYa angles coming through- interesting.

Chap 4

Again the office romance is already gripping but what I love is how Swara is instinctively repelled by Laksh ji! And what a creep- 😡, thrusting twisted memories on her in her state! and that hug at the end with her real knight- ahhh!

Chap 5

So the threads are now weaving together to be able to spot a pattern which the later parts will unearth more. The angst of the scene between SwaSan tugged my heartstrings very effectively. Brooding men are always sexy and you know how I "like" my angst as it is!

Chap 6

Now the past is being unearthed properly. I so love how you portray Ragini, as you did in Ice King/ Snow Queen too and I told you. The hard diamond edge- so well brought out and I like the slight suspense here of not 100% knowing whether Sanskaar is neck deep in for Swara or still in the quest for one up-manship. And the set up has come clear for Sanskaar!

Chap 7

The creatures of the night analogy is something I have always equated with Sanskaar and Ragini- it's in some of Despatches too and it's so effective here. Always like San-Gini equation- 2 on an interesting plane these two. Ah, and here we see the present day guilt in Sanskaar- he was part architect of the downfall. The interaction there was so effective. Love the way he owned his part- the Sanskaar we know and love. Oh and the cliffhanger at the end- whoa! This chapter was special.

Chap 8

Oh Kavita is a piece of work too just like Ragini! Wow- 2 lethal females. And SwaSan- this part was so poignant- it really moved me immensely. Laksh is as useless as we expect him to be- don't want to waste too many lines on him. Nice ending too, the suspense again of what will come next and what Swara thought.

Chap 9

Phew- Swara recalls and sees through Kavita! The lines by Sanskaar about loving Kavita deserve special mention! And the one about "belonging to me so remembering" one too. Loved the Pari-Swara interaction and also the way Swara saved Sanskaar I loved as she was his saviour too just like he is hers. Also funny how when its soul mates and a good writer even a forehead touch is so powerful!

Finale

What a finish! Am blown away. Shai reuniting with Ragini and Ragini's own brand of redemption but tinged with her disillusioned shattered beliefs was amazing. Laksh- 🤢. The SwaSan scenes were of course magical and all in all, I can't express too much but this finale was a fitting one for a whole story that gave us the incredible blend of poison and elixir in a way that truly defines life and awe inspiring loves!

Take a bow Saku- loved Elixir.⭐️ I keep repeating this but you know how to weave tales so well and I am ever hungry for more. Will be eagerly awaiting the next one. Sorry this is so long and late! Loads of love always xxx

You are awesome and so are your imagination ..thank you for sharing it with us...

Loved the finale! And Ragini helping them! What a twist!

Originally posted by: Nusrat-kabir

You are awesome and so are your imagination ..thank you for sharing it with us...

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Loved the finale! And Ragini helping them! What a twist!

Lakshya is still Lakshya but I am glad that Ragini has turned over a new leaf. The best thing is that SwaSan are together!

I absolutely loved the series and am looking forward to your next! Is it going to be soon?

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

What an absolutely gorgeous gorgeous story Saku..

Love,
drama,
suspense,
thrill.
revenge..
and then love.. and that ending..

So SO loved the Elixir.. apt name for such a beautiful story..
❤️

Brilliant, simply brilliant 👏
Part 7: Poison part- Sanskar and Ragini's conversation was amazing. The way he tried to explain her that she should give up hurting Laksh and Swara, that Swara doesn't deserve this pain. And yeah he admitted that he started loving her 😳
Are you threatening me Ragini?'
I'm explaining Sanskar. You and I, we are creatures of the night, we have no business with dawn and lights!'
Elixir: the beginning was very sweet 😳 Distance and time, will heal the cracks in their relationship, they already had trust; someday they would have love too. Smiling to herself at the innocent thought Swara woke up, into the warmest of sunlight illuminating her room.
And then back to Poison: Swara got to know that Sanskar joined hands with Ragini and he was behind all this. But he genuinely confessed his feelings to her. He truly loves her.
Wait wait wait. Kavita is Adarsh's wife ?😲
Part 8- Kavita 😡 She just used Sanskar, actually she was having an affair with Adarsh. OMG
She is a heartless woman. Feeling so bad for him and Parineeta 😭
Sanskar lied to her that he doesn't love her anymore. But (thank god Swara is different from the serial) she knew he was lying.
How evil are Kavita and Ragini? Ugh 😡
Car mein bomb? 😲
Swara got to know about Kavita's plan and she lost her memory?
Elixir: Got to see a human side of Ragini. She still cares for Laksh. And he had the guts to reclaim his love for Swara? Ugh 🤔
And once again she reduced him as a pawn. And he believed her, will he try to kill Swara?
How cunning is Ragini !
Part 9- the initial comparison of love and rain was simply brilliant Saku 👏
Swara managed to reach in time to save Sanskar, but unfortunately she got injured.
You described Sanskar's fear of losing her so well.
Love the way she tried to reassure him, by putting a hand on his shoulder. She understands him so well ❤️
How did you know? How can you read me so well, when you don't remember anything about yourself how can you know so much about me?
[...]
Perhaps it's because you belong to me, that sense had made me forget myself and remember you instead.'
The cunning plans of RagLak. Is he still convinced that Swara doesn't love Sanskar? And they would use the drug on her? Oh god.
Aww how sweet of Pari bhabhi, she went to meet Swara. LOL i so agree with Swara, how can Adarsh choose a girl like Kavita over Parineeta?
Then again, Adarsh was not the most intelligent Maheshwari she had met.😆
The last part was mesmerizing SwaSan conversation ❤️
Part 10- Saku how beautifully did you write this? Take a bow 👏
Even after using the drug Swara could only remember Sanskar.
What can I do if you were not worth remembering?' 🥳 This line made my day 😆
Was he spying SwaSan when they kissed each other? 😲
And he revealed everything. He was saying that he planted the bomb in Sanskar's car so proudly. WTH did he realize that he could have died that day? He tried to kill his own brother 😡
Ragini helped SwaSan, yayyy 🥳 I'm so happy.
She got to know the truth, she was convinced that Swara killed her mother. But actually Swara's mom died 😭
The last lines ❤️
You're a goddess for me. A dream I never wish to wake from, a charm I wish would never be lifted, too pure that I fear to touch, too prevailing yet distant, like sunshine, not really a part of my world yet the ruler of it all. [...]
I am a part of you, world is for the rest.'❤️
So so so beautiful Saku 👏
Your stories are very well written and fab 👏
Sorry for unressing so late