HUM DIL DE CHUKE SANAM- A SwaSan Two Shot *Final Part-Pg 7*

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Awesome Niki
I loveddd it
Fantastic+Fabulous= FANTABULOUS👏👏
Superb one!
Wish they show it this way in the show! Atleast we'll get a true SwaSan hug

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Zaalima_5

@Zaalima_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

nice update..😊

loved it.

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: medhasankar
Read the two parts at once Nik...
Lovely descriptions.

loved the distance caused..and the final union.

and mad cackle. wicked witch.

Very well written.

Love--
Medha.

Medha 🤗

Thanx hun! Glad u liked it. 😃 And yeah seriously, it looks like I'm inordinately in love with the word 'cackle'!! 😆😆 I'm using it quite often these days! 😆

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Wow!! Loved it! Seriously this two shot is a god given gift after reading various spoilers that are surfacing on the forum since yesterday! It is so beautifully written. It brought a smile to my face. :) absolutely fantastic.! Thank you.

Hope to see some more awesome fanfictions. Please keep writing! :)

-V

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer
Awesome Niki
I loveddd it
Fantastic+Fabulous= FANTABULOUS👏👏
Superb one!
Wish they show it this way in the show! Atleast we'll get a true SwaSan hug

Aww thank u so much hun! 😳 😳I'm truly happy u enjoyed it ! 😃😃

N yeah even I seriously hope that this bomb blast drama leads to lot of awesome swasan scenes in future...⭐️⭐️ Coz past few eppys were really yawn-worthy... 🥱

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Niki my dear...trust me, I was HATING the spoilers about the car bomb etc. Etc. Seemed so outlandish. Coupled with the way the last couple of episodes have been going, it all seemed so very asinine.

But I loved your take. Just loved it. If this is how they are going to show it, as a means for Swara to realize her feelings for Sanskaar, then it will be most welcome 😊 sadly, I trust your writing more than I do the CVs, so not sure if we will get something approaching this. But still. ...

Thanks for the pm 😊

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: kulsum_5
nice update..😊
loved it.

Thank u dear. 😃

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Silpa

@iam-in-love

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

superb update... 👍🏼 I was eagerly waiting for ur update...

Its jst awsm...
Hw dare Ragini... ?? 😡
U vry well described Swara's fear of losing Sanskar... I loved SwaSan's hug...
Really awsm update...

Is it really d last part ? 😔 I mean , then wt about Ragini ? She atleast deserve a tight slap frm Swara yaar...

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Niki it was actually totally different than what I was expecting but a pleasant surprise... I loved the whole thing.. now that I think about it your version makes better sense... Loved it...

Do write more..😳

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piccola1

@piccola1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

What a heart warming end to a lovely realization by our golden couple. 😳😳

Loved it, Niki !! ❤️

Wish it could happen on telly..but dont think we will have that good luck to see it ...Never mind, you've created it and placed it in our hearts for us to cherish.. Thank You !🤗