HUM DIL DE CHUKE SANAM- A SwaSan Two Shot *Final Part-Pg 7*

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Neha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

it was awesome. want more

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: bwvianna
Wow!! Loved it! Seriously this two shot is a god given gift after reading various spoilers that are surfacing on the forum since yesterday! It is so beautifully written. It brought a smile to my face. :) absolutely fantastic.! Thank you.

Hope to see some more awesome fanfictions. Please keep writing! :)

-V

Thank u so much for the kind compliments dear! 😳😳 I'm truly happy that it brought a smile to ur face! 😃

Keep smiling always! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: RK-ki-Kaneez
Beautiful

Thnk u! 😳

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Ovi_Tanni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

awesome ts...i loved it very much...u have written it so nicely...wish cvs show it in this way and we get swasan scene more 😊

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Niki my dear...trust me, I was HATING the spoilers about the car bomb etc. Etc. Seemed so outlandish. Coupled with the way the last couple of episodes have been going, it all seemed so very asinine.
But I loved your take. Just loved it. If this is how they are going to show it, as a means for Swara to realize her feelings for Sanskaar, then it will be most welcome 😊 sadly, I trust your writing more than I do the CVs, so not sure if we will get something approaching this. But still. ...

Thanks for the pm 😊

Viji 🤗

Thnks hun! Glad u liked my version of the blasted spoliers! 😉

But seriously dear, I totally side with u; even I'm getting fed up of all these endless drama which seems to make no sense whatsoever! And might I add that I really am a very patient person when it comes to these kind of slow burn stories... But looks like this show really is hell bent on testing that theory! 🥱

I mean they should at least give us some respite between bombarding us with one depressing sequence after another, right? But ugh these Cvs! 😡 Kuch tho acha dhikathe diwali special mein!! 🥱

I dont mind the current MU track and I'm not even asking for a all out confession b/w swasan but at least a few cute scenes b/w our favs to appease our shipper hearts would have done the trick... But nope; these kanjoos CVs won't even give that to us! They want even more drama with bomb blast! ugh! 🥱

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Monica_Suhasini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

🤗 🤗 u too tc hun!

hi darling🤗...love you for this❤️

as u told dhamakedhar thi update👍🏼

i soo loved it nikki...awesomeness ki dhukaan

ragini😡 thankgod swara saw her true colours

swaras desperation to talk to him⭐️

The realization that he was alive and apparently healthy literally knocked the breath out of her and she started to choke

poor sanskaar he z worrying thinking that she rejected his gifts😭 but what a beautiful surprise he got❤️...completely glorifying⭐️

He noticed that she was wearing the peach-pink lehenga he had carefully selected for her after rejecting a whole lot of so called exclusive lehenga collection which was shown to him... He wanted the best of best for her and he wouldn't have stopped until he found the perfect piece for his Swara... And he had zeroed in on that particular lehenga after a hour long search, knowing that the lovely color paired with delicate pearls would greatly compliment his beloved's already radiant complexion. Now looking at her gorgeous form, he knew he had made the right choice.

above lines are completely brilliant...loved loved loved it👏👏👏 you have written so well

dilwala will surely get his dulhaniya! ... atlast fullfilled nikki⭐️🥳

overall it was superb...thanku very much for the pm🤗

Edited by suhasini2727 - 9 years ago

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: iam-in-love
superb update... 👍🏼 I was eagerly waiting for ur update...

Its jst awsm...
Hw dare Ragini... ?? 😡
U vry well described Swara's fear of losing Sanskar... I loved SwaSan's hug...
Really awsm update...

Is it really d last part ? 😔 I mean , then wt about Ragini ? She at least deserve a tight slap frm Swara yaar...

Thnk u dearie!😳😳 I'm really happy that u liked this update! 😃

@red: Hmm... dear I haven't actually thought of what happens next... But I guess together we can imagine that this time Ragini will be getting lot more than a mere slap! 😉 Most probably this time the police will be involved as using explosives to cause harm to somebody in a public place endangering other's lives too in the process, is a totally different sort of crime than what she had been committing earlier... This time Ragini should either be jailed or should be committed to an asylum... Nothing less than that would do!

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: manasie23
Niki it was actually totally different than what I was expecting but a pleasant surprise... I loved the whole thing.. now that I think about it your version makes better sense... Loved it...

Do write more..😳

Thnk u huny! 😃 Glad u liked my version! 😳

I actually had got an overall idea from all the reviews that most of the readers who read the first part were expecting a sanlak face-off and a confession from Swara, during the evening pooja time... But the problem was that I had actually written n kept this as an OS, so couldn't go back and alter the ending...😳 Moreover I really wanted to make some sense of the whole bomb blast drama which is going to come up on our screen in few days... The spoilers are really eating my brains! 🥱 🤢😆