Swasan ss:True Love Always Win (part8-pg23) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Huh!!! Well written.. Update soon... Its very nice.. A pure relation... No words to say as I can feel the pain of swara now..
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Fabulous
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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wow its awesome sonu..
sorry itna late reply ke liye..
but love the concept..
Swasan sepration and swara accident was well explained.
would love to read more..
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Wow totally different concept and plotting
Loved your story
Excited to read the next update
Pm me also if possible
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Woow..yaar..awsum..loved it..diff story..plZ do pm me wen u update the nxt part.
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Nice nd interesting concept..
all d best..
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Totally awesome update...
Loves it so much...
The entries was perfectly awesome...
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Loved it! Read all the parts & it will b a treat to watch a track like this in the show where swara ll act like a lil girl & sanskar ll Tc of her by showering his love & affection helly to hai hi baccho jalsi love hope u wrote the diary entries & show her pain she got in past! Now I jst hope sanskar ll heal all her wounds .. Looking forward to the next updat!
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Nice ff
Good concept
Well written
Waiting for next update
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thank u guys for appriciation.i m glad u like it.here is the nxt part.hope u like ths also.😊

part-4

sanskar staring at swara's sleeping form,he put loose hairs behind her ear -'kyu swara,kyu?har waqt bak bak,bak bak par jo baat karni chahiye thi wohi nehi kia.mujhe bata sakte the na ki tum kya feel karti ho,kuch to bol sakte the,kyu nehi bataya.mera dil hamesha se sehi tha.maine mehsoos kia tha ki tum kya feel karti ho,main tumhe thora waqt dena chahta tha taki tum apne feelings samajh sako.jab tum chali gayi sabne kaha tum mujhse pyar nehi karti,mujhe dhoka dia,laksh ne vi mujhe ye sab manane ki koshis kia ki wo aur tum ab...tsk.par main nehi mana.sabko ye dikhaya ki main tumse nafrat karta hu,par tumari kasam tum hamesha mere dil me thi,pata nehi kab se dhund raha hu tumhe aur mili vi to kis halat me??kyu swara kyu??kyu intezar nehi kia mera...sirf ek divorce paper vej dia!mujhse baat karti,mujhe batati kya hua tha?kyu laga tumhe ki main tumpe bharosa nehi karunga...u knw na i trust u.mujhe kehke to dekhti'..he didnt realize whn he strtd crying.

suddenly sanskar realize something & again open swara's diary-'iska matlab mera sakh sehi tha,jab swara ne mujhe bataya ki laksh sirf dost banke rehna chahta tabh hi mujhe doubt hua.swara ne diary me likha uss din kya hua wo usse yaad nehi ha,wo kaise laksh ke sath..matlab ragini aur laksh dono ne kuch gadbad kia ha..aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki swara ko kuch yaad nehi,zarur kuch baat hai..mujhe pata lagana hoga,par kaise..uss incidnt ko paanch mahine ho chuke hai.'

kissing swara's forhead sanskar held her hand in his-'kuch vi ho swara,main tumhe thik karunga,tum firse wo purani wali meri swara banogi.main tumhe ghar leke jaunga wovi pure izzat ke sath ye wada hai tumare sanskar ka.'

next day sanskar get up 1st,he was making breakfast when pia cm to meet swara.sanskar told her she z still sleeping & invite her to join in breakfast with thm.swara cm to dining room,rubbing her eyes-gdmrng!tum kya kar rahe ho?'.

sanskar-toast & omlet bana raha hu breakfast k liye.dekho pia aye ha tumse milne'.swara & pia meet with each other,swara shwed her room-her toys everythng.

sanskar-swara ready ho jao,fir breakfast thn aaj ghumne jana hai,remembr..'

swara-oh haa!main to vul gayi,main abhi taiyar hoke aati hu'.she was going to wasroom whn sanskar hold her hand,take her in4nt wadrob & choose a simple blue frock for her.'aaj ye pehenoge',swara nodded & smiling...

later at breakfast table sanskar waiting for pia & swara whn pia cm & told him 'swara ne kaha agar tum swara k sath breakfast karna chahte ho to usse pehle dhundo'.sanskar at 1st shook his head thn both laughed.

sanskar-to tum strt karo main swara ko leke aata hu'.pia-nehi pehle tumlog ajao fir eksath khayenge..'

sanskar cm to swara's room & finding her-'swara kaha ho,jaldi samne aao,kaha dhundu main tumhe'.he heard her gigling sound.sanskar eyes bcm moist,he dnt knw wheather to glad tht swara z smiling or to sad at her condition.swara voice brought him back from his tho8-'mujhe toast omlet nehi khana,mujhe noodles khana ha,pehle wo banake do fir bahar aaungi'..

sanskar-haa baba,bana dunga,pehle samne to aao.kaha ho tum...main to tumhe dhund hi nehi paraha'...

swara-dhundo,dhundo..main nehi bataungi ki main cupboard me chupi hu'..sanskar smiled at her innocence thn open the cupboard.swara was shocked-haww!tumne mujhe dhunda kaise'...sanskar smiled at her,give her his hand,swara take it & cm out from cupboard.

swara-par main nehi jaungi,mujhe noodles khana hai' & stand thr crossing her arms...

sanskar-acha baba thik hai,tum pehle chalo to sehi,main fatafat noodles banake lata hu.ab khush'?she gv him a bright smile.

at dining table swara cm ,sat beside pia,sanskar made noodles & gv it to swara,

swara-aaa!khila do mujhe...'

pia-ye kya swara,har baat pe itna shaytani kyu?tum aise to nehi the.. good girls aise nehi karte,aur log bad girls k sath baat nehi karte.'

swara's eyes bcm moist-sorry,looking at sanskar.main good girl hu,mujhse baat karna mat chorna,main tumhe tang nehi karungi..'

sanskar-cupping her face,nehi swara tum jo chahe mujhe keh sakti ho,shaytani kar sakti ho..tumhe haq ha.&pia pls swara jaisa chahti hai waisa karne do,main janta hu tum usse hurt nehi karna chahti thi par firvi wo jo chahe,jaisa chahe kar sakti ha,main hamesha sath rahunga uske..mujhe acha lagta hai'.swara hugged sanskar tightly 'tum bohot bohot bohot ache ho,ab khilao mujhe'.sanskar feed her nodles whn swara making faces at pia..thy laughed out at swara's antics..

after breakfast pia ask 'aaj ka programe kya ha sanskar?'.

sanskar-kuch nehi aaj pura din sirf swara aur main delhi ghumna ha'.

pia-ok thn,best of luck.u guys njy.if need anythng thn inform me.& ya sanskar jo main kehna chahti thi,aapne kuch socha i mean swara kab thik hogi wo to kuch keh nehi sakte,aur aap kab tak aise apna ghar pariwar kaam chorke yaha rahenge..dekhiye main ye to nehi janti ki aapke family main kya hua tha,kyu uss raat swara aise ro rahi thi..par i think aapko swara ko ghar leke jana chahiya,uski pariwar k paas jaha usne apni rozki zindagi bitayi,Dr ne kaha tha ache mahol chahiye,uske apno k sath, hamesa khush rahe...agar swara apne pariwar k sath rahi to sayed kuch improvemnt ho,apne log,jana pehchana mahol...baki aapki marzi.& she went from thr.

Sanskar thought himslf-sayed pia thik keh rahi thi,par main kaise swara ko leke jau,'apna' huh!waha koi nehi ha jo swara ko samajh ne ki koshis kare,sab uss ke naam se vi nafrat karte hai,aise main swara ko apne pariwar k sath acha environmnt kaise milegi?nehhi,main swara ko uss stressful jagah me nehi la jaa sakta'...

sanskar cm out from his thought by swara's voice-'mera baal banake do na,mujhse nehi ho raha'.sanskar saw her pouty face & chuckled.he made her hair.

later thy went to sight seeing,monuments,parks,ate ice cream,velpuri & after tht thy cm bk with pizza percel from pizza hut.

sanskar received a call from DP who informed him to go bk kolkata & join work asap as he is needed urgently.sanskar was thinking wht to do as he cudnt risk swara's life at any cost neither he cn tell the truth .whn he entered swara's room,he saw swara was staring at sky & crying silently.

sanskar-'swara kya hua,kyu ro rahi ho'.swara-'aaj itna masti ki na ab pair me dard ho raha hai'

sanskar-'ya baat ha,lao main massage kar deta hu'.both sat on couch,he took her leg on his lap & massaging whn swara say-'ek baat bolu'.sanskar -hmm.

swara-'aaj jab hum park me the maine dekha bohot sare bache waha apne maa,baba,dada,dadi,bhai sabke sath khel rahe the.kya mere maa baba,family koi nehi hai?'

sanskar stoped massaging,gestured swara to lie down on his lap,she did & said-'tumhe unse milna ha' .swara-hmm.

sanskar-wo yaha nehi rehte,bohot dur rehkar kaam kare hai.tum chalogi mere sath waha..hum waha jayenge,unhe batayenge ki swara unse milna chahti ha fir tum unse mil lena.chalogi?'.

swara-tum to rahoge na mere sath to main chalungi'..

sanskar-ok.nw b a gd girl & sleep.hum kal jayenge.

after swara sleeped sanskar took her on bed & lied her down.giving her a forhead kiss sanskar lied beside her.he thought himslf 'chahe kuch ho jaye main tumhe thik karke rahunga.ghar me koi tumara sath to nehi dega lakin maa aur dida zarur samjhegi.mujhe unse baat karna hoga par pehle main bade papa ko phn karta hu.'

sanskar in cal-'bade papa,actually mera ek frnd kolkata araha hai,business k lia.i told him to stay at our house par wo thora reserve hai,apne privacy me hi rehna chahta ha,wo kolkata 1st time araha hai.usne mere zindagi k wo 5saal mujhe help kia.to iss bar mera time hai.jab tak wo rahega main uske sath mere dumdum wale flat me rahunga..aur uska kaam me help vi ho jayga if he needed anythng.&pl gharme sabko keh dijiyega koi disturb ya tension na kare,agar mujhse kuch chahiye to mujhe phn karle main ghar ajaunga.

DP-tum ghar me rehtahi kitna ho sanskar,phir vi thik hai,main sabko keh dunga..

after phn cal sanskar thought-'ye kaam to ho gaya,kal kolkata jatehi sabse pehle dida & maa ke sath baat karna hoga...'

prcp-swara's union with maa-dida.family moments.sujata want to meet with sanskar.he cm to MM whn dida stay with swara.pia sent a msg to sanskar to knw abt swara's condition bt sanskar forget his phn at dining & busy in a convo with adarsh.ragini see tht msg.

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